Hello, this story is great so far. I really like the plot. It will be interesting to see how Harry handles not being the centre of attention anymore. Just a small question: Was Hermione put in Gryffindor again?
Anyway, please continue this story, it is very entriguing and I can't wait to read more!Author's Response: Hello there.
I always forget someone in a story, bad habit of mine.
I'm glad you like the story so far, and I'll be continuing it for sure. But I have that many wip's so will try and get to it asap.
Thanks for the read and review. Report Review
Cliffy? No way! That was so mean! Ah well, let's just say that I will be stalking this site until the next chappie comes out.Author's Response: Haha i know it was ;) It will be out soon enough! Thanks for reviewing xx Report Review
Very interesting. I like the way this is going, keep up the good work.Author's Response: luv_me_hate_me,
thank you for the review! more is coming soon,
Gin-gin Report Review
This story will remain in my heart forever. I am definately adding you as one of my favourite authors and I was just wondering would you take a peek at my newest fanfic 'Play, If You Dare'. It's a Draco/Hermione too and I would love it if you could review. Pwetty pwetty pwease with a cherry on top?Author's Response: Most definitely I will read your story! I will go there as soon as I am done answering reviews!! I am so very happy you liked my story and thank you so so much for your kind words! I am working on something new right now so keep your eyes pealed! :) Report Review
I read about this story on the forums and it is really good! It should definately win the challenge!Author's Response: Wow, your review has totally made my day!!! =D It means so much to me :}
Can I just say I can't believe you think it's that good! I hope it does win, but I won't get my hopes up as there are loads of amazing writers here at HPFF but your opinion means so much to me XD
It's like I won already when one person thinks so! XD
~BlameItOnTheNargles Report Review
One nore chapter? No! You are an awesome writer!Author's Response: No worries, I plan on writing more, I am writing something now! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Oh yes! Brilliant chapter!Author's Response: Thank you my sweet! Report Review
I love this type of story. The plotline is excellent, very well described, wonderful description of the characters! I always found Ron a bit of a git but this has made me descide on a yes! Keep writing, this story is very good.Author's Response: Thank you :) I never liked Ron, so his role in my stories is always a little off. I'll post the next chapter soon! Report Review
I simply LOVE the plotline. It is different and very intriguing. Can't wait for the next chappie! Report Review
Oooh, I'm lovin' the plot!
I'd like Blaise Zabini to be Draco's best friend, pwetty pwease?
10/10 Report Review
Woza! Brill chappie, I like it so much!
10/10Author's Response: Thankyou so much for your review and I'm glad you liked the chapter so much, I mean, 10/10, wow! At the moment I'm currently working on a challenge but hopefully after I've finished I can continue with the Mind Games, thanks for sticking with it! :) Report Review
You gave me a birthday present! My birthday is today so... thank-yooouuu!
Keep writing super stories, you are THE best!Author's Response: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR luv_me_hate_me, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! Report Review
Once again, brill one-shot. 'Moonlight Sonata' leaft me in tears (but in a good way), it was so beautiful! And this was just as beautiful. Love all of your stories. You are one of my favourite authors! Report Review
OMiGosh! It's ouuuttt! I basically screamed when I noticed it, AT THE TOP OF THE PAGE! Lol, another brill chapter, as always.Author's Response: Why thanks! I'm glad you weren't disappointed with it Report Review
OK, my answers are:
1. I like everything about the story. I love the way you described Ron's thoughts of Luna, so sweet.
2. There was nothing I didn't like about this awesome story!
3. I thought that you kept the characters perfectly to their characters. Hermione scoffing about Ron's greediness. Ron acting a bit dumb. Harry giving the word of advice. Luna being so... Luna!
4. I loved the ending. I found the "That's nice" totally Luna!
5. What did I think of the story overall? Amazing, awesome, extradonary, sweet, beautiful, gorgeous, super and... extra-extradonary!
Love your stories. Please write more! Report Review
Amazing storyy! I haven't been able to review in any of the other chapters (even though I dearly wanted to) because I have been reading this story on my mobile (which you can't post reviews on :( ) I love you and this story. Please keep writing. Suspense is in the air!Author's Response: THank you!! I really appriciate the review:) And suspense is ALWAYS in the air, dahling!;)
Emily x Report Review
Ohmigosh! I nearly screamed when I heard that the next chapter was out and then I read it and oh... SUPERCALAFRAGILISTICIPIALIDOTIOUS! Random word I made to show how AWESOME chapters are, including you.Author's Response: LOVE the random word! Thanks so much for reading, next chapter is waiting for validation! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Oh dear goodness! Hermiiionee! Loving your chapter, as always.Author's Response: Thanks:) And also thanks sooo much for always reviewing! Report Review
Yes! The Titanic leaves me in tears every time!!! Oh watta cliffhanger. How could you? Aha! Let's just say that I'll be stalking this site until the next chappie comes out! Report Review
I'll be so sad when this is finished. Such a sweet chapter!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. I thought the wedding was a bit iffy but it seems to have gone alright thank goodness! It really does seem like yesterday I published this story and it'll be over soon! Ah, crazy! Thanks for the review :) x Report Review
Phew! I'm so glad that this is finally out! Keep writing your amazing story! Report Review
My goodness. I only started this story today but read all 16 chapters anyway! I feel so happy for Kira and Blaise. Together for eternity! So sweet! And Draco and Hermione? I just can't explain how much I love that pairing! And you made me love it even more! I honestly thought that Draco was dead. I had tears in my eyes! Then when he came back to life, honestly, I jumped up off the chair I was sitting on and hit my head! It hurt alot, yeah, sure it did, but it was for good reasons! Will you write about Draco and Hermione's wedding, please? Just for me, and a basket full of chocolates?Author's Response: Wowzers thank you! I'm so glad that I caused that effect although I'm sorry that I made you hit your head. Yep, the next chapter (which I'm putting in validation now) is the wedding :) thank you again! :) x Report Review
That devious (or not so) witch! Great chapter! Report Review
This story is SO worth completing! For your first Dramione, this is pretty good!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Oooo! I really like the plot line in this. Report Review
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