you're story is so good.
I've read the whole thing, and i just urgh! Why does Lupin have to be so gosh darn NICE!
And poor Sirius. He just wants James!
But yeah, aha good storyAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry for the seemingly-infinite hiatus, but the next chapter is currently in validation! Thanks for reading! Report Review
this was very good, and dark
it broek my heart ahaAuthor's Response: I honestly didn't anticipate it being so dark but that's how it turned out. Thank you for saying that you liked it! It was hard to imagine someone like George being so sad but I think that was half the fun in writing it.
I'm sorry that it broke your heart, however as a writer, that is a huge compliment. You were moved by this. And that is something special.
Thanks so much for your review,
Joop. Report Review
this is really amazing...i love the way you describe things in such detail!Author's Response: Thank you. I really try to get the picture that I have in my mind onto the page. Of course, I can't tell everything. I make up really elaborate pictures of what's going on in my mind.
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