{reviewid: 2753923, reviewer: 'Harry_Potter_345'}
22nd November 2012:
Awew cute ... I really liked it. Good job :D
Author's Response: Yayayayay! Thankyou :)
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5th November 2012:
Its a good beginning but when the characters talk, because they are teenagers, you should use "i'll" not "i will". I guess it sounds more story like that way.
Author's Response: Ohh, thanks. I guess i just got so used to writing it that way... I'll make sure to keep that in mind.
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30th August 2012:
Hm wonder whats ganna happen next.
Great story and i hope u post soon :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
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29th August 2012:
I like the story.. Its really good and i like the house :P anyways good job. Hope u post soon
Author's Response: Thank you :) I like the house too... It's like, I don't know, my dream house :P
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29th August 2012:
Its a good beginning and i liked the length of the story... Good job
Author's Response: Yeah, thank you so much!
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29th July 2012:
Aw thats so cute :')
Author's Response: thank you
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{reviewid: 2724943, reviewer: 'Harry_Potter_345'}
27th July 2012:
Aw thats so cute :D nice chapter... Hope you post soon
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so happy you liked it. I was wondering what people would think about the Damon-Jane story.
The next chapter should be up soon. Keep a watch out for it! =)
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17th July 2012:
Lol... I wanna see how all this ends :) good job
Author's Response: haha, thanks so much :) well you should have another chapter soon, and hopefully you like that as well
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12th July 2012:
IRON MAN ALL THE WAY
Author's Response: Don't worry, right now he's in the lead.
And Lou thank's you for voting for Iron Man. And James is sitting in a corner pouting.
~
Asteroid X
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11th July 2012:
:O CUTE... Nice story... Could use a bit more detail :) Good job
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D I'll try to put in more detail :)
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9th July 2012:
Awww that was so cute :) o and i LOVE the length of the story.
Good job :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
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9th July 2012:
CRAP...can't believe she did that :$
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19th June 2012:
Aw that was sooo cute
Author's Response: Aww, I know right?! I loved writing this chapter and I'm really happy you liked it!
Thank you so much!=)
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18th June 2012:
Really short but its good
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17th June 2012:
Aw. I just read the whole story today, its not a big deal or anything but i have a exam on Moday and i didnt study at all...it all you fault for making the story was so good and addicting... PLEZ PLEZ UNDATE SOON... :)
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15th June 2012:
Aw cute chapter... Hope u update soon
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11th June 2012:
Lol the dinner was funny... Good job
Author's Response: It was definitely my favorite to write. Thanks for reviewing! I hope you keep reading :)
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10th June 2012:
wooow... nice chapter
Author's Response: Thanks, i try. lol.
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5th June 2012:
CRAP!!! Nice chapter
Author's Response: thank you! :D ♥
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5th June 2012:
Ah. Does James like Cece??? anyways, it was a good chapter.
Author's Response: you'll have to wait and see, thank you (:
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3rd June 2012:
Good story but its kinda confusing when the story goes from present to past... Other then that good job...
Ya im the first review fOr this chapter :D AYWAYS. BYEEE
Author's Response: im sorry it is so confusing :( look to the tense. sometimes I confuse myself but mostly the present is written in past tense and the past in written in present tense. wow. i just realised how messed up that is when i wrote it :/ anywho, i hope that helps.
thank you :)
~siren song
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1st June 2012:
:O wonder wats ganna happen in the next chapter??? Anyway the story is really gOod and its funny.
Author's Response: Haha, you'll just have to wait and see ... I'm going to give you the hint of brooms ;) and thank you :)
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27th May 2012:
-.- I hate cliffhangers.ANYWAYS. the story is good but the chapter are really short, other then that good job
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I am making the next chapter longer. :)
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22nd May 2012:
Good but really short :/
Author's Response: Heheh thank you. It'll be longer next time, I promise :)
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16th May 2012:
Aw thats so cute but in a creepy way... ANYWAYS... Its really good :)
Author's Response: Yeah it is a creepy sort of cute. Thank you so much for the positive review!! I really appreciate it.
~LillyLover22~
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