OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD.
With that excessive screaming out of the way (I think), OH MY GOD. I'm pretty sure this is my first time actually... saying anything here, so I feel kind of bad. (Unless I am horribly mistaken, I tend to get confused easily and forget things... I blame my parents.)
But in any case, I nearly cried while reading this just because it was so amazingly aghlyfadaghaghaltlhalhyggg!
And I honestly think that this is a great ending to this story, it just seems perfect for it. I honestly don't know what to say except that the whole story is/was (?) amazing, and I loved it all, and I just CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER. Excluding the epilogue, I guess, though.
OH MY GOSH. OH MY DEAR GOSH.
It was just so amazing and I'll probably go on a whole rant about just why this was so amazing, but that would bore you, so I'll just leave on this last note:
THIS. STORY. WAS. SO. WONDERFULLY. PERFECTLY. FANTASTICALLY. AMAZINGLY. AWESOMELY. WONDERFUL-PERFECT-FANTASTIC-AMAZING-AWESOME. AND. IT. WAS. AN. HONOR. TO. BE. ABLE. TO. READ. IT!
Thank you.Author's Response: Don't feel bad for this being your first time reviewing! I appreciate you sharing your thoughts at all because I really do love hearing what people think :)
I'm so so happy you liked the chapter! I was so worried that the way I was ending this story would annoy people. But yeah, it's over, I can't believe it either.
Thank you so much for liking the story and sticking with it through all my shoddy updates. I'm honored that you read it and so pleased you liked it as much as you did :)
-Rebecca Report Review
^ my mind after reading that, OHMYGOSH. I have no words, really, because I love this story and I'm just so happy and I feel bad for Fred, in a way.
AND OHMYGOSH, again, CORINNE FORGAVE HIM... mostly, but still. The principle remains, and I just love this story so much and two more chapters? What?
I'm sorry, my brain is a jumble of random thoughts right now, the point being: THIS. WAS. AMAZING.Author's Response: Ah yay I'm so happy you like the story! And I'm also happy you feel bad for Fred because that was kind of my aim for this story.
BUT YES CORINNE FORGAVE JAMES! Who would've thought that grudge bag that she normally carries over her shoulder would be let go of?
Thank you so much for liking the story and leaving such a lovely review :)
-Rebecca Report Review
I think one thing. Well, two.
First thought: OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD, OH MY FREAKING GOD.
Second thought: Hehehe, I have an idea of why Natalie and James broke up. Something to do with Al... If I'm right, I will literally start jumping up and down.
Third thought: (Yeah, there's another) OH MY GOD, what the heck did Natalie tell James? I shall find out soon enough, hopefully...
Fourth thought: (Last one, I think) I think I know why Summer was kissing Summer - BLAH, Al - but not why Al was kissing Summer. If that makes any sense to you.
Wow, I think this was the first time I've ever reviewed your story, so here. If it wasn't, then here.
Awesome (as always) It's kinda interesting seeing this in James' point of view.Author's Response: thoughts on first thought: please sweetheart, im not god. i just act and look like one.
thoughts on second thought: well, we'll see whether you're right in the next chapter ~ hopefully we'll have you jumping up and down :P
thoughts on third thought: yeps, we'll be finding out what natalie said to james in the next chapter, but thats not even a big part of it ~ they're screaming at each other about other things.
thoughts on fourth thought: hmm... well, the reason al was kissing summer is a bit weirder than the reason summer was kissing al ~ it all gets explained in the next chapter, anyway :D
thank you for the review, and im glad you liked james' POV ~ i may do another chapter in it in the future, but im not sure yet.
ellie :) xx Report Review
I really, really, REALLY like this. I read all 13 of the current chapters in like two hours.
I don't like Caleb, but I do! I like his name and he seems... nice... but I don't like him in a way. I don't know why. Addie should break up with him, because we all know she loves Al.
PS You should feel honored for this review. I never review. Ever.Author's Response: Thank you! Wow, that's fast reading! Yes, that seems to be the common feelings toward Caleb. You love him, but you don't love him with Addie. I do feel honored for your review! I'm glad that you did :D Report Review
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