Hi! Let me just start by saying that this is my first ever review, so not sure really what to write... but I just wanted to tell you that I love your story, I couldn't stop laughing, James and Lily are so freaking adorable! Also, I was a bit confused about the order of the chapters - chapter 3 they got engaged then chapter 4 was before they started dating? Not sure if this was a mistake or not so thought I'd point it out. Anyway love your story, can't wait for the next chapter :) Report Review
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