OHMYGOD. SHE KNOWS.

JUST OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG.

IM SO HAPPY BECAUSE SHE KNOWS AND SAD BECAUSE THEY HAVE FALLEN OUT BUT OHMYGOD.

this is just woop.

but yeah, this was a great chapter! haha, can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: SHE KNOWS AHHH!!! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I'll try to update soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing :D

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asdfghjklasdfghjklasdfghjklasdfghjkl.

eugh eugh eugh eugh eugh eugh eugh eugh.

pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft.

urgh urgh urgh urgh urgh urgh urgh urgh urgh.

(have i shown my immense displeasure for dan the idiotic frying pan- that doesn't make sense- yet, or need i continue?)

i just, urgh. she's not allowed to still have feelings for him. does she not understand that her and james are going to fall in love?! and bleugh, he annoys me. "make me a sandwich." *pouts.* "where's my tea?" *pouts.* he's so demanding. like a bull.

(that doesn't make sense either.)

and they were always arguing! i don't care if they were in love. how can't she see how bad they were together?!

(i get so attached to fictional characters- i like, drown in my own tears when snape dies.)

but yeah. this was a really good chapter- despite how much i hate dan- and i'm looking forward to the next one.

(i think james is going to be really jealous, to be quite honest.)

UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: asdfghjklasdfghjklasdfghjklasdfghjkl.

eugh eugh eugh eugh eugh eugh eugh eugh.

pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft pfft.

urgh urgh urgh urgh urgh urgh urgh urgh urgh.

yeah, i'm pretty sure something like that shows how much you don't like dan the... frying pan? (yeah, that doesn't make sense.)

no, i'm pretty sure that aimee doesn't understand that james and her are supposed to be together... and i'm pretty sure that james doesn't know that either. he was very demanding, and aimee just put up with it all ~ that's one of the reasons that he ended up leaving and they were so unhappy.

(yeah, i wasn't aware that bulls were demanding creatures.)

she didn't see how bad they were because she was mad about him... so she forced herself to forget about everything else. and they didn't argue every second of every day.

(the first time dumbledore died i was in such terrible hysterics that i had to throw the book down and lie down so i didn't choke.)

thank you so much :) and dan is in the next chapter, but guess what? he's barely in the one after that :D

(well, we'll see in the next chapter.)

thank you! much love, my darling,

ellie :) xx

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EEP. EEP. EEP. EEP.

they are so perfect for each other and gah. like, seriously.

james needs to trust her, they need to realise they love each other and they need to get together. SIMPLE. BANG. BOOM.

this chapter was fabberoo and you should update soon. haha.

(i'm half asleep. ignoring the messinessoaks shortness of this.)

Author's Response: OOP. OOP. OOP. OOP.

do you really think they're perfect for each other? that's interesting...

summer needs to give james a reason to trust her, first, and yeah, the whole realising they're in love thing would probably help with the whole shebang... quite a lot.

thank you! the next chapter is finished, so will be up soon :D

(it's a lovely review, don't be silly :P)

ellie :) xx

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was it james? i bet it was james that she lost her.. thing with.

SHE CAN'T MEET UP WITH DAN. NO. WHAT IF LILY SEES HER, THINKS SHE IS CHEATING ON JAMES BECAUSE MAYBE HE TRIES TO KISS HER, SO LILY TELLS JAMES AND THEY HAVE A BIG ARGUMENT AND I CRY. THAT IS UNACCEPTABLE. EEP.

but yeah, don't like dan. he was obviously bad for her, especially if they argued all the time then didn't try fix it. and what if he met someone on his travels, and she see them together and are they not thinking about the dangers of being in public together.

asdfghjkl. too much.

this was a really good chapter and i can't wait for the next one, UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: ahaha, was it indeed? that actually wasn't supposed to be a big part of the chapter, but everyone seems interested in that :P

AHAHA, SHE IS MEETING UP WITH DAN BECAUSE I AM EVIL AND LIKE MEDDLING WITH PEOPLE'S LIVES AND UPSETTING MY LOVELY READERS. AHAHA. AND THERE IS NOTHING YOU CAN DO ABOUT IT... AND IT WOULD BE REALLY BAD LUCK IF LILY HAPPENED TO BE THERE TOO.

aimee is so concerned with the fact that dan has come back that she isn't thinking about how bad it would be if they got seen in public together. dan was bad for her, but at the same time they were nuts for each other. so it was all just one big mess that was kind of a shame.

ahaha, it is a little.

thank you so much, and the next chapter of this is in the queue as i write this!

ellie :) xx

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ERMAHGERD.

eep, can't believe i just wrote that.

but anyways, OHMYGOD.

that be some serious daddeh issues right there. *snazzy finger snap.* but yeah, i'm so glad she realised she can't stay with quack/get back together with him. which is fabby, because it means she's almost ready to get with james, but you know, when she has somewhat resolved her issues. which is great. eep.

ooh, clever james. i like how you done that, what with the whole 'he doesn't love me' 'he was forced into a marriage' thingy. of course, your's was a lot more.. serious sounding. but yeah! and she opened up to him! and she like, cried. so, really, she's getting slightly less.. secretive (is that a good word? meh.) about how she feels and whatnot. hehe.

oh, almost forgot. fred! he's so sweet. like when he was talking about penny? AW. yes. i loved the bit with him getting back at dom. that made me larf.

the new stepmothaah is still annoying me. seems like she's only with him for his money, you know? ooh.

can't wait for the next chapter! sorry for the mishmash of the review.

Author's Response: oh yes, ERMAGERD.

no, i can't believe you wrote that either.

aah, that sounds better :P

summer does indeed have a nice helping of daddy issues on the side of all her other issues. she is one issue ridden whackadoodle. i just had another laughing fit when i read you'd put quack again :P she's definitely closer to being with james now than she was before ~ you know, with her being single now and all ;)

jamesie is a clever one. he's my little clever bunny. ahaha, thank you :) i'm not really sure where it all came from, but there we go :P i think secretive is a very good word ~ opening up to james showed that she was finally starting to trust people more, and doing it with james makes their relationship easier ;)

freddieee :D he's ma baba. dom deserved it. dommie can be quite evil and snappy when she wants to be. and freddie is le sweetheart.

well, she's a twenty five year old *** with a forty year old fiance with a ton of money... and it only /seems/ like that's why she's with him? :P

thank you! and it was lovely ~ sorry for how long this response took!

ellie :) xx

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WOAH. I mean, that was unexpected. I thought it was going to be a girl, you know? But then reading it I guessed it was Fred. And like, I'm kind of glad it was him, you know? Because like, yeah. It would be a bit odd if like, Albus or Lily started hanging about her, wouldn't it?

Anyways, I liked this chapter. It was really well written and yeah, I liked how you didn't say what person's point of view, you know? 'Cause you still managed to make sure it wasn't completely unobvious who it was, yeah?

Also, you're starting to force one of the Wotter's into growing up and to notice that everything isn't all hunky-dory and whatnot. I like that.

I'm kind of hoping Fred accidentally let's it slip about all of the cuts and everything, you know? 'Cause I don't think Lena would be able to tell him because of how selfless she is. But that would probably make James angrier because Free knew before him, even if Lena didn't tell Fred. Yeah.

UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: It was a difficult choice, but somwhere in the back of my mind I always knew Fred would know first, ya know? And I'm not ready for Rose. Not just yet. I don't think ANYONE will ever be ready for her...it had to be someone who is always about, but close to James, Freddy is perfect in my mind. And I really like him. He's my favourite character thus far.


I'm glad you liked that, I wanted it to be a surprise. I almost left out his name altogether, but I didn't want to go down the path.

It's time to grow up. For them at least. They've lived shielded and under the cover of their parents all their lives. It's time.

All in due time, lovely. You do have a knack for guessing what path everything goes on though!(:

I have Microsoft Word open as we speak, I promise! Thank you as always!

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WOAH. LIKE WOAH.


I couldn't stop laughing, seriously. This chapter was hilarious. The line 'he stiffens a lot' or whatever turned into a total raging innuendo for me, and I don't know if it was supposed to or not, but whatever.

I loved Harry's attempt at cooking, that was brilliant.

OH. THEY KISSED. EEP. *fangirls.*

I can't wait for the next chapter, seriously. UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: aww, thank you :D

i'm glad you found it funny ~ it was strange, because i didn't really like this chapter very much. ahaha, when i wrote that i thought it was going to be such a euphemism... i'm glad i'm not the only one :D

harry is not going to own his own restaurant anytime soon, i think we can all agree on that.

can you really call /that/ a kiss!?

the update will be very soon, i promise :D

ellie :) xx

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OH. MY. GOD. DOES GINNY KNOW NOW?! EEP.


this was such a well written chapter! this is by far my favourite so far. i loved the dream, and how vivian- that is her name, right? i totally blanked for a second- knows. this worries me. what if she tells james? or rose? and she gets all hurt that nobody told her and they like, fall out. that'd be too much.

still. the giant one across her back and the one on her head? i wonder where the come from? was that her dad or something? eep.

you got your cliffhanger! but you should update mega quickly, ok?! i can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: You know I can't tell you! I will say that someone who reviewed as it correct though! (I think, I might have to go back an look though.)

I'm really glad people like this chapter! I was very hesitant to post this one.

Vivian, yes that's her name. I can't tell anything that you don't already know, that its not heading in a good direction.

Oh that, I can tell you about that. Or at least confirm your suspicions. Yes, it was from her father, and yes, I will tell that story. (in little detail, I'll more hint at it)

Hahha, I did, didn't I? I promise I'll update as soon as I can! Thank you, as always!!

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i cringed. like, major cringed when her dad walked in. hehe. i was like, hiding under the covers, cringing and snorting like the embarrassing human being that i am.

but, yes! it's different because they are in love! *inserts creepy laugh.* hehe. i like how she forgot about Quack, because that shows she doesn't care about him in that sense. bless.

i still don't like him.

her dad made me laugh in this one. like, how he thought quack was james, which, you know, makes sense, but it still made me laugh. and i sung along with summer. but you know, inside my head.

as you do.

james was just so sweet and well, grown up. like when he was speaking about what you feel like when you get cheated on? aaw. heartbroken.

and quack. urgh, he annoyed me. i liked how it happened though, like the bit with the house elf, and how he's a nosy little person, and listened to summer and her dad's conversation. argh.

i do hope it is the last goodbye.

i mean, i want james and summer together! they're just so cute and aw! i just love them.

can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: i cringed when i realised how long i had left this review without responding to it... i am such a sucky person. i am very, very sorry. but school finished two days ago so now i'm nice and free to respond to reviews and whatnot :D

ahaha, i literally have hysterics whenever i see that you've called him 'quack'. she doesn't really care about him in that way, you're right. so they're nice and done and caput.

i kind of got that impression :P

you sung along with her inside your head? oh goodness. love, there are special places you can go when you hear voices inside your head, you know... but yeah, he never really saw james and jack's faces, so he just got the pair of them muddled up.

you're strange :P

yeah, james was the mature one in this chapter. he did have to act like the grown up one, because summer sure wasn't going to.
you know, i've been getting the vague impression that jack annoys you... yeah, i was just trying to show how different jack and summer really are. but he payed the price for being nosy, didn't he?

i'm sure a lot of people do, love :P

i want james and summer together too... i just love writing the pair of them :D

the update is in the queue now :D thank you so much for the review!

ellie :) xx

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Can I just die? That was so cute!

So, not liking the new stepmum all that much. Or you know, at all. She's awfully annoying. And Summer's dad, urgh. Don't like him either. Bleugh.

And just ohmygod, Summer and James are just too perfect for each other, and I just love them, and ohmygod, get them together properly, bump off Jack and ditch the parental units, and WOO.

(I just woke up, even if it is 4 in the afternoon. I don't need to make sense.)

Just, ohmygod. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: no - i really don't want you to die! :O.

louise is really annoying, and summer's dad is pretty horrible too. selfish, evil little people. there is no need for them. i don't know why i wrote them...

ahaha :D ditch the parental units, so they have no money, bump off jack, so summer panics even more, and then force her into a very panicky relationship, broke with james? okie-dokey.

(um, four in the afternoon... wowsa. i've just gotten back from school...)

thank you so much!

ellie :) xx

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They are so in love, just marry them already, and they can have lots and lots of children called Wilburt and Elbert and Norma. Just because.

OK! Fabby. They're cool now. Phew.

Oh, dear. Summer really needs to start speaking about her emotions better, instead of being rather bitter. But she's not gone to Jack's, so she's realizing that he is not right for her! This is fab.

AND THEY KISSED! Or, kind of. I don't even care. They have to get together soon, right? I mean, how long is this going to be again?

Lily! Bless her, she's so cute with her extraordinarily pink room and Jummer-shipping-ness.. Just like Ginny. Hehe. I loved how she thought they were together. Maybe James told them he is in love with Summer and that's why they thought that! WOO.

Oh, dear. Again. Her mum is a bit thick. Silly lady. And I hate Albus even more, the hypocritical twit. I'd have kneed him too, if I were in that situation. Which, you know, is obviously highly likely, despite the fact I'd feel like I was cradle snatching if I went out/made out with a guy a year younger than me, but whatever.

And her dad! I can't wait to read the next chapter to find out how that went! UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: wilburt and elbert and norma? right... i can just imagine summer naming her children that... right after she buys a flying pig and jumps to the moon on a space hopper.

but yeah, they're cool now :D

you know, i read this this morning on my ipod before i left for school, and i couldn't help but think how right you were ~ the fact summer won't talk about emotions is making her bitter.

ahaha, yeah ~ KIND OF. james stopped her. this story is going to be about thirty chapters long... ;) so not far to go :D

though a few people have asked me whether i was considering writing a sequel, and that got me very curious. so there is a VERY SLIM chance there will be another story after this.

lily is one of my favourite characters. she's just adorable. ahaha, i'll have to tell you - james hasn't said anything to lily. she just watched them and came to that conclusion.

her mum is very thick, to be honest. and albus is very horrible. he's just one of those nasty blokes that needs to be poked off the end of a cliff. ahaha, i think summer's dad is a cradle-snatcher... i don't think that snogging someone a year younger than you makes you one :P

thank you so much! and the next chapter is in the queue :D

ellie :) xx

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Aw, bless you. *winks horrifically.*


I really like this bit: Change is gentle in a cruel forceful sort of way. Taking all of what you've ever known and replacing it with half hearted replicas of what it once was. It was just such a great way to describe it, and it really shows Lena's opinion on change, without dragging on about it.

Poor Lena. I'm kind of dreading where the whole thing with whatsherface is going. Is James going to find out? Is Scorpius or Rose going to find out? Or will it be someone completely surprising; like Fred. And is James going to notice she's acting differently soon? He's still so childish in that sense, you know?

And Scorpius! I'm not liking him at the moment. He's being completely horrid, and I don't like it one bit. I mean, the bit when he was all 'NO!'? That showed he still cares, despite his odd way of showing it lately, but at the same time it shows that Lena's home life must be rather bad. In saying that, shall we meet any of her family at some point? Because I think that would be awfully good. Wink wink. Nudge nudge.

Rose; ah, she needs to demand to know what's wrong! I mean, I know that probably won't be very good for their friendship, but she kind of needs to grow up as well, and accept that everything isn't all rainbows and butterflies.

Really looking forward to the next chapter, UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: Hahha, I'm winking back, equally horrific. I do believe my eye is twitching.

Why thank you, I do enjoy that line myself. (I hate when I sound like that, I feel so horrid)

I think you might have something there, but I really don't want to go into detail with it, not yet. I will assure you it's all going to happen soon.

Scorp. I hate that twat at the moment, but since I understand why, I can't truly hate him. I'm not sure about her family just yet, I'm a bit apprehensive, they're really loathsome..

Rosie Posie...she needs to grow up too, alongside James. Actually I feel like all of the "war hero's children" need to grow up, they've lived sheltered lives, but just because Ol' Voldie is gone doesn't mean that there isn't darkness out there, that others aren't suffering! They don't see anything because they don't look. Maybe it's time to open someone's eyes.

I'm not a trusted author so I only have a few more days to update! I hope to leave you guys on a bit of a cliffhanger! (:

As always, thank you!! (:

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He's going to find out soon, isn't he?! I don't think I can cope with that, he's been acting like a bit of a noob. But still, I do want him to find out, you know? 'Cause I want to see/read his reaction as much as I don't...

Hmm. This was a really good chapter! I'm looking forward to see how the bit with James getting glasses goes.. UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: Hahha, he's getting really annoying for me actually...it doesn't lesson how much I love him, but he's too oblivious for his own good. Everyone is really. They're too wrapped up in themselves to get anywhere! I've already written out how must of the confrentation will go. :/ I'm not sure how I'll handled it I know how he will...like I said before, I think it'll force him into the role of adulthood he's been trying to avoid for a while now.

His glasses, well yeah this was a bit of a filler chapter, and complete rubbish in my opinion, but I thought it would be cute.


I'm typing and updating right now! I hope to have a cliffhanger for the week the queue is closed. (I'm an evil mastermind, I knew I was in slytherin for a reason!)

As always, thank you!(:

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ohmygod. major panic.

lily is going to find out james is getting her flat or whatever, and now she knows aimee doesn't have a lot of money and she'll think she's only dating james for her money, and it'll happen when aimee realises how muchsje loves him, and ohmygod, the panic.

argh. this is a really good chapter! i loved the bit with the car crash; that was hilarious. really looking forward to the next chapter, update soon!

Author's Response: ahaha ~ major panic. lozzlesticks.

lily is already very suspicious about the fact a girl with no money and no job is suddenly sniffing around her famous brother, and her very rich and famous family. oooh, if she found out he was buying her a flat ~ ouch.

thank youo so much ~ and i really wasn't sure about the car crash. i was /very/ tired when i decided that would be a good thing to write. :P

ellie :) xxx

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ohmygod. ohmygod. oh no. oh no. no. no. no. no.

I think I'm going to die. She was happy with James, wasn't she, despite not wanting to 'burden him'? And now that git, Vivian has ruined it. I hate her. Seriously. Argh. I'm like, dying.

And Lena! I know she won't stop immediately, but now I want her too. Argh. And she needs to stop being so bloody selfless!

Scorpius should have gone with her, 'cause then he'd be there to stop The Git, and she wouldn't have cut herself because of it! Yes, he has a life of his own, and I know he was distracting Rose, wasn't he, he with the picnic? But come on.

James was really cute in this chapter! I'm like, dead worried what his reaction is going to be when he finds out 'cause of how he treats her and everything. I don't think he'll get it, you know?

Unexpected? Does someone find out? Does Lena get with someone else? And James catches them? Does James get found kissing The Git?! Ohmygod. Ohmygod.


UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: Lena: Ah. My sweet Lena. I love her so, and she really is happy with James, but what the git said, it really hit her. All of her fears, insecurities, they just blew up all at once. If you will, it was like she was swinging high above the skyline for a while, and then the swing broke, and she was brought back down to reality.

I wish she could stop too. I hate writing it, but you can't stop all at once. She'll need help, and people are eventually going to find out. She's going to need them. She can't do it all on her own.

Rose: Darling Rose. She's a bit too smart for her own good.

Scorp: He's one of my favourite, but I don't condone his actions right now. Let me just say if Lena is being selfless, he's being selfish. As I said he's a favourite, but I start to hate him in the next few chapters.

James: I don't think James takes really anything seriously, its all bit of a joke with him. Don't get me wrong, I know he can be serious. (it is his middle name after all!) I'm just not certain he's truly "grown up" yet. And why should he? His parents/aunts/uncles/other extended family, fought and died so he wouldn't age before his time. So he could be young. I might be a bit forward and say that I think when he finds out it'll be a bit of a shock, and might force him into that "adult" role he's avoided for a while now.

The next chapter is in validation right now, and I'll have a James POV right after that! I promise!

As always, thank you for reviewing!

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OOH. MAJOR PANIC.


Remus! I like how you added him in, you know? And how he gave his opinion, 'cause it wasn't abrupt and he didn't just appear, so that was good.

I'm glad she doesn't believe her brother! That was good. But she still doesn't believe Sirius! Argh. Silly chap.

Oh! I loved the last line, and I can't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response:
Haha, :)

Well, i didn't want to leave him out because i love remus and he will be important to Gisela in the future once she escapes! and thanks, i couldn't just randomly add him because i hadn't talked about him much so i thought that was the best way to bring him into the story but i promise you, Remus will be featured more.

Well with that explanation he gave her, i don't blame her! and i think she secretly does, she just doesn't want to admit it to herself because she's scared.

ah, thank you! and it will be up soon so keep checking back! and thank you for reviewing!

Vicki :)

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I really liked James' POV, and I'm looking forward to more of it.

Hehe, I loved the whole bits with the dreams.

Looking forward to the next chapter, update soon!

Author's Response: Ah! Good, I had never written a boys' POV...so I'm glad you liked it!

Thank ya much :D

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you know that facial expression you make when you see a really cute baby in a wheelchair- something between 'OHMYGOD, they are so cute! and I feel so sorry for them!'. Yeah. That's what I look like.

SO. Are they cool yet? You know, they're practically at their 10th wedding anniversary, as far as I am concerned. And they got each other christmas presents- they are totally in love! REALISE IT. ACCEPT IT. ADMIT IT. Boom.

Hope Summer breaks up with Jack soon. Or he breaks up with her, and she notices that it doesn't hurt 'cause she has no proper romantic feelings towards Jack, he's only like a replacement James, but nobody can replace James 'cause he's James.

Her dad is a bit of a tosser, to be honest. He annoys me as well.

(Lots of people annoy me- fictional or real.)

And the end was just so cute! MARRY THEM. NOW.


UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: i know exactly the facial expression you mean ~ mine tends to look like i've just been punched in the nose, which isn't too attractive, but you know... what can you do? well, at least i'm not the only one...

they're getting along. which is more than they have been for the last couple of chapters. ah yes... they got each other christmas presents ~ that means they're in love... i forgot about that :P

summer cares about jack, because he was good to her ~ but yeah, you're right, she doesn't feel anything particuarly romantic for him. poor jackie-poo. nobody can replace our jamie-boy.

her dad is horrible. he gets worse. trust me.

(pretty much everyone annoy me. in a form of 31 pupils, i worked out that i like 8 people. 8. and three of those are my best friends.)

um... maybe not marriage quite yet, sweets :P

ellie :) xx

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Why did this review take so long?!

BUT EEP. DUDE. CHILL YOUR.. CHEST AREA, SUMMER. AMD JAMES. YEAH. TAKE THAT. GROWL.

So, I'm glad they are talking again. Kind of. Slightly. One step on the journey to marriage, as far as I am concerned. Still hating on Jack, as he annoys me and he is still getting in the way of the Jammer. So, henceforth, he shall be known as Quack, as ducks annoy me and so does he. Which I think I said.. But whatever.

NOT CONDOM. TELL HER, SUMMER. YOU ARE RUINING THE RELATIONSHIP I AM LIVING THROUGH. Argh. Like, heartbroken. And Scorpius! Urgh. Rose annoys me as well. Just, make up your mind, you.. bleugh. So yes. I am no longer a major ScoRose shipper. Nope. That ship has sailed.

AND NATALIE AND ALBUS. DIE, TWATS, DIE.

'nough said. Update soon.

Author's Response: ahaha, you know what people say ~ better late than never :P

ahaha, summer could do with cooling down a little, i have to agree with you there :P

a step on the journey to marriage... you know, from your reviews i've been getting the impression you're a james/summer shipper... :P HAHA. quack, because he annoys you... god, that made m laugh. and i hate ducks ~ i actually have orinthophobia - yes, i did google it :P - and i'm terrifed of the horrible things.

MWAHAHA. yes, con&dom too. but since i know you've read the next chapter, i don't mind telling you that they don't break up because dom has nooo willpower.

i don't like rose. at all. i don't know why i wrote her like that. she really bugs me. oh well. and yes, albus and natalie should.

thank you for the review! update will be soon :D

ellie :) xx

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I really like this! I like the characters, and their names made me laugh. This was really well written I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, update soon!

(this is my 300th review. eep.)

Author's Response: Awww, I love their names, too...:D
Thank you, thank you, thank you! Much appreciated.
I've already added the second chapter! It just needs to be validated. :)
And 300th? DANG!

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And then we ate mountains and mountains of buttered toast.

I really liked this chapter! It was really funny- like the 'How's it hangin'... Magic' bit? That was hilarious. And it still made sense, you know, despite your Author's Note at the start. Hehe. I liked all the characters, they made me laugh. Oh! And the bit about the ginger wigs? That bit was hilarious, and reminded me of that song.. Wands, by someone.

'Us gingers have got to stick together. Just kidding, it's only a Hedwig.' Hehe.

UPDATE SOON, DEARIE.

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OHMYGOD. OHMYGOD. OHMYGOD. I TOTALLY NEVER GUESSED. LIKE, OHMYGOD.

So does this mean she is finding out James is a wizard in the next chapter as well?! OHMYGOD, WHAT IF SHE THINKS THEY ARE LYING. OR WORSE. WHAT IF ROBYN AND JAMES USED TO GO OUT?! DUDE. I CAN'T DEAL WITH STUFF LIKE THAT.

Pfft. I'm not overreacting. Harry Potter Geek? Never.

But yeah! Does she find out in the next chapter?! And how long is this going to be? And how do you pronounce Robyn's surname? And why do I sound so much like a really annoying voice over at the end of an equally annoying soap opera?

UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: Haha, thank you! I'm glad that you're surprised!
We'll be definitely be getting a lot of information the next chapter (such as the extent of Robyn and James's relationship) - as for whether or not Spencer will find out that they are magical, we'll have to wait and see :P
I'm really glad that you liked this chapter! Robyn's last name is pronouced like "Newman" - I just like that spelling for some reason.
Thanks for reading and reviewing :D

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Oh no. Oh dear. Oh deary, deary me.

Regulus cannot fancy her. I don't think I could take that. Like, seriously. Just no.

All in all, I really liked this chapter, and I loved the little bit with Regulus at the end.

However, this line kinda scared me:She'd master wandless magic. Even if it killed her. But you know, whatever.

UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: Hehehehehe yeah we'll see how Regulus pans out in this story. I don't forseek him fancying her any time soon as I'm more interested in exploring his character as an individual. I've posted the next chapter up in the queue, but the queue is currently 6 days! Hopefully it'll shorten up by a day or two. Thank you SO much for taking the time to leave a review, I appreciate it so much. xoxoxo

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I like it. Like, really. It made me laugh and I'm looking forward to where it goes.

(Good god, I hate saying 'where it goes'. It sounds like some really cheesy love song that simultaneously makes me want to cry for being forever lonely and shoot myself in the head for actually listening to it.)

Anyways. Yes, I like the characters and yeah. Is 'Shuntbumps' actually real game? Snort.


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Author's Response: Thank you so much!

(I completely get what you mean. I've always thought first chapters have much 'potential', but whenever I say it, it's just like... *cringe*)

I'll be introducing some other characters later. I hope you like them, too. And yeah, Shuntbumps is a real game. It's mentioned in Quidditch Through the Ages.

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I really like this! I love how it's not just one of those ones where she doesn't speak to anyone, yeah? And I really like how you show how quiet she is. Also, I like the reason she started fancing Sirius, 'cause it's different, you know?

Tanner makes me laugh. I hope he does fancy Victoria Jones, that'd be dead cute. I do like Tanner, and how he and Vicky are so close. We don't know a lot about her though, do we? I mean, is there going to be some big reason why she hates being in the limelight, or is she just really shy? Hmm.. Ponder.

Sirius is cute. I like how he isn't all 'urgh, i'm so fearless and brave, and nothing can hurt me. *manly grunt.*' Oh! And the whole bit about him calling his friends his family 'cause his family hate him? AAAW. I'm looking forward to some more Sirius/Vicky action. Hehe.


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Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you like my characterization and story! I'll make sure to keep in mind what you said and delve deeper into Vicky and why she's so shy. Thanks!

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