Outragious!!! This was spectacular! Please continue writing!

Author's Response: Hahah thanks! It's nice to know that there's people reading my story.
-DracosCookie

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You uploaded the same chapter twice. Any who, I LOVE THIS!! Hermione is so sinister, and I like it! Pwease keep writing. This story, might have just become my new addiction.

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Oh Merlin's Beard! Why? I despise Cliffhangers!!! Please write more!

Author's Response: There's no way in hell I'm stopping so don't worry!

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Danny right its going to be epic!

Author's Response: Yes it will be! The new chapter will be posted in 5-7 days time... (with validation and all)

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Awe. Shape is such a good dad. Hermione is so lucky wheather she knows it or not. And Draco, as awesome as he is, needs to hold his tonge.

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This was Bloody Excellent!!! Please write more!?!?!?!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Chapter 12 Is in the queue already as of today and should be up tommorow, if everything stays where it is with the backlog otherwise later this week. keep your eyes peeled.

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Ob my goodness this was such a good chapter! Blood Excellent!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hope you like the next.

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Wait, wear is chapter 5??

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I had a little rejection thing. But i'll fix it soon! Sorry again.

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Oooo keep writing, this is getting really good!

Author's Response: Ms Myserious,

Thank you, I'm working on the next chapter.

Meg

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Absolutly amazing, I must say. Its sly and cunning I love this story idea. It absolutly genius! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you x
Just sent the next chapter into Validation x
You are far too kind x

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Awe, that was nice of Bellatrix! She seems to really care for Hermione.

Author's Response: Thank you x

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please write more. I can't wait to read more of this story!

Author's Response: Cheers dears :) The next chapter has been submitted so you should get to read more very soon

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It's a really good story. I can't wait to read what you come up with next!

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Oooo what happens next? ?? Please update

Author's Response: I've very nearly finished the next chapter so it should be up soon =3 Thanks for the review :) xx

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Oh my dear Merlin. THIS STORY WAS INCREDIBLE AND QUITE ENTERTAINING IF I MIGHY ADD!! I absoloutly loved the story, the detail and the imagery you wrote. I cant wait to read the sequel for this story. If I could rate higher than a 10/10 I most certinetly would. Amazing! Bravado!

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Oh my goodness, this was an amazing story. It was rather long but very well imagined and detailed. This was the best short story I have read in a long while. I think you most definetly keep writing stories with as much enthusiasm as you did writing this incredible story! Well Done!

Author's Response: Ms Myserious,

Thank you! It was rather long and I considered breaking up the chapters more, but then I really did want only 3. LOL!

I'm so happpy that you enjoyed it despite its long chapters.

The best in a long while? Gosh, thank you... a very generous comment. :)

Enthusiasm? I must say that I am really surprised at your comment, because that is exactly how I felt writing it. It showed, I supposed. Amazing.

I thank you so very much for your review.
Much appreciated,
Dark Whisper

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I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters

Author's Response: Good to hear!

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Oh my Merlins Goodness! Please write more, Ive never read anything like this, so please write more!!! If the rating could go any hire, it would be.

Author's Response: Hahaha, I love how happy we have made you. It always puts a smile on my face when I see that someone likes our story, I know it's a bit sappy haha. Chapter 3 is waiting validation so we are definitely writing more :) You're very kind, thank you so much xx

Magic.

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I loved reading this chapter. I cant wait for you to write more!

Author's Response: Hey :) Thank you so much for the very positive review! We have been blessed with great feedback lately and it has inspired us to keep going. Chapter 3 is in the validation line so it should come up soon. Thanks again.

Magic xxx

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Congrats on your fiance! I liked the chapter, although I think Ronald needs to back off of Hermione and let Draco and Hermione have their own life, but if that happened, what would be the fun in reading that :)

Author's Response: Thanks very much for your reviews, I hope you keep reading and enjoying the story!! And yes, there would be nothing more to write if Ron doesn't make an ass of himself! Hehe xx

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I loved the bit about the fractured tibia! Spot-on.

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks, I liked that little bit of comedy too xx

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Stupid Ronald! And poor Hermione, she lost her baby :(

Author's Response: I know, its sad :( Hope you like the story! xx

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Awe, that almost made me cry. That was kind of sad. But its pretty good for a short story

Author's Response: I feel like I should give u a cookie for being my very first review...let me know if you think I should write a sequel to show events after

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Please continue its really good!

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I liked the story. I liked the detailed discription. It wasn't boring at all in my opinion. And yes I would consider reading another story from you.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading my story and giving feedback! Good to hear that you didn't lose interest in the story while reading ;) - LB

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