Oh, goodness. I loved this chapter.
I love how you've made Sirius. I love how you haven't turned him into some kind of crazy womanizing drunk like others do. I nearly lost hope in Marauder storias until I came across yours. (: I'm so relieved it's not like every other story that only really concentrates on their adventures. Yours does, but as I said, you've made Sirius so much more mature and understanding about everythig going on, especially in his family.
In short, I bloody love this chapter and Sirius' interactions with Mr and Mrs Potter. So glad I came across your series. You've restored hope in me! (: haha, sounds cheesy.
Ooh, and I also want to say that.. Well, James' birthday is in March. That's basically the only flaw there.. That I saw atm.
Well, that's all I have for you. Be proud of this series. I for one, am. xx Report Review
Oh my wizard god. I read your story in a day and at the end, it truly made me smile. (: thank you for writing this! x Report Review
This is so saad- the ending, I mean. Very well done, I loved it. (: I've only just started reading Lily and James stories and you've just boosted my opinion about them, haha!
xAuthor's Response: Thank you! I've only just started reading James&Lily too, if you want to read some good Jily fan fics then check out atellam she writes brilliant ones!
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Oh my goodness! Can you get any better at story writing? I absoloutly loved Draco's words and three kisses. Phwoar, I am so looking forward for the next chapter. (: xAuthor's Response: anythingbutmuggle,
Wow... what a huge compliment that just made my day. So sweet and heart-tugging. Thank you!
I'm so glad that you liked his words, as they are really deep without actually saying "I love you."
And those three kisses... I'm so happy that you liked that. Ah... romance. :)
The next chapter is very close to being done. I promise not to take so long with it.
Thanks so much for your review. I loved it!
P.S. I just love your name. You are as Pureblood as they come. XD Tee hee. Report Review
This is great! Something very new to me. (: Good job so far. I'm looking forward to the next one.
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This idea is great! I cant wait for the next chapter to come out! (: Report Review
Too short mate.. But I told you that before :) haha.Author's Response: Thanks my faithful beta'er.. :P Yeah.. I know the chapter is short... It was an inbetweener remember :D Report Review
This is amazing! I really like how you have characterised Draco. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! (: Report Review
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