That's sweet and it's better than harry simply staring at the the mauauders map watching her move around the castle. i always hated the fact that they broke upAuthor's Response: Thank you. Yes, I think their relationship was diluted too much in the original. Harry may be noble but love will find a way. Next chapter up soon. :) Report Review
It's written well i just don't think the Hermione is really right in this i'll read on a bit to see but Hermione isn't so... bitchy in the books or movie. sorry but i don't really like the story because of the way she's portrayedAuthor's Response: She's more middle-aged now and older. I give her credit for she's been through so much and deserves a better futures, so she will not be defeated. I view Hermione as extremely competitive, and do you remember that I said she was very hungover and tired? Would you be so cheery? I appreciate the review and your thoughts, and please continue to review! Thank you! Report Review
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Good but terrible, so sad Report Review
Ravenclaw doesn't have a pass word they have a intellectual question and Hufflepuff don't either you have to tap the barrel on a painting in the hufflepuff song tune. Plus they wouldn't tell the pass words in front of the other prefects because only the prefects of that house are to know it the heads of house would tell them or the head boy and girl would privatelyAuthor's Response: I know but... I thought that after the war things would have changed... So I changed it... Report Review
This has got to be the best story I've seen on her Such a sad ending but so amazing i love it.
the only thing that isn't right is that James isn't a chaser he's a seeker. but even not having him as a seeker this is still the best story. i've like fallen in love with Sirus, he was already awesome but now i like love him.Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review!
First of all, I feel I should point out that James was actually a Chaser. While the first movie had him as a Seeker, JKR has confirmed that this is incorrect. You can google "James Potter Chaser" if you want to find the quote.
Besides that, thank you so much! I'm so pleased you enjoyed my story so much, James' Quidditch position notwithstanding. It's so lovely getting feedback like this so long after I finished the story. So thanks again :D
cheers, Mel Report Review
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