Reading Reviews From Member: MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVER
  
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Review #1, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERNo Ordinary Nutter: Of Nutters and Unexpected Kisses

19th March 2013:
MEEP
SO. MANY. EMOTIONS.
WHY. WOULD. YOU. DO. THIS. TO. ME.
But seriously: ALBUS SEVERUS POTTER BACK AWAY BECAUSE THEY NEED TO KISS OKAY.
GOSH.
HOW RUDE.

Author's Response: IT WAS VERY RUDE, TWASNT IT.
oh alby, when will you learn to stop interrupting people's kisses?
we need to teach that boy some manners.
MUAHAHA. HOPE YOU HOLD ON TILL THE NEXT CHAPPIE :D


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Review #2, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERBang: My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

23rd February 2013:
I LOVE THIS NEW JAMES.
And please let them kiss more...
And I loved what he said to Aimee before kissing her- it made me laugh, but it also seemed kind of adorable xD I don't know how, but it did.
JUST WRITE MORE MEEP.
And ditch Dan- please, he is annoying and is a little like Edward Cullen in the way that he breaks into her house all the time...
Just saying...

Author's Response: ME TOO ME TOO ME TOO.
and they're not going to kiss too much, haha.
well james can be very funny & sweet when he wants to be - he just doesn't want to be very often. i like that line too ;)
I AM WRITING MORE.
the next chapter, which has just come out, has more dan action :)
ty so much for the review, and i'm so sorry for the late response!

ellie :) xx


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Review #3, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERNo Ordinary Nutter: Of Nutters and the First Task

11th February 2013:
YOU ARE INCREDIBLE. THAT IS THE MOST AMAZING FIRST TASK. AND I REALLY WANT TO FIND OUT ALL OF THIER REACTIONS ERMAGERD. YOU ARE AN INSPIRATION I'M SORRY BUT YOU ARE.
~OBSESSED MANIAC

Author's Response: THIS REVIEW IS INCREDIBLE. THANKYOU SOSO MUCH. YOUR REVIEWS HAS BEEN AMAZING. IM SORRY BUT THEY HAVE.
-FANATICAL CABBAGE


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Review #4, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERNo Ordinary Nutter: Chapter 10: Of Nutters and Awkward Shoulder-Sniffing

24th January 2013:
Meep
This. Is. Adorbs.
I JUST WANT TO PUSH THEM TOGETHER AND FORCE THEM TO KISS BECAUSE ITS SO CUTE
SERIOUSLY. HALLE/JAMES
I WILL FOREVER SHIP IT.
SINCERELY,
A not at all obsessed avid stalke- I mean... reader

Author's Response: MEEP.
GREAT. REVIEW.
sometimes i wanna do that too, you know, even though their fictional characters.
SINCERELY,
A not at all crazy alie- I mean...human ;)


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Review #5, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERInfamous: Friends With Benefits...Sort Of

13th January 2013:
This story is adorable xD I'm not sure whether I ship Hazel/Al or Hazel/James more :') I'm mor inclined to ship Hazel/Al better but... the kiss behind the statue was adorable; though Al's jealousy is so cute :D
KEEP ON WRITING OKAY BECAUSE THIS JUST GIVE ME A LOT OF FEELINGS!!! Okay, cool :)

Author's Response: Hahaha, you are amazing. Honestly, at this point I'm not really sure who I'm shipping for either...but thank you so much for the lovely review! Hope you keep reading and enjoying :)

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Review #6, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERThunder: I hate the rain.

10th January 2013:
Gah the chapter was depressing :( I love Ava/Louis but she really can be ignorant sometimes *sighs* especially since he is only trying to help...
PEASE PLEASE PLEASE GET THEM TO BE *coughmorethancough* FRIENDS SOON

Author's Response: I know :( Sorry! I don't know that she's ignorant so much as she just doesn't think about people other than herself very much.
Haha, very subtle. I like it ;)
Thanks for the review!


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Review #7, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERFinding Faith: Tipping Point

26th September 2012:
So you've done it again... Once again you have turned me into a pile of teary mush... WHY DO YOU DO THIS???!!! Every chapter you write makes me sob so much :'( WHY IS VAL SO MEAN TO JAMES!!!??? He is beautiful and she was so oblivious and now she's just being a meanie... :( lease make me ssmile in the next chapter-please??? I BEG OF YOU!!! I do not wish to be a sad quivering puddle once again *heartbroken*

Author's Response: I turn you into a pile of teary mush because I'm a huge sadist who enjoys other people's pain. Er... not really. I just chose to write about a girl with very serious issues and, well, sad stuff happens. Unfortunately, this chapter was extremely important to the plot. It doesn't mean I like it though... :(

Uh... yeah... smiling in the next chapter... er, all I'm going to say is: don't get your hopes up.

...I am so sorry

Thanks for reviewing!

-Laura


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Review #8, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERLetters to L.C. : Protego

13th September 2012:
AFEV EJBHOBREOBI. YOU BROKE MY FEELS!!! How could you do this??? :'( The feels... They've been torn apart... :'( *sobs in corner*

Author's Response: OH NO NOT THE FEELS! *goes to comfort*

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Review #9, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERSMIRK.: So Then We Grew A Little.

30th August 2012:
Haha, I love this story and the relationship between Potter and Lyra :') I agree with her though, tall people deserve to die... or at least shrink a little :P
Keep updating pleaaase!!! *puppy dog eyes*

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Review #10, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERFinding Out About A Little Thing Called Love: Gryffindor v. Slytherin, Dementors and Truth or Dare with HER

29th August 2012:
Haha, I just love the truth or dare xD you need to have more of mayfield/sirius going on here man!!! Nice sex talk buisness going on here;)
KEEP WRITING AND ULOADING AND DON'T LEAVE IT SO LONG!!! ;(
Sorry, rantting... :P

Author's Response: Ehheee, aw thanks:)

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Review #11, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERBeing Summer: The One where Summer Starts to Talk

21st July 2012:
Ellie, you have out-done yourself with the cuteness :P Not only has James been cute but, Summer??? :O
I had surely thought that was impossible ;) MAKE SUMMER GET OVER HER STUPID SELF ALREADY!

Sorry, went on a bit of a rant there...
Anyways: keep writing, (update quicker, hehe) and DFTBA (don't forget to be awesome)
*Virtual Cuddles*

Author's Response: aww, thank you :D and yes... summer was begin. please, try not to collapse with shock.
and i think it might take quite a lot for summer to get over herself, sadly. gryffindor pride and all that.

ahaha, don't apologise!
the update for this is going into the queue tonight, i am thinking. yeps. i reckon so.
thank you! *cuddles back*

ellie :) xx


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Review #12, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERClash: Falling

20th July 2012:
I love this story- it is hilarious and VERY awkward.
Kepp writing for goodness sakes!!! ;)

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Review #13, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERWho Is She?: Slipping and Sliding

18th July 2012:
Nice, Al being a cocky bastard ;) Then turning back to his sweet self- he doesn't half have mood-swings!!! :P I love this story, it's so funny xD
Nice going with James and the Slytherins making comments... Update soon xxx

Author's Response: Haha, Al's less of a joker than James but he can still be a "cocky bastard" as you put it ;) and thats sort of part of his character ... I plan to reveal more about him soon! I'll try to do so by the end of the week :) xxx

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Review #14, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERLetters to L.C. : Dresses and Being Lenny

16th July 2012:
N'aw I really love this story- t'is so cute xx he is just the cutest being (now) but he is so damn stupid! ;) just saying :P

Author's Response: He is stupid, I know. He's dense to how he really feels about Lenny/L.C. He'll figure it out soon, I promise.

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Review #15, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERFinding Faith: Jealousy and A Letter

14th July 2012:
N'aw the cutenesss of James' jealousy xxx I feel so bad for Faith right now :( plese update soon *virtul hug*

Author's Response: Yes, James isn't exactly subtle. But that's what makes him so adorable. Thanks for the review!

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Review #16, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERLike a House on Fire: Christmas Morning

12th July 2012:
N'AW THIS IS ADORABLE. I adore you even more every new chapter you write :) *virtual huggles*

Author's Response: *squeals* YOU BE TOO CUTE AND KIND!

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Review #17, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERTug Of War: Thump Thump Thump

12th July 2012:
Wow, this is just a great story xD FINALLY THEY AREN'T AT EACH OTHER'S THROATS! ;)

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Review #18, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERLike a House on Fire: The Time of Your Life

2nd July 2012:
N'AW YOU HATH MADE ME HAPPY!!! x I am a happy noodle now :D
Love you

Author's Response: I am glad to have made you a noodle - and making you a happy one is a bonus! But really, it's all about being the noodle!

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Review #19, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERFinding Faith: Visit

1st July 2012:
You have emotionally killed me.
I have an odd habit of reading out my favourites character (faith)'s lines and I was in floods of tears by the end of the chapter :'(
You are a flipping amazing writer who has reduced a usually quite strong-minded person into a ball of uncontrollable sobs- I applaud you ;)

Author's Response: Ha, I like reading out my favorite lines too. Thank you so much for the compliments and for reviewing. I apologize for killing you ;)

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Review #20, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERPlaying With Fire: Fighting, Screaming, Plotting, and Acting Like Kids

29th June 2012:
Haha, this is flipping amazing :) please upload the chapter son x

Author's Response: will do my best. thanks for the review and compliment.

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Review #21, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERFoul Play: Of Dungbombs and Butterbeer

27th June 2012:
I LOVE THIS STORY.
Please update soon or I will get upset x

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Review #22, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERLive To Die: Operation: M.O.I.D.I.C.

26th June 2012:
You HAVE to Keep updating :) I love Sirius' POV btw :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! xx

-Teddie


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Review #23, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERHeartless: The One Where I Lose My Temper in Front of the Entire Potions Class

26th June 2012:
Nice, keep uploading- this is awesome :) And quite funny xD

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Review #24, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVEROpposites Attract: Chapter 3

26th June 2012:
I was really sad when I found out that there were only four chapters done :( Why must you do this to me!!!?? :'(
Upload next chappysoon- yeah?
Good. :P

Author's Response: don't worry! the next chapter's in the process of being validated now :)

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Review #25, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVERSilent Confrontations: Not Alone

26th June 2012:
I love this :0 It's really cleverly done, and I love that way that she's stil sarcy even though she can't talk :') Though her obsession with James is a bit weird... :P
Keep writing though- you have mad me a happy reader :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm assuming you mean 'saucy'; haha I think so too! Her obsession with James was meant to be strange but she's basically gotten over it. Only now, she thinks he saved her but we all know that isn't the truth. More chapters on the way! Thanks for reading XD

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