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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by AnimedGirl

Made For Each Other: Encounter on the Express

6th April 2012:

Very well thought out plot line so far, you've given a good insight to both characters :)
Pay attention to spelling, and you'll be good to go ;)

Author's Response: thank you! :) I'm glad you like the plot x) spelling is my nemesis ;) Microsoft word sometimes plays up a bit - - thank you!

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Review #2, by AnimedGirl

Not What's Expected: Not What's Expected

25th February 2012:

Fantastic one-shot! I love the simplicity, and heart-warming quality of the story. Well done :)

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Review #3, by AnimedGirl

Those Potter men: Those Potter men

12th February 2012:

Amazing story, I loved it! You clearly planned how it was to happen very well, and I really liked the incorporation of James and Lily with Harry and Ginny, that was a very clever idea. To improve, try and think of punctuation more!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot :) I love it when people review my stories - made my day ;) Thanks for the advice as well!

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Review #4, by AnimedGirl

Vampire.: Love is a powerful spell, Isn't it?

6th January 2012:

I stand by what I said in my earlier review :) very good. Keep it up!

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Review #5, by AnimedGirl

Vampire.: Monster.

6th January 2012:

Hey! I noticed you commented on my story, and thought I would check out if you had written any stories. As of yet, you seem to have no reviews, so I thought I would leave one for you! Your story is very, very good. It has a pretty interesting concept, and good layout. To improve, check on punctuation, spelling etc. and try and make chapters longer! 8/10

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