CHOCOLATE PIE!?!?!?!?! I WANT SOME!! Where can i get some chocolate pie? I will get some and watch it with next weeks Doctor Who : ) it's so good, like what is Clara?!? Anyway, THIS WEEK?? THAT SOON!! This is brilliant yay! cause I am currently not so happy with you for ending it on such a cliff.Author's Response: AHAHA I GOT MY CHOCOLATE PIES FROM THE COOKIE MAN BUT I THINK THEY STOPPED SELLING THEM COZ EASTER IS OVER :'( i have no idea what clara/oswin/oswald is...CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT THOUGH! remember...there's something in the wifi... i shall update soon! i promise! nearly there :) Report Review
That was really good!! THEY FINALLY KISSED! WOOO!! And Albus went cray cray on their arses, why doesn't he like that. Don't tell me he likes her? i thought h didn't what is happening you must update right away so i can find out what is going on!!!Author's Response: haha, he al did go cray cray on their arses (: im not one for love triangles...BUT ALL SHALL BE REVEALED NEXT CHAPTER. THANKS FOR REVIEWING ! Report Review
oh my giddy god!! woo this chapter is amazingly brilliant and fantastic and so much more!! : D i hope you update super soon, like straight away Report Review
hahaha, that was a lovely poem. Thats actually what made me review, i was feeling too lazy before that but now, prepare for my review : D I really really really really like this story it is brilliant!! it makes me laugh and Halle and James are pretty great. Actually Halle and James are fantastic because, honestly, if they weren't written as well as they are, this story wouldn't be as good : ) so keep up the amazing writing and post a chapter super soon!!Author's Response: ahah, im glad to know my poem actually worked :) new chapter will be up soon, thanks for reviewing ! Report Review
brill! I was freaking out thinking 'maybe she's gone on strike or something and won't write anymore ever!' but then you updated and i was happy : )Author's Response: No strike, don't worry! Glad it made you happy (: Report Review
This was brill again, they very quickly turned from being nice to being mean haha, seeing as you said you had written 2 days, does that mean you will be posting it soon? i really hope so!Author's Response: The next chapter should be out by tomorrow, it's already been posted. It's the train ride! I really enjoyed the train ride (: Thanks for your review xx Report Review
the business trip is very likely, i'm amazed that it doesn't occur every chapter ; P haha this was a really good chapter! i loved it! i will say that i'm very glad of the way you made her and Ed break up sorta, cause any other way it wouldn't have worked out as well : D really great please update quickly so i can read about their snoggingAuthor's Response: Yes, I agree about the business trip, it should really be a daily occurence. That, and overnight babysitting, many randome hallway/party/street encounters and unintentional revealing of underwear. I know, everyone wants snogging, and it's coming, I swear! Thanks for reviewing xx Report Review
This is brilliant! again! hahaha, i honestly can not wait for more so pretty please do update really soon : )Author's Response: I just posted the update, and the queue is like, 14 hrs, so it should be up very very soon. I hope you like it. And thank you for your kind words :) Report Review
This was great! I meant to review the last chapter but i forgot. Whenever i see that this story is updated my heart jumps a little bit in excitement and i read all the other updated stories and this one last cause it's my favourite : DAuthor's Response: Wow, this made me smile so widely, thank you!!! Report Review
Hi, your story is really brilliant. I was just wondering what actor is that on this chapter image of Louis Weasley?Author's Response: Thank yoouu ♥ That actor is the gorgeous Hunter Parrish. Yum. Report Review
woo!! Snogging scene!! Brilliant snogging scene as well, Fred's getting a bit attached isn't he : P asking personal questions. That's awesome that she's having twins, but kind of bad luck as well cause that's a lot of money... it's funny that they snogged in the past but it doesn't mean anything so it's all good. Oh oh for Dessie when Roxy finds out, she's not going to be a happy chappy. Pretty please update again!! Report Review
yes i did quite like this chapter, it was funny and i loved the snowball fight, mainly cause it doesn't snow in Australia where i live and i love snow so it was fun to read about things like that that could be tradition : ) I liked the rest of them, Al was funny and i liked Lily cause that's just too cute to not like. Favourite parts? umm... from the first sentence to the last one? hahaha i just loved it all!! Report Review
I think you made Mason into the best character, random bits thrown in and all that. He wasn't what i expected him to be, you think older brother-over protective, manly, tough-and that's what comes to mind, but you made it perfect! Favourite snippets would be her and her hypothetical question and Masons reaction hahaha. Chapter in general was good, but you made me want hot chips because of your mentioning them in the chapter Report Review
hahaha, loved it! I swear, that i laugh so often when i read this, that if you lived an extra hour each time you laugh then i would live for an extra hundred years because of this story. Pretty please update soon! Report Review
hmm... favourite part/quote? i'll have to do part cause there are lots of brilliant quotes. So favourite part would be... The part where James has found out that this is not just a one off : D I think that is a very brilliant part. Have you been in a situation like this? because you seem to write very well about it... *raises eyebrow* Report Review
Hahaha I love how he was yelling at her when he got someone else pregnant, but i don't think i would have realised this if you hadn't put it in hehe. My favourite part would have to be the end though, their snogging and James walking in. No you're quite good at snogging scenes, better than lots of people on this site, better than me, thats for sure. Report Review
wow! this was so good!!! i really hope you update soon!! because it's brilliant and i want to read moreAuthor's Response: thank you! :D Report Review
no you shouldn't change the name of the story!! it's good : ) the chapter was really goodAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! And thank you for your input on the title; I'm still iffy on it and need all the input I can get. Thanks for reading and reviewing :D Report Review
weww!!! loved it! i hope you update super dooper soon though cause i don't think i could last without that update soon because of what intenseness happened habsdfincd that did not make much sense but oh well, hopefully you get the drift Report Review
I think its when it rains it pours, but when it rain it fucking rains is good too : ) really good chapter! I can't wait or another update Report Review
yay! thank-you so much for updating!! and i hope you do again soonAuthor's Response: You are quite welcome! Report Review
is it based on your life in the way that you moved schools and were previously homeschooled then some tall bloke was really a bit rude? or in the way that the tall bloke was really a bit rude? it's really good story! you should update this and lemonade soon : D P.S i'm sorry if i sounded a bit rude at the start. i didn't mean too.Author's Response: it is a little bit! I moved to the US from India, I went to Catholic school which was kind of like being homeschooled, and a tall boy was extremely rude to me. And chapter two is in the queue right now! thank you! :D Report Review
This story is fantastic! I really hope you update soon because i can't wait to read more!Author's Response: update is coming soon! thanks so much! Report Review
oh my gosh! this story is so good!Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you like it! I'll update as soon as I get a spare second or two. Thanks for having a read! Report Review
Yay!! Thankyou : ) this was a brilliant chapter as are all previous ones. and i apologize for my outburst on my last review, sorry hehe. Yay for some James/Aggy... moments haha i don't know what to call them Report Review
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