hahaha this is bloody brilliant!!

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this chapter was so good! i was actually crying. Hermione should have beat the living daylights out of matthew raven, that's what i would've done. but i guess the kick was enough :P and it's nice to see that lucius was more civilized in this chapter. overall very well written :)

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i love the fact that draco cares so much for hermione and i feel so bad for what's they're having to go through. if all this happened to me i wouldn't be able to handle it and probably be doing to same thing hermione is..be miserable. can't wait to see what happens next :) hope nate's ok.

Author's Response: Haha, yeah.
I'm glad you're enjoying :)
Thanks a million for the review :) As for Nate, you'll have to wait and see ;)
Jodie xo

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haha i'm loving this story so far. can't wait to see how it ends. please keep writing :)

Author's Response: Well, not even I know how it's going to end, I just keep writing, there's really no set direction yet! Please be patient as I'm not a very fast writer so it might take a while for the next chapters!

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i'm not really the type to giggle but this made me giggle. i can't wait to read more :) very nicely written.

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i liked how you included the flashbacks. it makes the story flow so naturally. love it so far! keep up the good work. can't wait for the next chapter :)

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i'm liking where this story is going. good introduction, everything flows together nicely. but i think having the dialogues separate from the paragraphs would help make it easier to read. can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks ^.^
I'll keep the dialouge in mind while I write my second chapter. I won't be able to edit my story until Nano is done :)
Thanks so much for the review and keep reading !!

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wow! that was quite something. i don't think i've been this angry and sad at the same time while reading any other piece of fiction. very well done with bringing all the emotions out. i was on the edge of my seat the entire time! waiting for hermione to tell draco about the baby! and the little bit about martin being the evil stepmother was very well placed and much needed comic relief. very nicely written! keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't want my readers to drown in all the drama, so I wanted to ease the tension a bit by throwing in some humor :) I'm glad you liked it :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing :D

*Maria

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