A TYPICAL Hermione/Draco story. The idea is good, but one suggestion: punctuation. It is always important in a story. Keep writing. -Diana Marie Report Review
Wow... that was completely awesome. I am very much looking forward to reading more of your writing, you are brilliant at it all. Oh, and by the way, your webpage didn't work for me... is the server down? It could possibly be my computer. Anyways, wow. Again. This was amazing. Better than amazing, actually. Bloody brilliant. Keep it up! ---Diana MarieAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! That means alot to me because I LOOOVE your story! Everyone is having a problem with that linki so dont feel left out ;) just copy and paste it into the url box and you'll be directed there... until i can fix it anyways... lol *grin* I can't wait to hear your opinion on my other work! *yayness* Report Review
Now that I have had time to digest that, it was pretty good. A little OUT THERE, but nice.Author's Response: Yes, I know it was strange, but that is what I found amusing. I think, too, that the reader and the writer often have different perspectives: sometimes, no matter how much the writer enjoys creating something, the reader still finds it unamusing. Thank you, though; I am glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
Uh.Author's Response: Yes, I know . . . Ginny has problems. Well, in this story she does . . . Report Review
Good. Continue, please! --Diana MarieAuthor's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
Brilliant! I can't wait to read more of your work.Author's Response: Thanks, Diana Marie! I like your name a lot! Diana especially is such a pretty name, and Marie is such a sweet name. :) Report Review
Interesting... But what happened to Harry? Author's Response: I didn't really want to focus on Harry in this one. The main question was about the changes that would happen if Pansy and Hermione switched places. Harry comes in a little in the end, but not for too long. If you have any ideas, I'd love to use them!
crickett Report Review
Journey! YES! Eh, at least, that is some of the lyrics of a Journey song. Good start, can't wait to read future chapters. Report Review
Wonderful job! This is a great story and I can't wait for you to produce more ideas. Are you in college? (Or maybe out of college?) I was just curious by you saying something about a term. Ah, well, continue, please, for the sake of all your readers! Best wishes. I hope your writer's block disappears so you can write the next chapter! --Diana MarieAuthor's Response: Thank you :) Yes I'm in college (I finish this June!) In England we call the breaks 'half term' instead of 'spring/summer break'. Americans have semesters, we have terms. Report Review
Very good! "No one" has done a better job then you on this story! I am looking forward to future writing from you! Please continue. --Diana MarieAuthor's Response: I have another story coming so keep checking! I spent ages on this so thanks for the review. I'm glad you like it! Report Review
An Act of Faith
Author's Response: K, i've turned a new leaf, i'll sort that out for u as soon as i can.
VampiresSoul Report Review
Good! Can I just make one suggestion that you should do? It is on your summary: don't put a comma after Draco Malfoy (in the second sentence). Brilliant story! I am looking forward to reading your future writing. Good luck and God Bless --Diana MarieAuthor's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Yes, about that mistake, I saw my error. Thanks for pointing it out. I'm looking forward to writing more, for some reason I have a good feeling about this plot. Stay tuned. :) Report Review
Hello. I like your story.. it has a good plot and nice description. I found a few mistakes in the story, but the story was still brilliant. Please continue. I am looking forward to reading more of your work! --Diana Marie Report Review
Hello. Good first chapter... would you mind if I made one suggestion? On your first chapter title it should be "The Beginning"(with two n's, not one). Overall it is going quite well: keep it up! --Diana Marie Report Review
Confusing, a little. You should space out each 'paragraph' in your story so we can read it better. Good job, too.Author's Response: Thnx, I'll try to remember that when I write a new chapter, which will be soon, hopefully!-XxX-Marjolein Report Review
Well hello there. Very nice story, good description, good plot, good everything. I hope you post the 3rd chapter soon!
--Diana MarieAuthor's Response: Thanks babe. Same to your story. =) Report Review
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