Never thought I'd say this, but thank God for Delphine!! Hollis will crossbreed illegal magical creatures, but go on a DATE?!? Ha! I'd love to see Fred in that outfit, at a loss for words as well! These guys crack me up, George with that line “It was him! He fancies a Hufflepuff!” I almost fell of my chair laughing, and Fred kicking Lee in the ribs... It's just too much. 'Till next time!Author's Response: Delphine chooses odd moments to come in handy. She is honestly my favorite person in this story to write - she's such a ball of fun. And Hollis, the wimp, definitely needed her right then. And then I ADORE writing Lee and George, as I think they're brilliant wingmen. Having all of them there together in this chapter was really fun to write. Report Review
This one made my heart ache for them both... It's bittersweet, the way they go about it all, like they know what'll happen in two month's time(in the book, which ripped my heart out on that page).The way Fred gets all stubborn and puts his foot down would've probably worked if she wasn't Hollis, but she is. *sigh* Three more chapters left?! Holy Hippogriffs! I really feel like you're going to stick with cannon(for the most part) and I will, most likely, sob in the end. Here's to the last three chapters!Author's Response: The last three chapters. :( I've been dragging it out, updating less frequently than usual, because for a long time I didn't know what I would focus on after I finished this story.
Hollis is stubborn and she's got to take a chance on a positive outcome of the war. It's very sad. Voldemort destroyed a lot of lives, a lot of love.
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I really love the "Holy Cow!" “There are two of you!” it made me laugh quite a lot, and that Delphine was memorizing Cedric's hair with her eyeballs. Jeez, Hollis must have a photographic memory or somethin'. I wanna see a graphorn!
Hagrid must've been freaking out when Hollis said “These aren’t allowed at Hogwarts,” and then gaped when she said the last part. I LOVE this story! XDAuthor's Response: I want to see a graphorn, too! If I could see any magical creature, however, I think it would be a thestral. I think they're really fascinating. But of course, I don't want to have to see somebody snuff it first...so maybe a hippogriff instead.
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It is I, the former anonymous person Ames .(Since I finally scraped up the nerve to actually get an account.) I really hope that Fred's 'friend' is actually him, if he's not I will feel very confused indeed. This is honestly one of the most entertaining stories I've read on HPFF and FanFiction you've done a marvelous job so far. Thank you for writing this story.Author's Response: Hello, formerly anonymous person Ames! Glad to see that you got an account. :D You shall see soon enough whether or not it is Fred or some strange lurker creeping on Hollis all the time. Hee. And THANK YOU, I am so glad you are entertained! And thank you for calling it marvelous! That just makes my day. ^_^ I hope you continue to like it. :) Report Review
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