ARGHHH I'M SO SORRY I DIDN'T REVIEW THE LAST CHAPTER, REVIEWS FROM ME MAY BE SPARSE FROM NOW I APOLOGISE!

OH MY LORD JAMES HARRY CAN'T BE DISAPPOINTED IN YOU DON'T THINK LIKE THAT! D:

AND KEEP IT IN YOUR PANTS DAMMIT! DON'T YOU DARE SLEEP WITH THAT BLEEEP YOU NAUGHTY BOY! YOUR MOTHER WOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOU!

OH MY LORD, I WANTED TO HUG JAMES AND NEVER LET HIM GO, HE'S SO ADORABLE I LOVE HIM YOU'VE DONE IT, I'VE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH HIM.

HELP I'VE FALLEN AND I CAN'T GET UP.

IGNORE ME, PLEASE. I'M JUST BEING WEIRD.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON, THIS IS ACTUALLY ONE OF MY FAVOURITES ON THIS SITE, IT'S JUST SO PERFECT!

SORRY FOR THE CAPS, I'M JUST TOO PASSIONATE ABOUT THIS FIC! :P

Author's Response: James is a bit messed up these days. He's suffered from years of being overshadowed by Harry, and Harry himself seems quite aloof towards James, so James' natural assumption is that he's disappointed him. Which, sadly, just makes his state of mind worse. POOR THING. And Allegra doesn't quite deserve that censored description! It could be much worse, he could have gone for Cassie Lynch again... Thanks for reviewing!

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HERMIONE'S DONE IT AGAIN! :D CLEVEREST WITCH OF HER AGE STRIKES ONCE MORE! :D

It's actually hard to believe that J. K. Rowling DIDN'T write this, it's just so amazing! ♥

I absolutely adored this chapter, I can't wait for the rest! :D

51256312065123/10! ;D

Author's Response: I hope that you know that the keyboard-smashing at the beginning of this review made me smile so much! Leave it to Hermione to think up the solution to their problems, eh? She was always doing that in the books -- Ron and Harry would have gotten nowhere without her.

I'm seriously SO flattered at your continual comments about J.K. Rowling, and your comparison of my writing to hers. Needless to say, she is one of my largest writing inspirations, and it's absolutely wonderful to hear that you thing my writing compares in any way! Seriously. Just... thank you. ♥

I can't wait for you to read the next chapter, too -- Draco's point of view! Really looking forward to your opinion on that one!

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I'M FINALLY HERE!

OH MY LORD THIS SEEMS AH-MAY-ZING! :D

By the way, I loved the pun in your summary, 'MARVEL-ous banner'! That made me very happy! :D

I just loved this so much! It was so good! And all the Marvel characters were in canon and Natasha/Clint ship! fdhhghdfxjhdfk

Only one thing you spelt 'hypocrisy' wrong, it was in this sentence:
"Are you saying that two gods can appear out of the sky but time travel is impossible, because if you do, you know that's hypocrocy."

That was the only error I saw, but other than that oh my golly gosh, this was amaze-balls!

Plus, you did Hagrid's voice/speech perfectly!

Anyway, I absolutely loved this! Now that I've reviewed, I won't be as long any more! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: EEK! Hurrah! I've waited for you for so long! *looks at you with googley eyes*

Anywho, I'm glad you like my little pun there. It felt very much necessary, and it fitted quite nicely in my opinion. It was one of thoser lightbulb moments. :)

And I'm happy that I managed to keep them in canon, despite that fact that I've never read a comic book concerning them. And yesh! Clintasha ship. I'm planning on building on that some more later on.

And really, just one error? Despite the fact that even after revising and editing, I still feel as if my chapters are rough and needs more editing. I will keep that in mind though and fix that error once I go through my second round of revising and editing. Thank you for pointing it out. :)

And yes, Hagrid needed to be incorporated! I'm glad I captured him as close to perfection as I could get him. I know he'd probably be at the welcome feast instead on the grounds, but this is in the 70's. We can say he's taking Fang on a walk. :)

I'm just so happy that you like this so far. I was scared that this might've been a let down, because you've been so anticipated for it. I'm glad you don't feel like that. :)

Thank you so much for the lovely rating and review, and I can't wait till you tell me how you feel about the rest of the chapters. :)

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I'm finally here!

Wow! :O I adore the way you write, it's just like J. K. Rowling's writing, its amazing!

Although the London mission was a bit pointless, I still really liked it! :D I love the fear that you create in this fic, it feels so real!

Anyway this chapter was amazing! Can't wait for the next update! :D

Author's Response: Ahh, yay -- so fantastic to see that you've caught up! It's really not too cruel that I'm about to post chapter 10, is it? I swear that it's not because of you! :P

Oh my gosh, that is just... I hope you realize how highly I appreciate that compliment! ♥ I'm so flattered that you think I write like J.K. Rowling -- she is, of course, one of my largest writing inspirations. And I'm glad you really liked the mission, too! Despite the fact that, well, it was rather pointless, I don't regret putting it in there. And I suppose that's all that matters. Realism is something I'm definitely striving for, too, so I'm extremely pleased this story feels real to you! Gahh. Your reviews. They are too much. ♥

The next update should be up in... a matter of minutes! Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews you've been leaving -- they really do mean tons to me! :)

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Hufflepuff review tag! :D

This was so good! I loved that slowly, she built up her confidence again. I also liked the way you made her cautious and scared of everything. You wrote it really well!

One thing though, you left some of the formatting in there! It's the "div align="center"" code, you might just want to edit that out. ;)

Other than that, it was absolutely amazing!

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was worried that I would go either too fast or too slow with her regaining confidence, so I'm glad you thought it was okay!

Thanks for catching that, I must have missed it. I've edited it out now :)

thanks again for taking the time to leave a review!

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So this was a very interesting piece to read! I'm guessing because of the information that you've provided that Drasina is Hermione?

I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes or spelling errors so that's always a plus! :)

Although, I felt it was kind of... flat. Now don't take this as I'm saying I hate it or anything, because I really don't. I actually quite like this. You're very good with descriptions, but you told us every single detail surrounding Drasina. For example:

A young Canadian long ear owl sat on his perch on the counter of the store, Alfonse had the most magnificent grey and yellow coloring.

That might be the longest sentence I have ever read! Instead you could make it a bit shorter, but still give those details, like:

Alphonse, the grey and yellow coloured owl, sat on his perch, blinking his yellow eyes.

That still sounds a bit awkward to me but hopefully you understand the point I'm trying to make.

You really are good at imagery, but don't be afraid to skip on some details of the story. In the whole chapter, I felt like all Drasina was doing was describing her surroundings. Maybe you could go more in-depth with her emotions, especially because she doesn't remember anything?

That being said, this is a very original Dramione! The plot sounds fantastic! I usually don't read Dramione but this is a really refreshing outlook!

Good job on this, if you hadn't said, I would have never thought that you hadn't written in a while!

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, there is a edited version in validation cue atm that I think flows a bit better, I'm also trying to find a beta. I'm having a hard time finding the characters, if that makes sense... I have my story and I know where it wants to go but my characters are shy and not as forward as the story line in my head. Its a balance I am trying to sort out. :/ Again thank you so much for the review (even if it was review tag) I appreciate the criticism. I hope you come back to read the next chapters. :3 ~ Lady

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Naw, this was so sweet!

It's amazing how much you have grown since this story! This is still a really good story, but it amazes me how you've gotten so much better! :D

Marshmallow was certainly an interesting character! :p Very er... hyperactive? :p

Anyway, I loved this, just like I love all your other stories! :D

By the way, there is NEVER enough cheese! Cheesy fics = good. :p

Author's Response: Wow! Sorry for the really late reply. I don't normally scroll down this far to check for reviews!

That's precisely why I decided not to delete these first stories of mine; just so i can read through them and cringe and feel better about myself over how much i've improved over the years :P

Thank you for leaving a review regardless!

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Wait... what?

Did... did she die?!

NO.

SHE COULD NOT HAVE DIED.

That is just not acceptable! Nope! Not allowed!

Who was the cold voice?! Bellatrix? Malfoy?

Oh my gosh, poor Sirius! D: I can't believe he told Araminta and then she died! D: She could have been the one to prove that he was innocent! D:

Wow, you write canon so well! It's so unfair! D:

I can't believe this is the last chapter, it's completed! It's a wonderful story and you did really well with this!

Anyway, for the last time (on this story), this was an amazing chapter/story and I absolutely loved it!

10/10! :D

Author's Response: She died :( It was the tidiest option, and once she knew that Sirius was innocent, she had to die - because otherwise she'd have fought tooth and nail to prove his innocence, and he clearly didn't have anyone doing that. And at the end of the day, I think it's nicer for her. After everything she's been through, and especially after Gideon's death, it would have been very cruel to keep her alive, in a way. And, yes, Bellatrix was the one who killed her...

Thank you so so much for all your feedback, I really appreciate it! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing! :)

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Excuse me as I go sob my heart out.

Seriously, this was so sad but so sweet! You portrayed the characters so well, it's hard to believe that J. K. Rowling didn't write this! It's THAT good!

I loved the progression between all the years, it was so realistic. My family lost a member and even though it's been eight years, it's still hard to deal with. I think you portrayed it very well.

The way Molly and Arthur talked about their grandchildren was so sweet, it seemed very realistic.

Anyway, great work! This one-shot was beautiful!

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! I really wanted to make it obvious that, though they moved on, they never actually got over Fred.

Ahhh I was so worried about the characters! I'm so happy you think I portrayed them well!!

Thank you so much m'dear ♥

Jami

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Review Tag! :)

WOW! This was so good, I absolutely loved it! :D

I loved Regulus' memories of Sirius, it seems very sweet that he would think of him before he died. I love brotherly affections, and you pulled it off really well, even though we actually never SEE Sirius! :p

Anywho, I really liked this one-shot, it was so good!

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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THIS WAS SO CUTE!

I love reading about James II and now that you've written about him just makes it that much better! :D

I really want to know why Fred got the bruises! Was it Denny?! Was it not?! That is the question!

I'm very sorry, I'm in a very odd mood today! :D

Anyway, I loved the telepathic conversation between James and Michelle! :D It was adorable! :D

Also, what is Lenny's full name? Or is that her full name? Or is Leonarda? Leonardriette? Okay feel free to ignore me! :p

The only thing that I thought was a bit off. "He loved James brotherly". I think it should read "He loved James like a brother" or "He loved James dearly". It's just a suggestion though! It just felt a bit 'off' when I read it.

Anyway, I can't wait to read more of your work! I think the its the Avengers cross-over next!

I LOVE AVENGERS I'M SO EXCITED FOR THIS! :D

So, I really liked this! I'll be adding to my favourites and I can't wait to read more! :D

Author's Response: YAY! Another review from one of my most favorite people in the world! Huzzah! *happy dance*

Anywho, I'm really glad that you liked what I've written so far about James II. I wanted to give myself another go with Next Gen, because the first story I wrote about them was just pure awful, so I went ahead and deleted it a long time ago. I'm glad to see take two is working just fine.

And yes, Fred did get the bruises from Denny. She isn't exactly the sweetest of girls, and she does have a really bad temper, as in BAD but I'll let you see for yourself later on.

And yesh, the telepathic conversation between husband and wife. It's an intriguing concept really. It's strange because sometimes I'll see couples just staring at eachother making faces and they know exactly what's going on in the other's head. But yesh, they are an adorable couple!

And why would I ignore you? You're too awesome to ignore! Lenny's full name is Leanne.

As for the part that seemed a bit off, I know what you mean. I have no clue why that sounded good to me when I typed this up. I'll fix it once I get chapter images going and such. But yeah. I guess I was feeling in the mood of weirding things up and combining "like a brother" and "dearly". Don't ask. It's...odd. I used to love screwing with my English teachers in the past by writing this essay that they thought was really good until they read towards the end where I'll jack it up on purpose just to see how they react. I don't do it anymore, but sometimes old habits die hard. But yes, I'll definately fix that.

Thank you so much for your reviews so far! They mean so much to me, and I can't wait until you read the Avengers crossover of mine. They still need a lot of cleaning up to do, but I hope you'll enjoy them all the same. Hopefully they won't be a let down. Can't wait to see ya' around for that! :D

Much love,

Pearl

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I AM SO SORRY THAT IT HAS TAKEN ME FOREVER TO REVIEW ONE CHAPTER OF YOUR STORIES AND YOU REVIEW LIKE A MILLION OF MINE!

Anyway, I'm actually here and I'm here to start my review! (FINALLY!)

THIS WAS SO SWEET ERHMAHGERD!

I hate Bellatrix with a fiery passion, she's so evil! And so was Dolohov the stinky rat! D:<

I feel awful because this review is so short and ugh. Anyway I was wondering if there was going to be more because it said WIP on the story info? I assumed not but I'm not good with guessing and such. :p

Anyway, I loved the way you wrote Remus and Tonks, you wrote them really well! And their emotions were so anguish-y! I loved it!

Anywho, this was AMAZING and I will be back to review your other stories very soon (hopefully!) so expect me in your Unanswered Reviews! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: YAYZERZ-WAYZERZ! ohmymerlin has entered my unanswered review box! *breaks out in a random spazztic convulsion*

Anywho, getting back to reality here, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And don't you worry about taking your time to review my stuff. Take as much time as you need, there's no rushes. :)

Ahhh, Bellatrix. In all pure honesty, I love her. She's one of my favorite characters in the books. I don't know why, I'm just drawn to her cyniacle behaviour. She's badass and she knows it, although I do hate how she targets the people I also love. As for Dolohov, I couln't care less about the rat! It pees me off how I let him go in my story unscratched, but this isn't exactly the kind where you'd expect there to be a perfect ending. But I honestly hated letting him leave alive.

And don't worry about your review being short. Your reviews make me smile and brighten my day, so even if it was just one sentace I would've sqeaked with joy. Every review to me counts, so don't apologise for it being "short". It's a wonderful review as it is :)

And as for the WIP status, I keep forgetting to change it to "Complete". There really isn't another part to it officially. It's a one-shot, so that is officially the end.

And Anguish. I'm so glad that I was able to pull it off just fine. I have trouble sometimes conveying raw, powerful emotions, so to hear that I managed to get that goal right allows me to relax.

And a 10/10! Thank you! *chases you for a bear-hug*

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Review Tag! :D

This was really sweet! Remus and Tonks are a great pairing! :D

There was one error, you said, "...and my heart stoped", it's probably just a typo but I just thought I'd mention it. :)

Also, I find it quite strange that she could feel Ginny's tears on her cheeks and that she could feel her hand being taken away from Remus' and she knew she was being lifted up. I mean, if she was looking at it, it might have been a bit different... but I don't know anything about death, so feel free to ignore me! :p

I also loved the ending.

"What took you so long?" I asked curiously.
"Long story."
"We have forever."

That was really sweet!

Anyway, that one-shot was really good, I really enjoyed reading it! :D

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It's okay, I didn't need feelings. It's not important at all.

WHY DO YOU WRITE CANON SO PERFECTLY?! /sobs. I adored the way you wrote Arthur, when he was saying that he struggles sometimes! It's so Arthur-like! :p

I loved that you gave Mrs Weasley (I feel weird calling her Molly) Fabian's watch, I'd never thought of how she got it! I guess I just assumed he left everything to her. But it was so sweet and it was sweet that she didn't ask Araminta to give Gideon's watch back, she knew it was important to her.

OH MY GOSH, THIS IS THE SECOND LAST CHAPTER, ISN'T IT?!

Nooo!

I always get far too emotionally attached to fics, especially ones as good as this!

You know what, you can wait for a while before updating this. Then that means that it won't be completed for a while, and that means I won't suffer from post-traumatic stress. ;)

Okay that was a tiny bit of an exaggeration but you get my point! :p

Anywho, this was another wonderful emotionally damaging chapter (that's a good thing, by the way) and I can't and can wait for it to be updated!

AND DAMMIT ARAMINTA YOU BETTER NOT DIE ON ME, I DON'T HAVE THE CAPACITY TO DEAL WITH ANOTHER DEATH! KEEP FIGHTING FOR GIDEON, LIVE FOR GIDEON AND FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE DON'T DIE! :p

I'm not yelling at you, I'm giving Araminta a passionate talking to that only works in capital letters! :p

Obviously you get a one hundred million trillion kajillion out of ten! :D

Author's Response: Glad that you like my Arthur :) And yeah, the watch thing gives me a LOT of satisfaction. I don't know why I picked Gideon over Fabian to make this story about, but the watch thing alone justifies it in my eyes. :)

This is the second-to-last chapter ... and the last is already in the queue! If I don't post it now, then it won't go up for another two weeks, and I can't leave my readers waiting THAT long. Thanks for reviewing! :)

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Must... be... one hundred...

YAY! :D

I really hope I am, I hope that no one else takes this spot while I'm writing! :p

Anyway, I loved this chapter! Malfoy and Rose's bickering is so fun to watch/read! :p

I liked Eddie but I don't, he seems TOO nice, no one is that nice without having a catch

Anyway, I really liked this chapter! Please update soon! :D

10/10. :D

Author's Response: YOU ARE 100!! Ah, this is awesome, thank you (:

You deserve a special treat or something... but I cannot think of anything worth it right now. Any ideas?

So, thank you for this review, and I'm glad you like the chapter!! xx

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Oooh! Voldemort's dying! (Well I hope so!)
This chapter was so good! I will be returning very soon! You seem to write the characters perfectly canon! I love that!
I will be returning very soon! :D

Author's Response: He is indeed dying. ;) No worries there! I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter, and it's always fantastic to see your name crop up on the list of reviews for this story again. It makes me really happy to see that something's bringing you back!

I strive to make all my characters as canon as possible, so that compliment's really fantastic. ♥ Thank you for reviewing this chapter -- it means a lot to me! Hoping to see you back quite soon!!

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:O

I'm running out of words to use! You're just so creative and original! (Obviously I am not.)

You are SERIOUSLY talented! Can I please just steal your talent and lock it away while patting it and whispering, "My preciousss..."?

Or is that too weird?

Anywho, I just LOVED this one-shot, I love all your stories so far! :p I'll start to review some of the longer ones soon! :D

Again you get a ten out of ten, what else would I give you?! :p

Author's Response: I'm running out of words to describe how amazing you are!!!

HAHA, i'll let you pat it once :P

Ugh, honestly you are SO amazing. You are literally making my year *lovesyouforit* thank you!!!

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STAWP IT!

Stop being such a FANTASTICAL writer! D:

This was absolutely AMAZING! I've never read something about Regulus' death, and again you've surprised me with your originality! You must have such a creative mind, and I thank you for it because I adore your writing and your writing style! :D

I will read and review more, just you wait! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: YOU'RE THE ONE BEING FANTASTICAL!!

I've always enjoyed writing/reading about Regulus because there are just so many interpretations of him and none of them aren't canon, if you know what I mean. There's so much room to explore him!! :D

THANKS AGAIN LOVELY!

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I PREDICT THAT HUGO IS EMMETT'S NEW BOYFRIEND.

I love Al and Alexa, they're just so adorable together! He's always so worried for her, it's so sweet! :D

I also liked their friends reaction, it seems so... typical? Well not typical because we've hardly seen them, but... er... it's kind of ironic that they were freaking out thinking what their friends would have thought and they were completely fine with it. :p

Sorry if this doesn't make sense! :p

Please update soon! :D

Author's Response: Predict away. We shall see. :D

I understand what you mean completely, and I'm glad that came across in the chapter; it's how I wanted it to go. :)

Thank you for reviewing.

Sam.

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I ADORED this chapter! It was wonderful! :D

I love the way you write Quidditch, I feel like I'm up there with him (although I'd be a lot less coordinated! :p) and I love the detail that you put in it! :D

Also, I still love James and Lily's sibling love! ♥ It's the most adorable brother/sister combination out! :D

I really hope that James gets in the squad, he really deserves it, he's such a good spirit! :D

I still want to know what the Harry/James conflict is! And I want to know if there's something wrong with Carlotta, I was skimming through some of the older chapters and I began to grow suspicious.

*shifty eyes.*

Anyway, I can't wait to see if he got in! Hint, hint, nudge, nudge. Ah but you update quite well, I shouldn't be complaining! I'm being a little greedy! :p I can't help that your stories are SO amazing and I can't get enough out of them! :D

infinity/10! ;D

Author's Response: So far, the Quidditch is proving easier to write when James is playing. James as a spectator isn't that interested for very long anyway, and it's harder to write it from the stands. I always used to wish we had more Quidditch in the books, and I wondered why JK seemed to struggle with the matches - and now I see why! So I'm very glad that they come off well in the end :)

You will have a lot of questions answered within the next couple of chapters - specifically James' immediate Quidditch-playing future and his conflict with Harry. Unfortunately I think it may be a couple of weeks before I can update this again, because my priority now is to complete Frozen, but I will update this again as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing, it's much appreciated as always :)

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IT'S COMPLETED!

*sobs.*

AHHH! I'm so happy that he's the centre for the Tornadoes, I actually did a happy dance! I as so nervous for him and when he did the try-outs, it reminded me of Katniss in the Hunger Games! Although she had to shoot an arrow at the Gamemakers and James had to knock a quaffle out of a blonde girl in a bikini. :p

Anyway, the thought of Freddie cat-walking up to a camera made me giggle very loudly, anything that you write makes me laugh! :D

I can't WAIT to read the sequel, I love Quidditch stories, even more when they have James in it! ;D

741285295628653217845/10! :D

Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT.

James could have totally shot an arrow... into his foot.

I'm glad I can make you laugh. These crazy characters just sort of write themselves. They're oddballs.

Thank you so much! I really hope you enjoy the sequel!

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PA-CHOW.
THIS WAS SO FLUFFY I LOVED IT! ♥
I love James and Lily, you've characterised them so well! :D :D
And I can't believe Lily and Sirius don't want to go to Mary's memorial, I know that their reasons are perfectly valid but I think that they should still go! D:
The scene where they find out each other's patronus was SO adorable! I was just like, "NAWWW!"
But then Snape came and ruined it like he always does! I hate Snape with a fiery passion in this story, he's just such a jerk and ew. Don't like him at all!
Anyway, CONGRATULATIONS ON ALL THE DOBBY'S YOU WON! :D YOU DESERVE THEM ALL! :D
2527418548562856/10! :D

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So I thought I'd come and look at your other stories because I loved your other one-shot so much.

GAH! STOP BEING SUCH A FANTASTIC WRITER!

This was a REALLY good one-shot, I think you wrote the Marauders + Lily + Dumbledore + Snape really well! And for your first time writing next-gen, this was SO good!

I've never read a story where the next-gen kids meet their grandparents/namesakes. You have a very original mind, missy!

I loved the way you made Snape like Al, that was sweet. And I loved Sirius' reaction to finding out what Al's name was. :p I could imagine him saying to Harry, "Have you lost your marbles?!" :p

Anyway, I loved this one-shot and now I am off to read another! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: ohmymerlin, you again! Ah, you're making my day!! Honestly :P *virtual hug*

I've been thinking about this story for a really long time, since I've realised that Harry merely dropped the resurrection stone in the forest, somewhere any curious, slightly wayward child could find it :P

I've always wondered how Snape in particular would have felt knowing that Harry had named his son after him. And there's so much room to actually explore that idea because it's not like he's truly gone from the world (his portrait in the headmaster's office!) so there it is :P

Again, I'd like to THANK YOU SO MUCH! You're really fantastic!! ♥

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...

Wow.

Oh. My. Gosh.

This is absolutely AMAZING!

Seriously, I just stared at it in awe for ages, it's a FANTASTIC one-shot!

I can't put the thoughts and feelings I have into words. It's THAT good!

I ADORE the way you wrote Sirius' anguish, it's so new and creative. I also LOVED the spin you put on his mother, we only see her as a ruddy old cow that doesn't care for her son at all. I absolutely loved that you didn't make her like that, you made her as an actual motherly figure!

It was so, so, so sad when he was writing to Regulus, waiting for a response. His letters were so heart-breaking, I just wanted to reach into the computer and hug him.

This one-shot is absolutely brilliant! I've never read anything as good as this! If the Dobby's were still here I would have nominated this! It's actually now my favourite one-shot on this site!

The last line:

The screams stop and for an infinitesimal moment, he wishes they didn't.

Really pulled at my heartstrings! It just finished the story so powerfully, it was just amazing!

Of course you get a 10/10! It's EXTREMELY well-written! :D

Author's Response: You actually made me blush SO much!!! You mentioning the Dobby's honestly made my day.. Thank you so much for that!! I've always wondered how it'd feel to be nominated for the Dobby's and you saying that is amazing!

I've always had this belief that mother could never, ever not love their child. You don't carry someone for 9 months inside of you and not feel something, anything for them, no matter how different they are to you.

Another belief of mine was that Sirius and Regulus had always had a profound, under-explored relationship and I thought letters would work :P

I love you SO much for leaving this review!!! Honestly!!! I had to stare at it and read it over and over again before I could reply to it :P

THANK YOU!

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This was so good! D:
I'm going to miss reading about Al/Jan/James! They're so dynamic and what-not! :p
I loved how close he was to Al/Jan and Ellen, it was just so sweet! :D
Anyway, I loved this one-shot! 10/10! :D

Author's Response: I'm going to miss Al, Jan,and James too. Thank you for this lovely review! I'm really glad that you liked it :D

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