YES JOHN GREEN AND JILY THIS IS GREAT.

I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE REST! :D

Also I love math (DON'T JUDGE ME PLEASE) so this is just perfect ohmg yay!

Just one thing, be careful when putting in italics and stuff because you seem to get rid of the spaces. E.g.

"...that her friend sent her way.{Purebloods.}"

" She would be famous! Lily Evans,{muggleborn} witch,"

other than that, it was great! I really like this story so far! :D

It's so different to all the other Jily's I've read! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: UGH. well that's annoying. Definitely fixing those XD

BUT REALLY THOUGH YOU'RE TOO NICE.

Thank you so much for the review you lovely creature you xx

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SQUEEE!

This is ADORABLE! I LOVE it thank you so much! :D

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This is my favourite gift, thank you so much! :D

gdhksfbvkvf I keep squeaking and grinning like an idiot! I really loved this one-shot, thank you so much! :D

84518645198645/10! ;D

Author's Response: Oh geez, this has taken me forever to respond to. I'm so sorry. But I'm happy you liked it!

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AWWW!

I really liked this one-shot! I thought it was really sweet and you GET CANON SO RIGHT!

You are one of my favourite authors on here, I LOVE your style of writing! :'D

I really loved this one-shot, it was really sweet! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: I've had this little thing hanging around for a few months now. I wanted to post it before Christmas but got my timing wrong; still, better late than never! I'm really glad you enjoyed it though, thanks for reviewing! :)

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waaahhh, you're just perfect.

me=crying+laughing

Sirius is sort of back to normal, I'm glad. :)

I just love this so much! :D

657845745178945/10! ;D

Author's Response: Ee!

Thank you very much dear! Glad that you liked it :) :) :) :) :)

Merry christmas!

-AC

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I was hating Summer this whole chapter. I was actually ready to murder her.

buT THEN SHE FINALLY ADMITTED IT!

HALLELUJAH!

*doves come flying out of nowhere*

I actually have nothing else to say, I just loved this chapter so much. :D

74516453745/10! ;D

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stOP BEING SO PERFECT

JAMES IS THE BIGGEST IDIOT I KNOW BUT I STILL LOVE HIM! :D YOU HAVE SUCH A TALENT IN WRITING OH MY GOLLY GOSH! :D

AND I DON'T LIKE HARRY IN THIS STORY, BUT HE SEEMS SO REALISTIC! :O

AND POOR GINNY AND LILY!

AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEW CHARACTER! :D

WHY DOES THERE HAVE TO BE A QUEUE I DON'T WANT TO WAIT! :p

also, I don't know if you know but there will be a period where HPFF goes offline so back-up your stories and reviews just in case! I don't want to lose this fic!!! :D

now back to the fic, OH MY GOLLY GOSH! I REALLY DISLIKE HARRY AT THE MOMENT, BUT I CAN'T WORK OUT IF HE'S DOING IT FOR JAMES OR HIMSELF (because we see James' POV I feel I'm a bit biased).

And Ginny, I feel so bad for her! I love that James still kind of cares for her, he feels guilty about upsetting her but he needs to get over his damn pride!

I actually love this fic so much and this is going to sound weird but I'm actually sort of honoured that I've read it!

It's just SUCH A GOOD NOVEL! And it's so ORIGINAL and there are no cliches!

Anyway, absolutely LOVED this chapter (as if you couldn't tell though! :p) and I can't wait for the next one, whenever that may be! :D

851653127451254108452354178451274845 x infinity/10! ;D

Author's Response: James is a total idiot! I'm glad that you like him anyway though, it means that he's still acting fairly realistically even though he's being a plank :) Harry doesn't come across at all well at this point; hopefully he'll redeem himself in chapters to come. He doesn't mean to be horrible to James; a lot of it is down to how James perceives him to be. As for whether Harry did what he did for himself or for James... It's like he said himself, he hates corruption within the Ministry, he hates people who jump through hoops and take advantage where they can. And he's just done that very same thing...

I am aware about HPFF going offline, no need to worry! I have this fic saved twice on my pc, but I did do a cheeky review backup the other day :) hopefully I'll get the next chapter out as soon as I can once the queue is reopened. Thanks for reviewing!



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Hello again!

It's the laaast one (read that in the Dodo's voice from Ice Age when talking about the watermelon).

I loved all the detail and emphasis you put on with the wands! It was really great! :D

You can also find more about wands on Pottermore, when I first read it I was so happy, I looked like a cat with catnip. :p

Just one thing, you've written:
Thor whispered demandingly,

"How is it your wand spit out a jet of blue light?"

That line doesn't make much sense. Maybe if there was a comma, it might clear it up. Or instead of spit, you write spat? Or add a that before your wand?

Anyway, I think that was the only typo I noticed. :)

This was a really good chapter, it was really ~mysterious~ and I loved that! :D

Anyway, I can't wait for the update! :D

10/10! :D

HAPPY HOLIDAYS! :D

Author's Response: Hey lovely!

Yes, the last chapter until the next update, which I haven't had the proper time to construct. I've been so caught up these past few months, exhausting all my brain power on school work, catching up with my weaker scoring classes that I haven't typed anything at all for chapter thirteen, as well as further chapters to all my other stories. The fact that I won't be able to submit anything at all until next year also dissapoints me, because then I'd be falling waaay behind than I intentionally planned, but I guess it's alright.

And yesh, I understand the Ice Age reference. I friggin' LOVED that scene. To be honest, I haven't seen that movie in a long time. I need to go watch it again. I love Sid. He's so...awesome. :D

And Pottermore! I haven't visited that site in forever. I got my account this last summer, and I remember staying up till one in the morning just to get caught up in all the action. I didn't check much into the whole wandlore though. I'll go check it out sometime, when I have the chance to visit the site again.

hehe...cat in catnip... XD

Ahh! Typos! Thank you for pointing this out to me. I'll bear in mind to fix it again when I undergo my second round of revising and editing.

And I am really glad that you enjoyed this chapter! Hopefully I don't leave you hanging too long for an update. I'm starting to think a lot of the people who favorited probably believe I've lost hope and abandoned this story because it's just been so long. Hopefully I can get one up once the new year comes around.

And happy holidays to you too! *throws a butt-load of silver, green, and scarlett confettie everywhere while singing "We Wish You a Merry Christmas"*

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Okay first let me apologise for my lack of reviewing for these past chapters. My life has gotten so busy and although I've read all the new chapters, I haven't had the time to review. :(

ANYWAY,

OH MY LORD JESUS JAMES YOU NINCOMPOOP!

YOU HAVE ISSUES BOY!

(although I love him anyway because he isn't so cliche and he's flawed which makes him such a good character)

I CAN'T BELIEVE HE ASSAULTED A REPORTER! THIS IS MY FAVOURITE STORY OF ALL STORIES NOW YOU HAVE WON FIRST PLACE HERE'S A TROPHY.

*hands trophy*

AND HE LOST HIS CHANCE FOR THE WORLD CUP I'M SO SAD FOR HIM EVEN THOUGH HE KINDA HAD IT COMING!

I JUST WANT TO HUG HIM AND TELL HIM IT'S ALL GOING TO BE OKAY WHILE ROCKING HIM LIKE A LITTLE CHILD AND JUST SOOTHING HIM BECAUSE HE'S SUCH A LIL CUTIE. D:

I have never felt this much passion for a character, you really have a talent for writing! You should seriously consider doing it as a career! All your stories are amazing, but this one is just SOOO good, although I'm guessing it's because it's your most recent one.

I just - I can't even. My brain is fried.

When he cried, ack! I actually felt the pain he was probably feeling! D:

You are perfect. You're fabulous.

Please, please, please, please, please update soon! And is Carlotta going to come back or is that done and dusted? D:

And I finally understand why you picked that title! James is definitely off the rails! :p

But I still love him! ♥

Thank you for writing this wonderful piece of writing, I'm actually so happy that I found it. :D

741986451798645317845123784534531986416874165264153/10! ;D

Author's Response: You don't need to apologise for not reviewing! It's totally fine, real life has to take precedence every now and again. ;) It's nice to know you're still enjoying the story though. :)

Nincompoop is one word to describe James! He has issues indeed. SO MANY ISSUES. And, sadly, he had to be dropped from the England squad. Poor thing. :( Carlotta will of course come back at some stage! You don't think I could just cast her off to sea given all that she means to James, do you? But it won't be easy for him, he'll have a lot to deal with before he gets her back...

And this is indeed the point where the title becomes apt. :) Thank you so much for your kind words, it means so so much that you like the fic! Compared to my other stuff ... it's a lot more recent than anything else; it's even about a year younger than Frozen. Some of my earlier stuff makes me cringe *giggles* And I've invested a lot more time in this than anything else I've written, so I guess maybe that shows here. I'm glad that you like my other stuff too though; it makes me feel less concerned about whether I should take some of it down!

Thanks for reviewing :)

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This is actually my favourite chapter so far oh my god it was amazing!

Can I just say that you got the trio SPOT ON! It was EXACTLY the way J. K. Rowling wrote them! :O I am jealous of your talent! :p

And Rose is me. I am Rose. I love Thor and my next favourite would have to be Captain America and she was fangirling like I'm fangirling right now. :p

And the song! AHAHAHAHAHAHA SUCH A GOOD SONG! :D and I loved James and Albus! And Teddy!

Okay I loved everyone! :p

And OH MY GOD I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THE "Fury is furious" THING! :D

I loved it so much! I think there's only one more chapter until I have to wait for updates! :D

So yes I adored this chapter. :D

472964618649174829/10! ;D

Author's Response: Oh haai gurlie! Fancy seeing you here. I just clicked on my unanswered review box thingy and yours litterally just popped up. I let out a little squeal and held a five second party, while doing the cha-cha on my seat :)

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter the most. I honestly enjoyed typing this out than any other chapter in the story, mainly because of the Potter kids :)

And I'm glad I was able to capture the Trio as close to perfect as I could get them. I was hoping they stayed true to their character when I just typed it all out, and it's nice to know I prevailed.

And yes, Rose can be like your Weasely twin. She's fangirling, you're fangirling, I'm fangirling. The world's just fangirling about anything and everything right now! (and fanboying, though I'm sure guys won't ever admitt it). And Thor's just one of those guys that would make girls and animals, and plants drop to ground cause he's beautiful. :)

And yesh! The theme song to this chapter was very much necessary. It wasn't even planned in the beginning, but then I thought, "what the heck?", and the chapter was born!

And puns, puns, puns! I think this was just as bad as the "MARVELous" one, but I'm glad that someone shares the happiness I felt from what I got out of it.

And yes, I think it is one more chapter. Gawd, I haven't updated in a month, to be honest, but I've been so busy. Hopefully I can squease a chapter in before the queue closes, but if not, then it should have to wait. I didn't get as far as I wanted to. I was actually planning a christmas chapter, but I guess that won't happen soon.

Can't wait to see you next chapter! :)

Thank you lovely for your support

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sHE'S NOT A FAN OF HARRY POTTER?!

ahahaha no that's not what I took in. :p I just wanted to be stupid. :p

Anyway, I LOVED this chapter, I kinda have a weird thing about Fury, he's just so funny and perfect. :p

It's not like my Thor obsession, more of an idol-y obsession. :p

Anyway, I really liked this chapter and when I get on a computer I'll respond to your review soon! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Lol, yeah, Maria Hill doesn't have a clue about Potter-verse. How much has she been missing out on, the world may never know.

And Fury's just that kind of guy. He gives complicated vibes to everyone. Either you love him, or hate him, and I personally have a weird fonding for him myself. (Is fonding even a word?!?)

And I'm glad you liked this chapter. Thank you so much for the review. Your reviews make me so happy!

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Okay I reviewed for 2 reasons.

1) For the actual review (it'll come after the second reason).

2) You need to back up EVERYTHING! HPFF is going offline for a few days and you should back up everything as a precaution! I'm not too sure if you heard but I just wanted to tell you in case you didn't know. :) Back up reviews as well, but if everything does get wiped *knocks on wood*, you won't be able to get the reviews back there. It's more for you to be able to see all the nice things people have said. :D

Okay now onto the review!

I LOVED this chapter! I love Clint/Natasha! It's SUCH a cute couple! :D

You wrote them really well! I loved all the interactions and such. :')

I don't really have much to say, sorry! I just really liked this chapter it made me want to go, "SQUEEE!" :p

Anyway, I'll hopefully be back soon! :D

Author's Response: Hey lovely!

Thank you so much for the heads up. I had no clue that was possible, and because I have extra time on my hands right now, I shall do just that!

And thank you, I'm glad to know that I had written them well, and pleased to see that you enjoyed this chapter. They are adorbs aren't they? I just want to rope them up together forever and call it quits. BUT, I'm not going to make their shipment sail by so easily, unfortunately.

And that is fine :) Your reviews are beautiful as they are, and I'm delighted to know it made you feel like going "SQUEE!"

And I shall leave you some reviews myself. I have the time, and I shall embrace the oppertunity! :D

Thanks lovely, for all your support and of course, the heads up! :)

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Well I decided to review the next chapter now because I'm just THAT amazing! :p *hairflick*

(I'm joking by the way, I'm not really that arrogant - something that we can't say for Tony. :p)

I really loved this chapter and I was wondering how do you pronounce "McKay"? Is it the way you pronounce the surname, either "Mc-kai" or "Mc-key"?

I'm just curious. :)

Also, NO STEVE! You're only allowed to like Peggy!!! D:

I'm sorry this is my canon-nut coming out to play. :p

Anyway, I don't really have much to say in this chapter because I really loved it. :D

So yeah, 10/10! :D

Author's Response: Yes, you are very amazing! And no, it's not arrogant at all, because it's the truth!

And you prononce McKay as "Mc-Kay". I was debating about what you meant with "Mc-Kai", but here "Mc-Kai" sounds like "Mc-Kye". So.yeah! :D

And yesh, Steve+McKay! Only Steve's going to have to face through heartbreak again, I'm afraid. Poor Steve :(

And It's okay, your reviews are always lovely, and I couldn't ask for more. They're perfect! And I PROMISE, like cross my HEART, swear, that I will come around to review your stuff. I just hadn't had the time to lately, because, well...life. A crappy answer but I promise, I will get back to yeh!

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Bleb this is so late I'm sorry! D: I'm currently writing this because I have a free period and I swear, I've read this chapter a million times. :p

Anyways, this was a really good chapter! :D I liked all the interactions and such! :p

Although one thing, Hagrid wouldn't have been a Care of Magical Creatures teacher, he was still thought to be the one that brought the monster into the school and killed Myrtle. But it wasn't TOO big of a deal, I'm just a canon nut. :p

I really liked Clint and his arrow puns/jokes. :D I love puns and lame jokes so that's probably why. :p

And Thor, ♥, he's just perfect. ♥ I will marry him one day, just you watch! ;)

Anyway, loved this chapter and I will come to review again soon-ish, my last assessment is on the 12th so hopefully I'll have a bit more time! (although it is unlikely, my teachers just pile it on).

I'll be back. >:)

Author's Response: ERMEGHERD *random muscles spazzam ensues*

Hey lovely! Don't worry about being so late. I have honestly been lousy with my reviewing, reading, and writing these past few weeks. It's been more than a solid month and I have made no progress whatsoever, so don't feel bad.

But I'm so happy you're returning to writing. I can't wait to read some more stuff from yew! :3
I shall be creeping on here more often :D

And I didn't really put that into consideration when I worte that at the time. It was just something I felt like dooing. Oh well, I guess it can be labeled as alternate universe? No...okay, maybe not. But oh welps! And don't worry about being canon. We ALL love canon. :)

And Clint. Yesh. Puns and jokes and cheesiness all over the place. MEH-HEH-HEH

XD

Yeah, it's the christmas cookies getting to me.

And Thor. Thor shall be yours someday indeed!

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Okay, I'm finally here!

*doves fly out from cardboard boxes*

This was such a sweet chapter ♥ I loved it so much!!

I understood the pairings completely, I hope Natasha and Lily become best friends 4 lyfe! :p

Sorry I've had cold medicine so I think it's made me a bit loopy. :p

ANYWAY, I reeeaaalllyyy loved this chapter! You seemed to have gotten the characters personalities spot-on! ;)

Although I found it a little odd that Dumbledore just let them have their lessons off, but ah well, the story wouldn't have been able to move on otherwise. :p

I will be returning to read the next chapter (hopefully) soon! :D

Author's Response: Why hell-ll-ll-oo-oo there!

*catches a flying dove and rejoices*

Huzzah!

I'm glad you liked this chapter. I thought it was kinda adorbs too, with them partnering up. Like study buddies! And they'll study together in the Room of Requirement, and, and.yeah! Big comfy bean bags for everyone! :P

Ahhh, I'm feeling tingly inside, with the sudden warmth of happiness... Oh gawd, this is getting weird. But I suppose with your cold medicine, we can be loopy together :)

And I hope you feels better! *Passes over a warm bowl of soup and saltine crackers*

And that's good that I've got their personalities spot on. I aim to keep it close to who they really are, so it's a relief they're turning out okay. But yes, good ol' Dumbly-dore. He does seem a little laid back, doesn't he? I totaly get your perspective, but I think I lazed up there quite a bit, and chose the easy way out. *bows head in shame*

And don't worry deary, take your time. No rushes. :)


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Thor, Thor, Thor, Thor, Thor, Thor, Thor. ♥

I have an unhealthy obsession with him. You write him so perfectly! :D

Also, Natasha shouldn't be too upset about being in Slytherin, it's a house of ambition! And cunning-ness! Just because she's in Slytherin doesn't mean she's evil! D:

(I'm a Hufflepuff by the way, not a Slytherin - I'm just being Hufflepuff-y. :p)

I have a bad feeling because Clint keeps getting pushed aside - not really pushed aside, but I feel like he's going to be forgotten or something. D: Maybe it's just because I love him so much and not seeing him the whole chapter makes me sad. :p

AND JILY AGAIN! ♥ Although, I think Lily is being a BIT unreasonable! She's being quite rude to James!

NO, LILY. YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO HURT MY JAMES. HE'S TOO MUCH OF A SWEETHEART.

:D

Anyway, I loved this chapter! I'll try and read the rest soon! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Haha, oh Kayla! Your little obsession for Thor is so adorable. If I could, I would so send you a box of Thor plushies and action figures. But thank you for complimenting me on my portrayal of him. It makes me happy when my character(s) seem somewhat realistic.

And don't worry. Natasha will definately adjust to her house. She'll sort of gain that pride for being a Slytherin later, because I agree, she is ambitious and cunning -- which is what makes her beast.

And don't feel sad about Clint. I have a whole chapter dedicated to him and Tasha, you just haven't read it yet. ;)
Don't worry, he's far from forgotten.

And yesh, JILY! Lily's just undergoing sexual tension with James...she's still...conflicted(?) But don't worry, she'll come around sooner or later. She has to right?

And thank you for the lovely rating as well as the review. Hope to see you soon. :D

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ily Thor

omg when you first described Barty Crouch Jr, and you hadn't said his name I was like, "OHMIGOSH THIS IS BARTY CROUCH JR I AM SHERLOCK"

Jokes Robert Downey Jr and Benedict Cumberbatch are the Sherlocks and RDJ is also Tony Stark.

ANYWAAAYYY, I really liked this chapter! I like all the interactions. :D

Especially this line:

"Brother dearest always gives people the creeps. And I must say, he's bloody good at it."

Did I mention I love Thor? :p

He's just so perfect omfg ♥

LILY/JAMES SHIPPING LILY/JAMES LILY/JAMES YAY JILY, JILY, JILY, JILY, JILY

ILY JILY

ILY THOR

ILY THIS STORY

I do apologise for the strangeness of this review. I had five packs of Maltesers so I'm a bit loopy. :D

and ahahahaha lil Reggie tried flirting with Natasha! :p What a newbb

AND THERE WAS SOME CLINT/NATASHA ACTION YEWW

SHIPPING IS GREAT ♥

ANYWHO, I'm going to just slide off and read the next chapter because who needs English essays? :D

Author's Response: Lol! Aren't you Thor's little stalker?!? You're so adorable with your fangirl-ness:)

And don't you worry about your review being strange. I enjoy reading strange reviews. They add a little spice to my life.

And yes. Reggie is a newb. But he's adorable in his own sneaky way. Natasha better look out for him though, just as a little forewarning...

And yes, who needs english essays? Speaking of English essays, I need to do mine as well.

Thank you for stopping bye to review! It's so lovely reading all your reviews. I hadn't had the time to update anything though, or stalk your stories, but next week, time should clear up due to Thanksgiving break.

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I love James so much, but seriously, he needs to MAN UP AND GROW A PAIR!

I just want to whack him across the head with a newspaper to try and make him see sense!

And I love him so much! :p

You are such a talented writer, you've made me absolutely love him yet get so angry at him! :p

I loved the way he didn't want to call Louis because even after all that, he didn't want his pride to be shattered. :p

Fred is kind of wise, but I think he might have to take his own advice, the silly duffer! :p

At least he didn't sleep with anyone else this time! :D

Although James was kind of in the wrong for storming out of the interview, I don't think his family should have been so harsh on him. They should have just celebrated and be happy for him! :(

And then slip it in at the end but be nice about it rather than a full rant-thingy.

Ah well, they're looking out for him so I guess it's kind of good. :)

Anyway, I loved this chapter and how fast it came! You must be superwoman! :p

10/10! :D

Author's Response: This chapter was written quickly, after the reaction of the last one! I got completely stuck with how to make things happen, and then I found my inspiration and knocked out three chapters. So there's more to come in the very near future!

James does need to sort himself out a bit here. He's on a slippery slope right now, and it's not good! His family don't help him, because he doesn't respond well to being berated like this. Unfortunately, they don't really know how to deal with him in a situation like this, so it's all getting worse.

James has a big ego. A lot of the time, this is his downfall. Ironically, in this instance if he'd just stuck to his guns and NOT gone on a night out with Louis, things would be better for him. As you will see with the next update. :)

Freddie is a funny one. Occasionally, he has a gem of advice. He just has a different way of looking at things, which means that a lot of the time he comes across as a bit of a fool, but when he's right he's VERY sensible. More to come from him, including why he can't take his own advice :)

Thanks for reviewing!

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yo.

Kayla is here.

Okay, I'll stop. I really liked this, it was adorable seeing the Marauder's act brotherly. :')

Also, THOR WILL BE IN THE BEST HOUSE EVER (AKA HUFFLEPUFF) AND THEN WE CAN GET MARRIED AND HAVE CHILDREN TOGETHER.

Or, he could be in Gryffindor. :p

and omg gotta love Loki. So narrow-minded yet still loveable! :p

Anyway, I really liked this chapter, it was nice seeing them all interact. :D

Author's Response: EEK! Kayla! Good to see ya' gurl! Totaly brightened my day to see your sweet review sitting in my review box. :)

And yesh, the Mauraders are sweet, aren't they? They're the best-est!

And I see you have a fling for Thor, eh? Fandom characters are the best to dream big about. My honest favorite would be Steve, but that's just meh. And I'm sowwie, I didn't make Thor a Hufflepuff. ;( (Please don't be mad)

And yesh! Loki. I want to just squeeze his cheeks.

Glad to see you liked the chapter. Thank you for reviewing. :)

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NAUGHTY JAMES! YOU NAUGHTY, NAUGHTY BOY!

(Oh and I know Allegra didn't deserve my bleep but I was just frustrated, I know she's a perfectly nice girl so you can reassure her that I still like her as a character even though James is a NAUGHTY BOY!)

James, you silly goose! I'm sure it's hard being in the media all the time but MAN UP DAMMIT!

Or GROW up, you need to just accept that this is your life now!

AND APOLOGISE TO BRIGID, YOU ARE HIGH MAINTENANCE AND SHE WAS SO LOVELY TO YOU AND SHE WAS YOUR FRIEND!

AND I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU SAID THOSE THINGS TO HER, THAT'S SO DISGUSTING AND RUDE THAT YOU EVEN THOUGHT ABOUT SAYING THAT!

NAUGHTY BOY!

*shakes fist*

It's like he had a temper tantrum and instead of going to his room and playing sad, depressing music, he went to the pub and slept with a... a new flavour.

Sigh, although James is acting like a brat in this chapter, I still loved it! He has flaws and it makes him seem so real!

But he's also VERY insecure and sometimes he takes things for granted! Also, he's very quick to judge others! And I know he has his reasons for the way he is, but it is kind of hypocritical!

But I still love him! :') Even with all his faults, I love him. :p

By the way, I'm not bashing the way you write James because I think you've got it perfect, I'm just frustrated at him, not you the writer.

If that makes sense...

Anyway, I loved this chapter! I want to read moreee!

And I want Carlotta back! D: James without Carlotta is a very angry and frustrated James.

That's the first sign that they're meant to be together forever. :p

7865416854841574174165123/10! ;D

Author's Response: Yeah, James has said some horrible things to a fair few people in this chapter. Unfortunately for him, there's more to come. He's learning about the ugly side of fame, and he's really not dealing with it well. He's a very flawed character, and I'm glad that that's becoming very clear. He has a lot of learning to do. And don't worry, I'm glad that you're frustrated at him! It means I'm doing things right. :)

James is VERY angry and frustrated without Carlotta. Not Good at all...

Thanks for reviewing!

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waht why did I not review this?!

This was so cute, I like seeing them all bond and be cute! :p

Denny is a bit crazy, I love her! :p

Sorry for the short review, I want to review 'Of Superheroes and Wizards: 1978'! :p But I need to finish bio, so it may end up being a little later!

Can't wait for the next update! :D

10/10! (Fun fact, I accidentally typed 20/20 instead of 10/10! :p)

Author's Response: Yes, they are a cute group of three aren't they? Even though they're 16 and too old to be acting "cute", oh welps! :p

And yesh, Denny. She is a bit crazy, but this is the friendly side of her. I plan on making her a bit wicked later on when Michelle shows her purty little face. But that isn't for a while.

And the short review is totally a-okay! Your reviews always make me happy, so don't worry about it. :)

And thank you for your fabtabulous rating of 10/10. I find that flattering, and actually quite an ego boost.

Can't wait to see ya around lovely! :D

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oh my gawd.

This was so sad! I was nearly crying, if I had been in my room and around none of my family I'd be full on sobbing. This was so emotionally moving, I can't believe how sad it was!

It was just perfect, Pearl. It really was!

(Have I said that I love your name? If not, I really love your name! :p)

Also, I'm so sorry! I was meant to review so much last night but I have this major bio thing on and I needed to do it. :( Although after Thursday, I should have a bit more time to review! :D

I was so annoyed, because I actually had everything open and then the Internet crashed so I had to do bio and I realised that it took longer than what it expected. So, now I'm gonna go and I'm so sorry for my crappiness in leaving reviews! D:

Anyway, this was absolutely wonderful, I loved it so much! It was so angsty and emotional!

10/10! :D

P.S. THE INTERNET DID IT AGAIN. IT KEEPS CRASHING EVERY TIME I TRY REVIEW ANY STORY, WHAT IS THIS?!

Author's Response: The internet keeps crashing everytime you try to review? What is this madness? IT'S A CONSPIRACY, I TELL YOU!

*ends hyperventilating*

Anywho, I'm really pleased that you liked this one-shot and found it powerful in emotions. This was actually written a few months ago, because I really wanted to play with Regulus' character, and I've posted it up before, but then I took it down for revamping. I'm pleased to see that my revamping payed off. To make someone come close to tears with my writing is like, a really BIG accomplishment for me, believe it or not.

And don't be sad. Be happy! Well, I take that back, this was a pretty miserable chapter-- but I promise you, not all one-shots in this collection are going to be dark and full of sorrow like this one.

*passes over a box of Kleenex*

And major bio thing, eh? Hopefully everything turns out okay for you! I've had bio last year (We are talking about biology class...right? If we aren't, *facepalm*) But yeah, I took it last year, bio's fun...I guess.

And yes, you have complimented me on my name, but thank you again! Kayla's a pretty name too! :)

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YOU DA BEST! ♥

This was so wonderfully adorable, I loved this new spin on them! :D

But I hate all the other people! They were so cruel! They're eleven!

This is really ironic because some of my moronic friends tried to beat up year eights (they didn't) and I was scolding them that they were being pathetic. And that's what I want to do to the guys that beat up Scorpius they're four years older than him (same age difference now that I think about it :p) and they shouldn't be doing that! Although the thing with my friends was because a sandwich was thrown, I was dying of laughter because they got annoyed because of that! How pathetic, right? :p

SO, that was a bit of a tangent. Anyway, I can't believe they expect Rose to have awesome brains like Hermione. Ron didn't have perfect brains (as we see in HBP :p) and why couldn't his intellect be passed on? :p

I liked the little friendship at the end, I'm so honoured that I have a fic dedicated to me. ♥

Thank you so much for writing this for me, I'm so flattered!

Please update soon! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Kayla, lovely! I'm so glad that you liked it! Throughout the whole entire validation process, I couldn't help but think, "what if she doesn't like it?". But I'm glad that you feel honored, and you deserve it because you're like, my HPFF bestie! :)

And yes, they are cruel aren't they? But they have their father's blood for one thing. I know it sucks that out of all schools they'd have the nerve to show their faces into Hogwarts! Bullies...I don't get them, but they're every where nowadays.

And someone threw a sandwhich at your friends? And they wated to go beat them up? Oh dear! I mean yes, it's totaly reasonable to get a bit peed, but to actually plot to go out and beat them up? That's a tid-bit harsh. It's a good thing though you scolded them! They didn't need to go do the unreasonable!

And yes, the whole "Rose must be smart like Hermione". I see a lot of that on here to be honest. Not trying to flame anyone who does view Rose as highly intellectual, I just wanted to toy with something different. But yes, I think it's safe to say Rosy takes up a bit more after her father in this story.

And the little friendship thing t'was adorable wasn't it? Good thing there'll be pleanty more to look forward to. But I'll warn you right now, not everything's going to be cupcakes and butterflies. Er...Henry's got problems of his own. But I got to keep my lips zipped now. No more giving things away. ;)

And yes! Like I said, you very well do deserve a story out there dedicated for you. 2nd chapter is currently undergoing construction. :)

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Hello there! I come from the land down under so I thought I'd read this little fic! :D

This was really good, there was no grammatical or spelling errors that I saw but I felt you introduced too many characters. My mind was going mad, there was so much information in one chapter! :p

Also, I don't know if you're going to say this is future chapters, but when England or America has summer, we Australians have winter. And vice versa. I just wanted to point that out to you, in case you weren't aware. ;)

Anyway, I really liked this story, you did a really good job on it! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, it's my first one ever! I can totally see where you are coming from with the too many characters, i guess I just got a little excited :)

I actually went to Australia on a trip this summer, so I do know about the seasons, but thanks for looking out for me! If you notice anything in future chapters that aren't correct about Australian culture, feel free to point it out!

Thanks again for your review :)

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Hello again! :D

This was another amazing chapter, however there were a few mistakes but I think it can just be cleared up if you read the story aloud.

Also, I was confused when Hagrid was leading the Avengers to Hogwarts. But this might be because my cousins were attacking me and my attention wasn't really focused. :p

And I saw your last response, that you felt it was still er... I can't exactly remember what you said, but I think you were a bit worried about the whole thing. If you want you can join the forums and ask for a Beta, I would love to do it but I've got far too much on my plate. :( They're really helpful! :D and we could be forums buddies! :D

So this was another amazing chapter, I loved it! I loved the food fight! James and Sirius were hilarious.

Is Ajax an English name? Because over here in Australia it's a type of cleaner thingy. :p It made me giggle. :p

So this was another amazing chapter! I can't wait to read more! :D

10/10!

Author's Response: Oh hello there! :D

And yes, typos! I tried to fix it up once when editing the first five (?) Chapters, but Microsoft Word doesn't catch everything that I don't catch, so I'm going to have to undergo edits...again.

And about you being confused about the Hagrid scene, I'll go back and look over it. I may just have to re-edit it or something, but I'll get to fixing everything up once time slackens. Your cousins sound so sweet though. :)

And I would love a Beta, however, I tried joining the forums before, but as I was signing up it said my email was invalid. I tried refreshing the page and closing my browser, but it kept saying the same thing. Hence why I don't have a MTA's page yet. I don't really like creating a new email either, because then I lose track of it, and as of right now I have a total of four different emails due to lost passwords and I can't remember my security questions. But other than that, I would LOVE to join the forums.

And I'm glad you like the food fight. It was my favorite part when wri...er, typing this chapter. :)

And Ajax. Honestly, I was thinking of something "different", seeing the series had some uncommon names. Ajax is actually a Trojan Warrior in mythology, killing 28 people and eventuallykilled by Paris and Apollo, but that's not really important, just a bit of background. So yeah, Ajax was a pretty strong and tough dude, wich I thought, explained the Woods pretty well, so Ajax it was! But yeah, I can see the comedy of it. Ajax is a type of cleaner here in the states as well. :)

Hopefully the story doesn't loose it's touch, and I'm eager to what you say on your next review :)

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I decided to review it to be the first because YAY!

I love Lily, she seems adorable! :D I also like Aaron, he's a very unique character!

I totally understand about the beginning of school, it's always very frustrating! :p

I really liked this story! It's really cute and original!

10/10! ♥

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