Hey there! Long time no see; school is such a pain! :(

I really love this story! You write the Golden trio extremely well, it's hard to believe that she isn't in the books. I know she's mentioned once or twice, but as a plot hole, but I find it great that you've managed to fit her in!

I still hate Benjamin, he's a disgusting ghost/imaginary friend and I wish he died when they thought he did in the prequel. :(

The last line is extremely sweet! I actually "awh'ed" :p

I can't wait to see where this goes! If Benjamin will actually be defeated or not?! :D

Anyway, love this story and can't wait to see the next update! :)

10/10

Author's Response: Hi again! Ah, yeah, I hear you about school! At least you found a bit of spare time to check out the new chapter! (I really have to get better with my updates!)

Phew, I'm not messing up the Trio's characters! I know I can't use them every chapter because otherwise I would stray from canon, but their conversation with Sally-Anne *could* have happened. :) I mean, it doesn't have anything to do with the Prisoner of Azkaban (as far as any of these characters are concerned!).

I still like Benjamin, but that's because he's a pretty good villain. And if he died in the prequel, we wouldn't have Sally-Anne (yet Marta would still be around, so . . .).

You made me smile, remembering what that last line was. Yeah, it's sweet. Sally-Anne deserved that, considering what I'm going to do to her.

I just mentally reviewed where I want this story to go, and I can't wait to write it! Trust me, it'll be good!

Thank you so much for the review! It's definitely reassuring to know I'm still a good writer in something other than Marauders era! :)

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Hello! I would have reviewed sooner but I accidentally forgot I was meant to read and review this but I'm here now so no harm done! :D

This was... interesting. I love the way you write Barty, you're very talented at that! I also loved the way you wrote Bellatrix. So sinister! :D

I also love your imagery. It's a definite strong point of yours! (teach me pls) It was so chilling some of the sentences you used omfg.

The only thing that I think could have been better is the dialogue. I just feel it's very... clunky? I'm not too sure how to word it, but whenever I struggle with it (aka 100% of the time :p), I just read it out loud to see if I (or my character) would talk like that.

But other than that, I loved it! I love all your work, Pearl! It's always so amazing and just iedhgdkiefdk ♥

So yeah, I just loved this! And it's a definite 10/10! :D

Author's Response: Kayla! It's always a pleasure getting reviews from you, you're so wonderful! :)

First, I'll answer your CC. You aren't the first to have pointed out my flaw in character dialogue, and I think I understand where you're coming from when you say "clunky". I'll definately be more careful when writting out what my characters say. Dialogue, I'll admit, is one of my biggest weaknesses in writing, and something I do need to work on.

As for Barty and Bellatrix, I love them both dearly, and I'm pleased that you liked the way I wrote them. I tried to get Bellatrix as insane as I can get her, and in a way I'm pleased, but at the same time I wished I could make her darker. I tried twice, but validation rejections sort of kept me from doing so. I understand of course, the reasons why, but still...

Thank you so much dearie for your review! You're always so sweet.

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aw poor Scorpy :(

The friendship bracelets! I loved them (but my friends never actually did it because it wasn't "cool" -.-) and it's so adorable how you put them in the story! I can just imagine Scorpius sitting in his room braiding little bits of string haha. :p

This was a great chapter! I really loved it! :D

I just want Rose to ignore her parents because they're being so... prejudiced! I thought Hermione would know better not to discriminate against others for being different! She was in the same situation! And yes, it was Draco but it wasn't Scorpius! He was born twenty years after that catastrophe happened!

Also, I'm really curious as to what happened to Henry's mum! He seems quite different to Seamus, but still adorable!

And I LOVED that Scorpius was teaching Rose about Wingardium Leviosa, just like Ron and Hermione. It started out with a spell... :p

So yeah, another lovely chapter, Pearl! It also reminded me about your new one-shot that I am going to read right after I submit this!

10/10! :D

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omfg I knew Scorpius wouldn't be dead but I was so scared!

Also, the last line reminded me of Lion King where Rafiki realises Simba is alive and he starts cackling and singing "ASANTE SANA SQUASH BANANA WIWI MI GU NAPANA" (or something like that, I just know it starts with 'Asante sana squash banana' :p)

but yeah, that was a really unexpected twist! I thought it was just going to be a fluffy love triangle fic! There were a lot of plot twists and I loved them all! :D

So yeah, great chapter and I'm going to continue reading this and the sequel!!! :D

(also this is my THREE HUNDREDTH REVIEW! *throws confetti*)

10/10! :D

Author's Response: PAAHA. SQUASH BANANA, SCORPIUS LIVES! Congratulations, you just made me laugh so hard I snorted my tea.

Hehehe omg you had no idea what it was like planning these chapters. I had so many 3am skype crises over this story. But! Glad you liked it!

*also throws confetti*

Thank you so much for spending your 300th review on me! ♥ ♥ ♥

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Hey, Ral! Sorry I haven't been reviewing as of late, school's a killer! :(

BUT I HAD TO REVIEW ON THISCHAPTER.

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ROSE AND SCORPIUS FEELINGS SO HIGH RIGHT NOW.

ERUPTING LIKE A VOLCANO!

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I'm no longer suspicious of Dean, I haven't been for a long while but for a moment I thought it was Hermione and then I was like nooo because she's all abut loyalty (Marietta Edgecombe in fifth year) so that's moot and I still am very unsure now. You're really good at mystery but omfg I just want to know!

onLY TWO CHAPTERS TO GO?!

HOW

I REALLY JUST WANT TO KNOW WHO THIS WEIRDO IS.

D:

SEAMUS? NEVILLE? THEY HAVEN'T BEEN INTRODUCED YET.

But I really doubt Neville could do all that, not because he's a bit slow but because he's a good person. And I feel like Seamus is too nice to do that as well. :(

WHAT IF IT'S A SLYTHERIN?!

Theodore Nott, Crabbe (but he's dead so that's not right), Goyle, Malfoy (I don't think it's him because he GAVE them the lead so...).

Other Slytherins: Marcus Flint, Kevin or Miles Bletchley, Blaise Zabini (OMG IT'S PROBABLY HIM!!!), Vaisey, Harper, Adrian Pucey, Terence Higgs, Lucian Bole.

WHAT IF IT'S SCABIOR OR SOMETHING THOUGH?!

WHAT IF IT'S HUFFLEPUFFS LIKE JUSTIN FINCH-FLETCHLEY OR ERNIE MACMILLAN OR ZACHARIAS SMITH ROEDHGVJFDKBJD

OR WHAT IF IT'S GINNY'S EX?! MICHEAL CORNER?

I DON'T KNOW

So as you can probably tell, I'm extremely suspicious of basically everyone in the Harry Potter series, so...

Anyway, this was another AMAZING chapter, and I can't wait to find out who it is (is that obvious? :p) and for the next update!

8451785415418651156641654262415641856/10. ;)

- Kayla. :)

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Hello!

I saw that you don't want me to read 'Weather for Ducks' until you edit it, so I decided to read this instead while I wait. :p

Unless you're going to edit this one and you don't want me to read, then I'll wait - it's coo

WAIT NOT I HAVEN'T MISSED MY CHANCE YET. LET ME START THAT SENTENCE AGAIN.

Unless you're going to edit this one and you don't want me to read, then I'll wait - it's mega.

hehehe

ANYWAY, I really liked this! I love how you've made a Flora/Fauna thing haha. I've always wanted to do that! :p

So yeah, I really liked this and I LIKE THE AL/FLORA PAIRING RIGHT NOW EEP.

I'm guessing the love triangle is going to be between Flora, Al and Scorpius. Unless it's Al, Flora and Fauna?

Hmm... Well, I'll just read on (if I'm allowed to haha) and find out!

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Awh! I didn't mean to come across as so aggressive :P I just want it to be the best story possible for you to read, and I promise I'll have all the editing finished once my exams are over! I'm very pleased you've decided to read this in the interim ;D

One might say that I think it is...

...MEGA.

Oh, god, the names! Flora & Fauna is the most ridiculous set I could come up with. They never acknowledge it; it's sort of a running joke.

You are mistaken. The love triangle is, in fact, between Willoughby, Mr Darcy, and Agnes.

You are more than allowed to read on! Thank you for reviewing & being patient! ♥

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feeLINGSSS

SO MANY EMOTIONS

*screeching*

CARLOTTA AND JAMES

GET MARRIED PLS

I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE OMG

You can write /people/ so well! All your characters are believable and I love that! And poor Della, she's a trooper though. :p

JAMES IS SO ADORABLE THOUGH

THE END PARAGRAPH THOUGH

[SOBBING]

I JUST LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH

I am so sorry I haven't been reviewing lately - school is a pain. :/

Just, the last paragraph made me a wibbly mess of emotions omg

I loved how Charlie knows that he's settling down, even though James is denying it haha. Naw, Jamesy you shouldn't be denying it, it's a good thing! :p

I'd be in the same boat as Carlotta if I ever met someone who worked with dragons. I'd be so excited haha. :p

Amazing, amazing, amazing chapter! This is definitely one of my favourites so far! :D

Just perfect! You wrote James' nervousness really well and that tension when Stefan hadn't caught the snitch. I was nearly yelling at my computer for him to get a move on! :p

845128564318543164512786532165123856412 x infinity/10. Ratings need to be higher on this! :p

Can't wait to read more! :D

Author's Response: That last paragraph was a total cheese-fest, but I absolutely loved it anyway! I'm a sucker when it comes to romance, especially when James is involved because I can't bear to be cruel to him for too long. And I was definitely projecting when I wrote Carlotta's chat with Charlie about dragons, because that would probably be my reaction too! She still knows comparatively little about the wizarding world, so lots of things that seem mundane to James will surprise her. :) Glad you liked the match itself, because I really struggled to write it! And you definitely don't need to apologise for not reviewing; you have my fullest sympathies, I'm completely buried under exam revision right now! It's lovely to know you're still reading though :) Thanks for reviewing and good luck with the school-work!

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I saw this chapter didn't have any reviews so I thought I'd give it one. :D

I just wanted to let you know that as soon as I finished Starving Artists, I rushed (well, 'rushed' is used loosely; my Internet sucks) to get this open.

I really like your Lucy and Scorpius, and I LOVE your style of writing. It's just so nice and lovely.

I loved the cupboard gremlin, and the lady's name. I can't remember it, Euphemeria Flitting or something? Very original. :p

Lucy and Scorpius are just so adorable omg, I can't wait to read more about them! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: I'm so so happy you're reading this but STTOOOP THERE I'M STIIILL REWRITING THIIIS AAAH PANIIC

Regardless, glad you like it, haha! Once gotham is in ashes, you have my permission to continue reading (and by 'once gotham is in ashes', I mean, 'once I have finished rewriting')

Thank you for the lovely review! ♥

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Hmmm... as a rule, I hardly ever read crossovers. I don't like them, generally. I usually don't like AU's either, but I thought I'd give this a chance because you're a great writer. :D

But so far, I'm enjoying this. :D

The only thing that I don't like about this is the nicknames. But that's just my personal opinion. :p I generally don't like nicknames in any story. So feel free to ignore me ahaha.

Anyway, I really liked this! I'll be watching it... >:)

(Also, I really like this banner - it's so pretty!)

(And I'm the number one review WOOOP!)

:D

Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad that you're enjoying this so far. I don't like AU's either most of the time, but I thought I'd just give it a shot, just for kicks. And Twilight...I wanted to try crossing it over with it too. It's sort of an experimental project thing that I was so desperate to toy with. Unfortunately it'll be a slow process, but the second chapter is halfway complete. Now I just need time to write the other half, edit and post...which might take forever.

And nicknames. I'll try to lighten my use for them, because personally, whenever I type a nickname down, I feel like I'm adressing to a whole new different character. But I will use it whenever, let's say Emmet jokes around, because from what I can faintly recall in cannon he's quite obnoxious.

Thank you so much for the reviews, dearie. They really do make my day, and they're always so sweet! :)




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No.

I thought they were going to live a HAPPY LIFE TOGETHER.

NOOO!

*curls up in a ball*

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aaannngggsssttt

I really liked this one-shot though. I liked how we saw the difference in annoying-Half-Blood-Prince-Lavender and grown-up-Deathly-Hallows-Lavender.

This was really good, Pearl! It was AH-MAY-ZING!

10/10! :D

Author's Response: I know, and it would've been lovely too! But I couldn't. I just couldn't make it happy at all. The cruel monster inside my heart was telling me that I had to kill Lavender, to make the whole idea of war realistic, and well, just the fact that Fenrir had Lavender in the books and she was never mentioned afterward was just sort of calling for that ending--Lavender's fate.

And yes, I would like to think that she changed durring the Carrow's occupation at Hogwarts. I can't imagine a sappy, clingy HBP-Lavender prancing around the corridors...it just doesn't fit. It doesn't seem right at all. It's too odd, and the only person who can make odd work is Luna, and Lavender isn't no Luna! So yeah, there has to be some maturity in there.

Thank yew for the review an' ratin' dahlin'! You're too kind. :)
*attempt to type in a southern drawl*

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Aw that was so adorable! :'D

However, I noticed this one teeny-tiny little mistake:

"Honestly, your best excuse is that, I quote, 'it's complicated.' Merlin, {your} complicated!" She exasperatedly ranted.

It's just the wrong 'your'. It should be 'you're'. :p

Other than that, I really liked this one-shot! I love Draco/Astoria, and I think you've written them really well!

:D

10/10

Author's Response: Hai-hai! I thought it was about time to respond to your reviews, so here we go :)

I'm glad that you thought I written Draco and Astoria rather well. I was afraid about Draco's character to be honest. This being the first time I've ever written him (I think I've mentioned that already in my author's note), I was sort of nervous, thinking I've made him too melodramatic or something.

And the use of "your", yeah, I didn't catch that. Usually my word processor would catch errors like that, and I always read things before sending it through validation, but both my processor and I always seems to miss things somehow. I'm planning on going through an editing stage once school's out of the way...fix all my stories up.

Thank you lovely for reviewing and your rating. a 10/10. That surprised me, seeing how this was my first for both characters. Thank you. Thank you so much!

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sO MUCH FEELS

EMOTIOOONSSS

*screeches*

Literally, I rolled around on my bed because they're juST SO ADORABLE OH MY GOD

I JUST WANT TO SQUISH THEM

THEY'RE SO CUTE

SO

SO

CUTE

I CAN'T HANDLE THIS UDGVJBBSVJZ

THIS WAS AN AMAZING CHAPTER OMG

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So... yeah... I loved this chapter. :') 10/10! :D

Author's Response: ATTACK OF THE CAPSLOCK. I LOVE IT!!!

Aren't they just adorable???!!! I want to hug them all day! :D

Thank you so much for such an awesome review I'm glad you liked it!

Sam.

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have you seen that video of the cat and it's tail gets scratched and it makes a weird noise?

well, that was the noise I just made. :p I'll link you on Twitter. :p

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They're so ADORABLE EEEK

And WHEN WILL HE TELL HER THAT HE'S ACTUALLY JAMES POTTER SIIIGGGHHH

anyway, I LOVED THIS CHAPTER, IT WAS ADORABLE AWWW

meow/10

(meow meow meow)

Author's Response: LOL. Thanks Kayla, your the best... I'll go watch that video :)

meow. Thanks for the review

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Oh... now I'm sad... :(

This was written really well, Pearl! I kind of knew what was going to happen but you wrote it really well! :D

I really liked this! :D

And I was going to say something else, but I just got distracted by Tumblr for nearly half an hour...

But basically, I loved this! :D

(Also, that chapter image by (sol) was absolutely gorgeous! :O)

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Oh, Kayla, don't be sad :(
*prods forward a tissue box* You know, just in case. :)

Im glad you liked this though, despite it being a tad bit miserable.

I honestly love writing about the Black family relationships. They're all opposites and branched off on their own seperate ways, and it always had me imagining of how close they could've been when they were younger. I know, the storys have all been done before, but the topic...I just couldn't stay away.

And Tumblr. Oh, glorious tumblr. I very much understand :) *nods in agreement*

And (sol) did do a wonderful job, didn't she? I literally almost cried at the first glimpse of it. I swear, I recall just whispering to myself, "I'm not worthy". Lol.

Anywho, I'm glad you liked this! Thank you much for reading and reviewing. Again, I can't express how lovely you are as a person and reviewer!
:D

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Wow.

Wow.

Just - WOW.

That was FANTASTIC!

(Also, I just want to say I think that I've read somewhere in canon that Barty is a Ravenclaw so yeah, you're spot on there!)

I absolutely LOVED the descent of his innocence to his madness. (I don't know if that makes sense but...)

I loved the descriptions you used, and the imagery! I love the mother/son relationship, it was so sweet and when he was switching with her I was actually crying. Because he loved her so much, juxtaposing with Bartemius!

Gah, I just ADORED this one-shot, it was absolutely amazing! And I loved the relationship between Regulus and Sirius, even though it was brief. :')

Just perfect! Absolutely perfect, Pearl!

45629865432945196452984562398645/10! ;D

Author's Response: Heller again there >:)

I'm glad you thought it good! At first I was scared for it's excessive word count, knowing I'd scare people off with it, and for a second, I thought you might've givin up half way. Long texted word counts make me wary myself, I'll admit, so I was very pleased to read that you liked it.

And he was in Ravenclaw? Hm, it honestly doesn't surprise me one bit. He was clever and conniving, but I wouldn't really call him Slytherin material. I dunno. *shrugs* I guess I got lucky with my instinctal guess?

And his descent of innocence to madness...yes, what you said does make sense. I honestly couldn't agree any less. I honestly find it hard picturing Baby Barty Jr. as evil. I just can't... Maybe a bit manipulative as a child, but overall, I think he was pretty innocent when young. Sorta like Harry: cute, naive, little eleven year old frying eggs in a pan for the Dursleys turns into a 17 year old hero who helps lead the Wizarding World in an epic war. I find it pretty mind warping honestly. :/

And yes, the mother/son bond. The Azkaban scene was by far my most favorite scene out of the whole one-shot. I just enjoyed getting to dig up all that raw emotion and laying it all out on the table. It really wasn't much, but for me, it was the ground breaking thing to write...I was honestly so proud of that scene, it's probably one of my most favorite things I've written for fanfiction so far, (second to my Regulus one-shot).

And yes, the little Regulus/Sirius bonding. Subtle but very much called for. I had to put it in there. No reason really. I just wanted it there. :)

Thank you so much Kayla. Your reviews are always wonderful and inpire me to keep writing! :D

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GUEES WHAAATTT?!?!?!

Kayla has finished her exams.

Meaning she is able to FINALLY review all your new stuff! :D

Kayla quite enjoyed this one-shot, even though it was angsty. But Kayla enjoys a little angst. Kayla also believes that your characterisations were very well done and you succeeded in making Kayla both annoyed at and feeling sorry for Victoire.

Kayla has one tiny bit of criticism, however. You have used the word "sweats but in England, Kayla has been told that they call them "track pants" or for short, "trackies".

Other than that tiny tidbit, Kayla has no other criticism. She thinks that this is a wonderful one-shot and even though she's only read a little bit of your works she can see a massive improvement! :D

Also, Kayla likes this song very much and the plot fit very well into it. Kayla applauds you for this.

Kayla awards a 10/10.

Author's Response: EEK! Kayla's finished with exams! Hurrah! :D
*gives lovely Kayla a round of applause*

I'm glad you liked this one-shot, despite it being angsty. I know how much of a cheerful, bubbly person you are, so I'm relieved that despite being this a bit emotionally-dramatic, you enjoyed it none-the-less.

Victoire. Ugh. I honestly don't know whether I like that girl or not. I think of a snobby, posh Fleur whenever I think of Vic, but I can't exactly judge her that way because she isn't really described in cannon, which sort of frustrates me at times. I honestly love Dominique, which is just as awful, seeing how she's even more of a mystery, but just hearing her name--it's not as snobby /Victoire/...

And thank you for pointing out my failure of use of English terms. I tired to keep it closely to English as possible. For example, I even looked up if "saltine crackers" existed in England. Good thing I did, because it doesn't, and apparently the closest thing to it is a cream cracker, which I used instead. Of course, I didn't go overboard with my researching, hence, why I didn't catch my "sweats" to "trackies" mistake. But thank you, I'll bear that in mind next time! :P

And yesh, the song. I was actually listening to Pandora Internet Radio when the song was playing, and I had it on repeat on youtube because I fell in love with it so much. I'm pleased to see that you thought the plot fitted it well.

Thank you so much for your review and reading this! I'm gonna go scamper off now and answer to your other reviews. I'm so sorry I hadn't had the time to get back to you on these reviews, but I'm here now, for a short while, that is, but I'm here.

Thankies again lovely!:D

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Hey, Katie! :D

So at first I thought, "EW DRAMIONE I'M GOING TO EXIT!"

But then I was like, "No, I promised I'd read and review it."

So I sat back down (metaphorically because I was already sitting) and continued to read with an expression similar to Rose's mother's face when she meets Jack in the Titanic. You know that snobby-I'm-better-than-you look? :p Not saying I'm better than you - that's just the expression. :p

Anywho, I kept thinking, "Ew" and then the end came and I was so shocked! I've never seen this pairing done before! It's really original!

(And you're welcome for the idea. ;))

So yeah, I really liked this one-shot! You did a really good job! :D

- Kayla. :)

Author's Response: Hey, Kayla! :D

BAHAHAHA!! :') I'm glad to hear that my story succeeds in it's masquerade of a Dramione!

I definitely know that look! I would've thought that you'd have somewhat of a clue though, since you wrote a one-shot stylistically similar! :P

I'd never seen it done before, but I read DLS and got thinking about how misconceptions can fool us so easily... and bam. This new ship! XD

Thank you so much, Kayla! And thanks for finishing it, even when you didn't want to (at first)! ♥

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Hi there!

Firstly, I love this story. If I'd had more time, I would have reviewed every single chapter by now.

But I don't and really, I shouldn't even be on this but I just need to let my thoughts out.

IS MATT A WEREWOLF OH MY GOD?!

THAT'S WHY HE CAN'T GET A JOB, WHY HE HAS SCARS AND WHY AMY IS SO OBSESSED WITH THE WOLFSBANE POTION.

HE'S A WEREWOLF!!!

:O :O :O :O

Anyway, I absolutely adore this story! I love your Lily and even though all the different cousins confuse me ninety per cent of the time, I like it. :)

Please update soon! :D

10/10

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far! He might be a werewolf. ;) I'm not saying a word right now. You'll find out soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Hello again! I'm here for your prize review! After this one I'll have reviewed everything on your page (AWW YEAH) so I'll wait for you to upload something. :D

Okay, I'll start the review now. :p

Alright. What.

What is this beautiful piece of work?

Why is it so amazing?

Why, caoty, why?

Why can you write so perfectly and not be able to share it around? Silly caoty, sharing is caring!

As soon as I saw the title, I was like, "I have to leave this one to last. It sounds really thrilling and unique."

AND BOY WAS I RIGHT!

I'm very, very, VERY confused about Part II but it's just written so perfectly I've put my confusion aside and just relished in the beauty of the words.

I love Part V, though. It's just AH-MAY-ZING! *diamond sparkle*

I loved, loved, LOVED this line:

Below, arms and legs lie in suspended animation, like grotesque puppets. They are what you will become.

Just, oh my gosh. How did you come up with that bit of perfection?

And I love the last line as well, it just reflects that Regulus was just as brave as Sirius and it's just so dguvudgvdkv.

By golly. I've read this like four times now because it's just so thrilling and amazing. You really have a knack for this type of writing!

So, if you couldn't tell, I LOVED this one-shot! I absolutely adored it!

One hundred per cent 10/10! :D

Review number 3/10.

Author's Response: Hello~! I guess I'll have to get around to writing, then, eh?

And I'm so sorry for this over-a-month late review response. I'm crap at stuff like this.

Part II was just sort of written for fun, honestly. It basically has nothing to do with the rest of the story at all, but I like it, so I put it in there. XD

Anyway - you are wonderful, I'm really glad you like it, and thank you so much for your challenge and your prizes! :D

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Hello Abhi! I'm finally here to review!

This was amazing, I'm so glad I got to have the first look. :D

I don't really have much to say, it was really good! But I told you that before ahaha. :p

Congratulations on winning by the way. ;)

Author's Response: Hey Kayla!!

Aww shucks, you're too nice too me!! :P And I couldn't have won it without you, so thank you :)

- Abhi

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Hello again! I'm here for your prize review!

I'm not too sure if you saw my last review but I'll repeat what I said before. I'm aware that I won't be able to give you 10 reviews all at once so whenever you post something new, I'll review it and then you'll slowly get all 10 prize reviews. :)

Okay so now onto the review!

This was amazing! The way you write, it's so clear and it gets straight to the point! You don't have unnecessary rambling - a lot of fics tend to do that - and you just portray all the emotion really well!

You have a real talent, you really do! I love how you've referenced the fact that Remus was poor and would probably just buy a pack of 20 pens for $2 (AU) (I tried converting it to British pounds but I got confused D:) because that just gives that extra more canon-feel.

I loved, loved the last bit of the third last sentence:

he understands the tranquillity of a necessary rebellion.

That was beautiful, it was so sophisticated and captured the image of the Wizarding War (hopefully that's what it's referencing - I may be wrong :p).

Anyway, this was a wonderful one-shot - it definitely deserved that Dobby nomination!

10/10! :D

Review 2/10. (That isn't the rating by the way, just how many reviews I've left in case I lose track :p).

Author's Response: Hey~

Well, you can't really have unnecessary rambling in a 500 word fic, can you. :P

It was really self-indulgent though - I'm probably one of the few people in this world who'd choose to focus on the bloody pens they use, for God's sake - surprisingly.

Anyway, you're right about that sentence, and once again thank you so much for your lovely review! :D

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*z-snaps*

mhm das right I knew Hugo was the mystery boyfriend.

anyway, this was a lovely chapter! They're finally together! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: You did! I remember your review! :D

Thank you for leaving such a lovely review. :)

Sam.

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Hi there! You never got back to me on what you wanted reviewed so I decided to just review what I haven't, and when you upload something new I'll review that until you've received your ten reviews. :)

I said review way too many times.

Anywho, I'll start on to the review. :p

Okay, honestly, I didn't really like the plot but not because it wasn't good (it's amazing actually), only because my personal preferences are used to fluffy, happy things. :p But I'm glad I'm reading it, I need to venture into more genres. :p

It's amazingly well-written, your writing is just so powerful. Your description, your imagery, the repetitive 'fudge this' (I'm making it 12+ :p), is just phenomenal.

This has got to be one of the most original pieces on this site. It portrays Snape in a completely new light, and although he's ridiculously creepy and I would probably beat him with a stick, I kind of like it.

And the quote: "He hates being so full of hate that he repeats a hate in his mental list of things to hate."

That basically summed up Severus Snape in one sentence. You couldn't have picked a more perfect quote for him.

I also love that he's trying Muggle things because Lily's a Muggleborn. I don't know if that's what you were aiming at, but that's what I interpreted.

So, this was an amazing one-shot, I'm really glad I read it. I think you're going to slowly convince me into reading more alternative stories now. :p

10/10!

Review 1/10 (Mostly for me to keep track). :)

Author's Response: Okay, so. I owe you a serious apology. I'm lazy as hell, to put it 12+ly, and it's just completely slipped my mind with exams and coursework and me not really being bothered and all that wonderful stuff.

Anyway. Moving on.

That was definitely the record amount of times I've seen the word 'review' in a review, to be honest.

I know how you feel, mostly - the stuff I read is all action-adventure Harrycentric AU, which is great, but nothing like what I write. It's always weird for me. XD

Well. Wow. That's extremely high praise. I'm genuinely lost for words. (Well, mostly.) I would probably beat him with a stick too, though.

I actually cheated and got that quote from an actual description of Snape from ladyjaida and dorkorific's 'The Shoebox Project', which is weirdly enough one of my favourite romdramcoms (romantic dramedies?) of all time that just happens to have pitch-perfect character descriptions. So I had to use that quote.

What I was going for was playing around with Snape's half-blood status and his Muggle working-class childhood, but your interpretation is far more romantic, so keep it. :D

Thank you so much for your lovely review!



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No.

ROLF IS NOT ALLOWED TO BE ENGAGED TO ANOTHER WOMAN.

I really liked this chapter and this sounds a bit mean but I prefer Lorcan over Lysander already. o.o

Anyway, I love the characterisation of Rolf, he's just enough weird to balance out Luna. :p

And oh Lorcan, we share the same aversion to getting up in the morning. :p

I really liked this chapter, good work! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Lol, but the reality is, he is quite engaged to that sickening woman.

And don't worry about picking favorites. Lorcan is personally my favorite as well! Of course, Lysander still needs to grow as a character, and he didn't appear for much in the last chapter. It was all really his mother. Ah, well!

And yesh, Rolf. I characterized him as someone I'd personally think as an ideal father. It's weird, I know, but it felt more comfortable writing Rold that way. And yes, he does balance out Luna doesn't he? Both within the concepts of quirkiness, sanity, and everything else.

I'm glad you liked the chapter dear. :D

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PLS

I JUST CAN'T STOP LAUGHINH

ROSE IS SO CRAZY AND WACKO, SHE'S SUCH A TUMBLR FANGIRL

AND EATING ICE CREAM WITH HER HANDS OH MY GOD

AND THE INCIDNT

I'M ACTUALLY DYING OF LAUGHTR HERE

IGNORE MY SPELLING MISTAKES I'M LAUGHING TOO HARD

YO, YO, YO DUDE? SUP BROSEF? WHAT'S POPPING DAWG?

I LOST IT AT THAT MOMENT

PLS UPDATE SOON

84523562384512/10

Author's Response: Hi! I'm really really happy that you liked it because when I saw that I had reviews I was sincerely prepared for the worst. But this makes me feel so relieved haha. Thank you for the review! :)

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