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Review #1, by justanotherwitchLife from a New Perspective : Chapter One

7th November 2012:
Hi! I'm pretty sure I'm the first reviewer so yay! The third person was different from the normal first person that you see a lot lately and I like it. It seems like a promising story. I don't like to critique much but maybe think about changing the description of the story a bit? It's good as it is, it might just be me, but from what I've seen on hpff a lot of the most reviewed stories have really, I don't know, intriguing(?) descriptions. I've never actually written a story so I dont know for a fact but just an obsorvation. From what I saw in the chapter you seem to be a good writer so I don't think it would be very hard... Hope you don't take it as your description was bad in any way. Can't wait for the next update! : )

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Review #2, by justanotherwitchBlack Roses Red: Chapter 4

17th July 2012:
I liked it so far. Update soon?
Sorry for the crappy review.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I'm about to update right now, sorry for the long wait, I didn't notice it hadn't validated haha woops :)

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Review #3, by justanotherwitchFaking It: Happy New Years!

13th May 2012:
I love this story SoO much! Are you ever going to put up a new chapter?

Author's Response: yes, soon.

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Review #4, by justanotherwitchThe Madness That is My Life: The Madness of Having To Do Things

18th March 2012:
Loved the chapter. I liked caleb and everything, but i like Al better. Anyways just a quick question. Is it guesta or gusta...i've always learned it as gusta but i could be wrong.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #5, by justanotherwitchBang: There are way too many people that run for fun.

13th March 2012:
OOO OOO OOO THE CLICKING NOISE WAS SO A CAMERA! Well duh. Cant wait until the next chapter! Update soon!

Author's Response: very observant, young one ;) i probably just gave a load away, but i dont careee. update will be very soon - about a week, i think.

ellie :) xx


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Review #6, by justanotherwitchPretty Boy: Part 2, Chapter 2: Ironic.

17th December 2011:
Okay. So after i saw one of the reviews mentioning deja vu I looked at all the stores you've written and basically went "holy crap!!'' because you've written like half of all my favorite stories! I now fully worship you as an author. Let your awesomeness be known to the world. Well uh thats it.kthnxbye :)

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Review #7, by justanotherwitchTwisted: Haunted

8th December 2011:
Wow.. She really is a slut. Well I love her anyways. Is she always going to be one tho? I hope she kinda tones it down a bit. The "sweethearts" kinda remind me of Ali and her group (Spencer Aria Emily And Hanna) from pretty little liars if you've ever heard of it.

Author's Response: She will, deffinately. It's explained why she's like that in later chapters so it should all make sense then, I hope. And no, I haven't but I've always meant to. I might have to now that they're like my sweethearts. :D

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