Reading Reviews From Member: InWonderland
14 Reviews Found

Review #1, by InWonderlandFlesh Memory: Brain Teasers

27th April 2012:
OMG!! You don't know how excited I was when I saw that you'd used my idea about the tea and the mug! I did a little happy dance - yes I'm that sad! I freaking love your writing and can't wait for the next
10/10 as always. (I'm going to try to review every chapter from now on!) XD hope you enjoy your trip... ;) and if you have time and you want to do you think you could check-out my writing and give me some feedback??? Dw if you don't - its not a

Luv InWonderland

Author's Response: haha. I'm glad you were pleased with my usage of your idea, it worked well I thought. I reviewed both your stories, hope that helps. Thanks so much for reviewing!

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Review #2, by InWonderlandIt's Called Summer: A Kiss?

22nd April 2012:
Wow really good story although the chapters could seem short to some people; just to clarify - i'm not complaining, i adore this story!!! Great plot and can't wait for next chapter luv InWonderland...xx

Author's Response: Thank you:) The chapters do get longer once I get further into the story. :)

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Review #3, by InWonderlandFlesh Memory: A New Plan

21st April 2012:
Omfg!!! I freaking love your writing. I find it so easy to relate to Hermione even though I've never been in the same situation as she is in this story - and that's all down to how you write the characters and how you put the plot down on paper (well on computer screens really but hey)!!! You're a really talented author and I understand why you haven't updated in a while, I do the same and I annoy myself because of it; I started a fanfic in October and haven't updated it since because I'm swamped with work from school for my GCSEs. When I'm reading this I never really tell that you're American - which I think is amazing!! Oh I'm rambling. I'll stop now. Back to your plot and story. Forgot to comment on the chapter but Hermione's dress is I love it! Its beautiful! I can't wait to see the chaos that will ensue from the girls being the ones to ask the guys to the Valentine's Dance. Stroke of genius. Hermione better ask Draco though or else there'll be trouble. ;-) do you think you'll be able to get another chappie out before you go to Asia?? That trip sounds amazing by the way, I'm so jealous!!
10/10 as always!!
Luv InWonderland.x

Author's Response: I hope to get a chapter out before leaving, the amazing volume and qulity of reviews is certainly helping. Thank you so much. I know GCSEs can be tough, I have friends in Europe. Good luck! I'm so glad you like it and I'm flattered you think so highly of me. :) Thanks!

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Review #4, by InWonderlandEverything Happens For A Reason: The Battle Begins

11th April 2012:
OMG!!! So good!!! I'm literally bouncing in my seat wanting to read the rest already!!! When's the next chapter going to be up??? (I'm really impatient if you hadn't already guessed... ;P)
Brilliant plot line but I really don't want either Hermione or Pansy to be dead - they're both brilliant characters the way you've written them... nice one!!
InWonderland ;)

Author's Response: Thank you :D I was dying to get this chapter out and I'm so happy with all the reviews i got!
I know, I don't want either to die either, but let's see... A writer's gotta do what a writer's gotta do, eh? ;)

Thank you so much :)

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Review #5, by InWonderlandFlesh Memory: Crying on Christmas

8th February 2012:
Omg. I actually adore this story. It's really well written..x i like the new layout. And love the way you gave Hermione tea from Draco as well. ;) it's really sweet.

When's the next chapter going to be up?? I'm impatient. I know..xx

- you could have Draco walk in when Hermione is using her gift from him (the tea) and the gift from Damien (the mug). Then he might realise that they're penpals and have been flirting.
- Maybe you could have Hermione blow up about her mum's condition to Draco in their daily/necessary piss off sessions. And have her blame death eaters and/or him indirectly...

Great story!! 10/10

With love

Author's Response: haha, thanks for the review. I love your ideas, I will definitely keep them in mind. The next chapter might be a week or two, got a crazy load and really busy right now, so just hold on. :D Thanks!

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Review #6, by InWonderlandFlesh Memory: The Belle of the Ball

7th February 2012:
Omg i love it... When is the next chapter scheduled to be up??


Author's Response: thanks for the review. The next chapter is already in the queue, so it should be just a few days or so. :D

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Review #7, by InWonderlandUnforgiven: Baby, I must confess...

8th January 2012:
Brilliant plot! Some of the characters are a bit ooc but hey, good - no GREAT story!

~ InWonderland

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much!

I try to keep them in character, but I don't always succeed :p haha

I'm so glad you're enjoying it!! :D

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Review #8, by InWonderlandReturn to Prince Manor: Bedknobs and Broomsticks

17th December 2011:
Love it!! I'm almost sad that it's over! I may be able to draw you a pic... ;) do you like manga? Can't wait to read more of your work, you write amazingly...

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Review #9, by InWonderlandBeauty and the Werewolf: Chapter 1- Prologue

30th November 2011:
Gr8 when's the next chapter up??

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Review #10, by InWonderlandAll they want for Christmas...: Rescuing

29th November 2011:
Amazing. Love it completely!!! Just a bit confused about dobby. You've got him alive in one of the earlier chapters but then you switch to having him dead again. Apart from that I'm engrossed... When do you think the next chapter going to be up??

InWonderland ..x

Author's Response: gahhh, did I not fix that? I had sworn that I fixed that! If you can remember which chapter had Dobby alive, please let me know! He is supposed to be dead! The next chapter should be up by New years!

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Review #11, by InWonderlandTime To Consider: Five Years Later

27th November 2011:
Fab!!! Can't wait 4 the next chapter... :-P

Author's Response: Thankyou :D hopefully I'll be able to update soon

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Review #12, by InWonderlandThe Drastic Change of Hermione Granger: The Hogwarts Express

15th November 2011:
Good story!! When's the next chapter going to be up??

Author's Response: I'm working on it right now! I should have it up for validation by this evening :)

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Review #13, by InWonderlandTruth, or Dare? : Breaking Up

13th November 2011:
OMG! Amazing can't wait 4 the next chapter... :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I will try and put on the next chapter ASAP

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Review #14, by InWonderlandTime To Consider: A Lazy Ron and A Frustrated Hermione

27th October 2011:
looking good... plz continue..xx

Author's Response: Thankyou for reading Ill definitely try to update soon :)

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