SO GOOD. I'd love a prequel with how Draco and Hermione got together, with all of Pansy's interferences- you're a fantastic writer!

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Great story so far! Love the concept(:

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. Glad you liked it XD

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Oh I hope you make this into more then a one-shot! I loved it, you did a great job!

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AHH cliffhanger! It was getting so good too! Oh well, I'll just eagerly wait for the next installment.
Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!
I'll do my best to keep posting

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Great story so far(:

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Just started reading this story and I must say I think you're doing a fantastic job(: Love the plot and writing style and everything. Gah, I love it. I want to know what happens next! Hope you update soon, eagerly waiting for the next installment- where hopefully one of them will come to their senses and confront each other.

Author's Response: Ahh thank you so much! The next update should be up tomorrow!

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I really love this story(: You're doing a great job!

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This is fantastic! You're a brilliant writer(:

Author's Response: Thank you!
-RavenclawStudent.

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Plot twist! Gah I really like how this story is going, it's a pretty interesting plot. Good job, you're a great writer(:

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! :D The next chapter should be up in the next 24 hours or so =3 xx

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Another brilliant story by you(: Though I still miss waiting for chapters of If Wishes Were Fishes... I hope you'll still keep writting! Kudos to this one-shot!

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This is a fantastic story! The plot is very good, as well as your writing style. Can't wait for the next installment(:

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You're a good writer(: I like where this story is going, and Scorpius seems adorable already.

Author's Response: Cool Beans and thank you for your kind words. You rock!

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This was a really great story! I loved how you made it outto be a kind of Lily-Severus childhood relationship, where he even introduced her to magic. The ended was fantastic too. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I actually hadn't read that part yet when I wrote this. I thought that was kinda cool too.

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This is an excellent story(: I really liked your idea of their relationship, I just wish you'd write a prologue or sequel... Please?
Brilliant story!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ;D Hmm... I don't think I will be posting anymore chapters, I really like the thought of leaving my readers with little to the imagination, so they can make the ending.
～RavenclawStudent.

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NOOO IT CAN'T BE OVER! IT'S TOO AMAZING. I think this is one of the best stories I've read... I can't believe it ended D':

Author's Response: aw thank you!! I'm glad you liked it! I can't believe it's over either, but alas... anyways, thanks!

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I really like this story so far(: I think you're doing a great job, and the plot is very original.

Author's Response: Thanks :)

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I'm speechless. This is just amazing! We've waited soo long and I think it's definetly worth the wait(: Please, please, please, PLEASE don't take as long for the next update!

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It's a good start! Could have done with some more details in a few places, but I still liked it. Can't wait to see where it goes!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I have actually finished this story on another site and I'm just slowly re-posting it here. Hope to hear your thoughts on future chapters

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It's going brilliantly, in my opinion(:

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I love it so far! You're doing a really good job, twisting the classic tale, and your writing style is brilliant too!

Author's Response: Hey:d Thanks! That really brightens my day! I could just hug youi right now, gosh! Thanks so much!

xx

Ever

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Really good start! I like how it began, cant wait to see how it'll continue...

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I should be posting the next chapter soon.

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Good story! A few mistakes scattered around but you can't get everything perfect. It's an interesting concept with Hermione losing almost everything and having to depend on Draco. She seems a bit too submissive but that could just be because she's been broken. The books she was reading are the Hunger Gamers, right?

Author's Response: thank you :) and yes! the hunger games! :)

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Gah, a cliffhanger! Devilish writer, making us anxiously wait to see what happens next... It's a really good story so far,and it'll probably get better as the story progresses. I'm guessing there's going to be more drama ahead. The characters don't seem too OOC at all actually and while the concept for plot has been used this story is different. I really like it! You're a really good writer too, I just hope the next chapter will come quickly...

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This is really good! I think the beginning was a bit quick but it just got better from there. Any thought on how many chapters there will be?

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This is really good! Any thoughts of making it more than a one-shot?

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I'm working on a second part. Nothing more than a two-shot, though. :)

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