ahhh love it.
I love this whole series, they're so well written and the characters are so intersting!
Can there be another part to Rose's life or is she just about written out? (desperately hoping for the former here (; )
amazing job, congrats! xxAuthor's Response: I've got a one-shot planned for Rose next, not sure whether there'll be a third novel or something else, something new. :) Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
Peter, Hagrid, Snape, Marlene, Dumbledore and Minnie?
That was sad, but cute
The bit about how Sirius will never be able to spoil Harry because of the Dursleys was very poignant, and one of those moments where you're just like oh wow, his life sucked :(Author's Response: Got in in one. :D
Thank you. :)
Yes - poignant is a good word for it. It's true, though, I think. Those years spent with them will have a role in shaping his personality, and yes, it did suck, but I suppose it probably makes him appreciate what he's got now even more. :)
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7. Report Review
That was lovely
I was crying pretty much the whole way through, I could barely read it I was crying so much!
It was lovely and poignant and sad and so well written
Horrible topic and a horrible experience but really well expressed, well done!Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
I was when I was writing it, so your not the only one who was bawling their eyes out.
Soph xx Report Review
This story looks like its gonna be so good, I'm adding it to my favorites on that basis...
I love the new character of Jack, he's so happy, he reminds me of a guy I know and he's gonna be good for Lily.
It's interesting to see how driven she's become and how isolated she has made herself, although I guess not completely unexpected, I can't wait to see what she wants to do with her life, I assume something to help Ellie...
Keep writing!Author's Response: Glad I've given it a good start :-) I have to admit it's passing far quicker than anticipated. I bet he's a great friend to have- I have several like Jack, and I undervalue all of them- and I'm glad you have faith in him.
I like your guess :-P could be right, even... The next chapter's in the queue, so hopefully in the next few days it'll be up, if nothing goes wrong...
Thank you for such a thoughtful review :-) Report Review
That was really beautiful.
It made me cry like three times, and was really hard to read because it was so sad but it was really lovely.
You did a really good job with it, showing the relationships between the different characters and showing the aftermath of poor Freddie's death, it was really well done
K xAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it :) Your review just completely made my day :) Thank you! ^_^ x Report Review
Fred has it exactly right, he expressed it all so succinctly that all I'll say is I'm far too happy these two are finally together!
james + summer = x x x x x x x x x x x x
^as ridiculously gay as that is :D Report Review
So what is actually wrong with their dad?Author's Response: He's got a disease called early on set Alzheimer's, Oliver talks to Abi about in Chapter 19 Report Review
This is really cute.
I've been putting off writing my essay and gone through all your short stories and things and I've realized they all relate to White Flags which I absolutely adore but definitely do not have time to read now!
It's just the little details like the annoying girl that Sirius ignores etc but its so good because it builds a bigger connection, I love it.
Your writing is fabulous and you genuinely have a gift, keep updating innocence please! xxxAuthor's Response: Thank you! Uh oh, haha, but I'm so glad you like them! :D
Yes - they're to provide a bit more context to everything that goes on in "White Flags" but also just to build the characters up a little more. Haha, fair enough - it is a long story. :P
I, personally, love the little details. :P For me, that's what makes the story, so my work is often littered with little pieces that are sometimes insignificant but often will combine to connect characters and places. :) Thank you!
Aww! :D Thank you so much! I will - I enjoy writing so much that it would be impossible to stop (hence lots of updates). :D
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7. Report Review
I loved this story!
It was so cute!
(Major overuse of exclamation marks...)
Key was so majorly cynical and Louis so cute, I love them, immensely.
Put part 2 up quickly please!Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'll have part two up soon. :)
Sam. Report Review
Beautifully written, a lovely reflection. Minerva was the one person who could possibly have done that, she saw everything, an awesome woman.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love Minerva as a character, she is so strong and well rounded and I'm happy you liked her as well! Report Review
I have to say, I really don't want her to be pregnant
This story is just so complicated (in a good way) and I just don't think a pregnancy would add anything, but it could really detract from the rest of the story :( Report Review
See, I did see this coming and all, but still I'm not happy with you right now, not at all.
There better be a decent explanation as to why yeah?. < I fullstopped you to show how serious I am about that.Author's Response: Yeah, I figured some people would. I'm sorry, kinda. I have a kinda explanation in the next chapter. I hope you like it!
-Claire Report Review
This was a really good chapter.
I liked how they wrote to the prophet and got Gentry the recognition she deserved.
And the marauders deliberately getting their map confiscated is completely different to it getting lost or accidently confiscated which usually happens!
Kids should be safe in schools. and it's completely abysmal they aren't always.
K x Report Review
That is so sad!
It's really good, I like it, it took me a couple of paragraphs after the 22nd birthday thing to realise but when I did I was like omg because she was so excited and they were dead! I like how you had Remus come in and sit it for them, how awful would it have been if she was just waiting and waiting and no one ever showed up :(
It's really good though, we'll written and an original storyline :)
K x Report Review
His life is just spiraling out of control right now!
:(Author's Response: It is indeed! :( His woes won't last TOO much longer though. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
This was really cute.
And if you really don't speak English as your first language then I am seriously impressed! I couldn't tell at all that it wasn't your first language and that isn't something that happens often. Usually it's very stilted and slightly awkward, but that was really good.
The storyline was quite cute as well, the whole two best friends falling in love thing is adorable. I really liked your story, well done, it was really, really good!
K xAuthor's Response: Thank you for your nice words :) Report Review
That was good.
I like that she finally grew a back bone and stood up for herself even if it was just by walking out.
Because she was right, they both did expect her to choose them and there's no need! She can be friends with Dom and date James, they aren't mutually exclusive things other than the fact that Dom is REALLY insecure about these things.
Speaking of...I hope you explain that rumor thing soon! because clearly Dom spread some really mean thing but I hope she eventually makes up with James (and Dom i guess, even if she has been a horrible friend).
Freddie's just brilliant. End of.
Update soon please (: Report Review
"I feel like I can't remember why I'm dating Eva," he said unexpectedly.
"Maybe she confounded you," I guessed wisely.
"I mean - I like Eva. I really like Eva. She's beautiful," James said, sounding firm.
"Well, it really depends on the eye of the beholder - I personally think she's quite vile."
"And she's my girlfriend," he added.
"I'm truly very sorry for that."
BEST CONVERSATION EVER! Report Review
Aww, I love this story!
I can't wait to see what's going to happen with all the tension between dare/calvin and dare/minnie...so many different types of tension (:
I think this story's so interesting and well written I just love it so much, keep up the writing and update soon please!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying all of this tension and what not. I intend to update next month, so be on the look out!
-Camila :) Report Review
awww cutie running to her mama!
Blah blah blah angsty stuff about teddy and vic but what's really cute in this story is teddy and lily! they're adorable! like so close and cute and stuff.
i do love the actual story though and not just the sideline stuff which i appear to be obsessing about, no ted and vic are great and i can't wait for them to sort it out and actually get together! Report Review
This is such a good story!
I love the metaphor, it's brilliant!
How on earth did you come up with it?
Seriously, it was such a cute bit of fluff and really well written too! There were no spelling/grammar mistakes that I could see and it was just really cute!Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, Kathrynen! :) I'm really glad you liked the story! Report Review
I love these stories, I think its great how different you've made Rose/Scorpius compared to how most people write them. Most would have her be like a mini Hermione and she's so different it makes the story so much more interesting!
I would love to see them get married one day although, I can't see Rose doing the whole white wedding thing, maybe Vegas?
But seriously, the whole story(ies) is so well written and really interesting to read, I absolutely love pretty much everything you write!Author's Response: I never really saw Rose as a mini-Hermione, so I just can't write her that way. She's got a lot of Ron in her, to me. She's smart like Hermione, but lazy and doesn't apply herself like Ron. She's definitely more the eloping type than the big wedding!
Thank you so much for the lovely review - I really appreciate it and I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Report Review
Hey, so this story is great, it's really well written and the characters are interesting and well developed so would you PLEASE update? Thankyou (: Report Review
I'm so happy!
I knew she'd do it eventually but it's just so great and cute and all that jazz.
Awh it was so cute how it turned out, especially that last bit with the whole thank you and everything, it was adorable and I love this story and am so sad it's ending but am happy at the same time if that makes sense.
SO CUTE!Author's Response: I'm glad you like how it turned out! I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much; that makes me so happy. It's definitely bittersweet that it's over. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
the story looks like it could be really interesting and i'm looking forward to reading the chapters ahead but the characters appear to have really adult bodies for the fact that they're 11?
I mean James has a six pack and Lily has a large chest? It just seems a bit early for that to happen physically... Report Review
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