{reviewid: 2638419, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
4th January 2012:
Shay,Shay,Shay. This is pretty cute. Some feedback, Everything is centered and that makes it difficult to read. Also this program makes it easy to put apge breaks. Check it out.
Tata!
Rilee
Author's Response: Thank you fot the tip.I was still getting used to the program at the time, but I'll go in and change that. I'l try to put in an apage break, but it may take some messing around.
Thanks for reviewing!
-Shay
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{reviewid: 2618789, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
21st November 2011:
Grr I love it so much!
Author's Response: thanks, glad you enjoyed it :D
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{reviewid: 2611538, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
4th November 2011:
I liked it. I knew it was coming, but the ending was soo good. I smell.a sequel...wonder who that is?
Author's Response: Rilee Amylia Dementia,
Really? Because all I smell is pie. I jest, I jest. Sequel? Maybe. . .
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{reviewid: 2610810, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
2nd November 2011:
I really like this story alot so far! Finish it!If you like voldemort stories you should see mine!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And will do(:
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{reviewid: 2610804, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
2nd November 2011:
That was actually really cute and I think it was actually pretty realistic for a guys thoughts.
Author's Response: Hey there!! Thanks a lot for reading & reviewing! I am glad you liked it and found it cute & realistic :)
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{reviewid: 2610457, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
1st November 2011:
I think I cried for this whole chapter! My friend told me this story was amazing and she was totally and completely right. I love the Hermione Lupin Pairing. But the fact that Logan is now older than her hurts my head!
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{reviewid: 2608284, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
27th October 2011:
I like the fact that the Hat's Song is different!
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{reviewid: 2607885, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
26th October 2011:
Cute(man i think alot of this is cute) maybe you should write a sequel, or what happened when harry/george/ron left. What didi they do? did ron see?
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{reviewid: 2607881, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
26th October 2011:
Actually, She's really really hungary! or tom riddle got her pregnant! Lmao She's so hungary she could eat a baby!
Author's Response: Tom Riddle got her pregnant? That would be interesting as he was long dead when this story takes place... Hmmm. I suppose she could be hungry... Not what I was going for, but if that's what you want :)
Thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2607879, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
26th October 2011:
It was okayy but it was someonewhat random and felt wayy unfinished.
Author's Response: I know, im working on editing it
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{reviewid: 2607479, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
25th October 2011:
That sucks really really bad. (the story rocks though)
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{reviewid: 2607474, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
25th October 2011:
No! No! No! What Next!!!
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{reviewid: 2607461, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
25th October 2011:
It's so Malfoy. hehehe
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{reviewid: 2607445, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
25th October 2011:
Oh my freaking goodness that was way too cute! Umm I think so negatively though so what is about to happen between them...
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{reviewid: 2607439, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
25th October 2011:
Wow that was pretty sweet. Imma go read the sequel now if its up!
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{reviewid: 2606973, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
24th October 2011:
Wow. i'm really sad she couldn't forgive him. They sounded like me and my fiancee' but we worked everything out. It's really sad this ended badly.
Author's Response: =( i know, sometimes life is sad! This one-shot was hard for me to write but i'm glad that it seemed believable and relateable (also that your fate wasn't the same as this!!) Thank you so much for taking the time to revew!
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{reviewid: 2606968, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
24th October 2011:
Cute, Cute, Cute! I really loved this. Hermione gone Emo, sorta. I would love to see a continuation of this story!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I've never thought to do a continuation, but I'll take that into account. I might just- I need a new project.
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{reviewid: 2606966, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
24th October 2011:
Awww. real cute and I really felt the awkwardness there... Nice job! Though the fact he calls her herms. like Hermaphrodites? uhh...
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{reviewid: 2606964, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
24th October 2011:
Aww that was soo cute. I like that he doesn't really make a move on her until the end. He's desperate in a jokester way.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading & commenting! means a lot to me x
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{reviewid: 2604781, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
19th October 2011:
Wow that was good, pretty sad though :(. Honestly I never was a fan of Draco/Ginny but this may have changed that for me. Keep writing.
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{reviewid: 2599191, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
6th October 2011:
WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA!!! What happens next??? *Pouts* It's really good! Oh and banner... Me!
Author's Response: Haha. Message me if you're interested in making a banner, I'd take anything; I'm that desperate. :)
Hope you keep reading.
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{reviewid: 2599185, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
6th October 2011:
I love this pairing! I love anything that has to do with Bellatrix. Once again your writing is intensfully deep.
-Rilee
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{reviewid: 2599178, reviewer: 'Rilee%20Amylia%20Dementia'}
6th October 2011:
Oh my godess. That's freaking amazing! probably one of the best writers I've seen on this site.
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