I loved this! It was so funny. The whole relationship between Al and James was great, I could feel all the brotherly thing going on. I can already tell that I'm going to love this. Can't wait until he next chapter :)
MoonMarauder xxAuthor's Response: thnk u so much for such a nice review on my story :) . I'll try my best to post the next chapter asap . Report Review
This was so worth the review :)
I love Rose's head, she's just so funny. It's great.
And why didn't she run?! She could have got away, but she couldn't leave Hugo could she? Good big sister there.
The made up incantation was awesome, sounded so real.
Can't wait till the next chapter :)Author's Response: Yay! Everyone should review EVERYTHING!
I'm glad you think Rose is funny, and that you like her.
She couldn't leave Hugo, no. She's a great big sister. I'd leave my brother!
It's Latin, of course it sounds cool :P. the 'ss' makes it sound like water/bubbly, methinks.
Thank you ever so much for reviewing! :D Report Review
I love it! Honestly this has been added to my favourites. I think it's just so amazing. Well done! I like all the little touches you've added about the whole Head Boy/Girl thing, like the hidden messages. Good idea. :)
The Marauders too. OMG they're perfect. I love Remus, him and James are just perfect. But I agree with him, maybe James really is just bad at duelling and doesn't understand women. Who knows.
This is fantastic though, can't wait until chapter four. :D
MM xxxAuthor's Response: Thanks for your reviews! I loved reading your comments, and hope you keep enjoying the story :)
-Abby Report Review
Again, I really like this chapter. It's going great :D
I just love all the characters, especially Lily. She's exactly how I imagined her. The way you've described the relationship between Lily and James is great and between her sister too.
"He didn't get me alone. We had one conversation—ONE! It isn't like we're getting married, for Godric's sake!" - Haha I LOVED this part. It made me laugh so much.
Chapter 3 here I come :)
MM xx Report Review
Love this already. Can't wait to read chapter two. You have everything I love right here. James/Lily, Lily/Sirius and the Marauders! I know I'm going to love this. Everything flows perfectly and I can't wait to see how you continue the story. Well Done! :)
MM x Report Review
This is so beautiful and heartbreaking. I felt like I was Narcissa so much and I was in so much pain just like her. I've never imagined their relationship like that or even paid much attention to it to be quite honest but this... I just loved it. Beautifully written and just amazing. :D
MM :) xxAuthor's Response: Hey!
You liked it! Yay! (after my oh-so-subtle comment :D)
I'm very glad you emphasized with Narcissa, and that it made you think differently! (because I'm deep like that).
Thanks very much for the review :D Report Review
This is really good :) I love the story line and the character of Natasha. She's so funny.
I'm in this challenge too. Would you mind checking out my entry The Story of Susan Wheele?
Really liked this though :D
MoonMarauder xxAuthor's Response: Woops, sorry for the atrociously late reply. Anyway, thanks! I really quite like the storyline too, and your Susie is extremely funny, too. Thanks for reviewing!
Cavell xx Report Review
This was really good. I loved your interpretations of the next-gen kids, especially Lily. This was great chapter can't wait till the next one :)
Jen :) xAuthor's Response: Wow, thanks so much for reviewing! xD You pretty much made my day. Glad to hear Lily's got some fans. I think she's a pretty cool kid (and so does she). You'll be seeing more of her for sure. Chapter two is in the works, but I'm afraid I'm pretty slow at updates. Please don't let that stop you from coming back!
HDK Report Review
This was lovely. I could relate to Katie's experience so much, I mean what girl can't relate to that. I loved the way you wrote her too, it was perfect.
It was a great chapter, keep up the good work :)
Jen :) xAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you felt you could relate to her and that you like the way i wrote her it makes me super happy! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
~Slytherinchica08~ Report Review
This was just wow. It was so emotional and I felt like I was feeling everything you wrote about and that I was really there.
This was great. I love Fred and I can't believe he died :'( Well done though, I loved this.
Jen :) xAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you followed it well, and that you enjoyed it. I wasn't too sure about it myself as it is the first story of this kind that I've written. Report Review
This was great. I loved the relationship between Lily and Teddy, it was so beautiful. Brilliantly written :)Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
This was great, can't wait till next chapter :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm writing it right now. It should be in the queue either today or tomorrow! Report Review
D'aw this was the cutest epilogue ever! :D
All the stories were so nice and believable and really well written. Well Done. This short story collection was great, you should write more like it! :D
Favourited!Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much, it means a lot. Another short story collection? I shall think about it. *Huggles* xxx Report Review
Hi, this was very emotional and moving. You've got me in tears here. I think you showed how James' downward spiral began really well and it was overall just really good. :)Author's Response: Thank you :D That was definitely what I wanted to show. Report Review
Wow. This is so well written, I feel so emotional reading it. You've gave me goosebumps and everything! This is definitely one of the best portrayals of Peter that I've ever seen, you don't see a lot of them either. So happy I got to read this, I loved it. 10/10 :)Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! It means a lot! Report Review
Haha this is so CRAZY! I LOVE IT! I was laughing the whole through that, can't wait till the next chapter. :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you found it funny! Thanks for the review :D I'm grinning like a loon here :P Report Review
This was awesome, it made me laugh so much. :) You've portrayed Audrey in such a different way than I've read before, I loved it. Definitely added to my favourites. :DAuthor's Response: AW! Thank you so much for this review! Having people reading it really motivates me to continue writing. :D
Ramona Report Review
This sounds like its going to be great. I loved it. :)
There are some mistakes that I noticed but they can be edited. Can't wait until the next chapter to see what happens. :D
Bye xAuthor's Response: Hey MoonMarauder!
Thank you for your review. I am glad you liked it.
I hope you enjoy the next chapter as well.
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