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Review #1, by Luna Dominique PotterThe Unsinkable Molly Prewett: I Can't Help Myself

15th October 2012:
I've just started this story and I'm already liking it. You have established some very sweet and defined characters, and although I'm not quite sure exactly what this story is going to entail, I can still know what to expect, which is good.

Can't wait to read more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Please review, I'd love to hear what you thought of the rest :) Thanks again!

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Review #2, by Luna Dominique PotterBitter About You: Chapter 2

20th August 2012:
I loved this chapter! I love how you're slowly adding in more characters, more plot, more background, and more personality. Excellent!

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Review #3, by Luna Dominique PotterBitter About You: Chapter 1

20th August 2012:
A very nice and sweet start to a story! I like how you have given both background and personality to James and Lily. I can't wait to see where this story leads. :)

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Review #4, by Luna Dominique PotterNot Just a Bystander: And then there is a deviation into toilet humour...

20th August 2012:
Hahaha, this was hilarious! I feel so bad for Fred, but it does make good for laughs. XD I really enjoy the parts with Autumn and the Weasleys/Potters. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Hha, as soon as he was unstuck hes sure to have thoug&t the whole thing was hilarious. I really love wroting about the potter weasleys too! thanks for the review :)

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Review #5, by Luna Dominique PotterNot Just a Bystander: And then we talked...

20th August 2012:
We finally got to found out about the deal with Autumn and her parents, yay! That was a really cool explanation, though, it wasn't something I expected and it's pretty unique too! Great job!

Author's Response: Yep! We finally did! Which is very exciting. Thanks for reviewing :)

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Review #6, by Luna Dominique PotterNot Just a Bystander: And then we were all prissy...

20th August 2012:
Aw, I feel pretty bad for Dom, even if she can be pretty . . . well yeah. Also, I'm really wondering what's with Autumn and her parents . . . can't wait to find out! Good chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah... I feel sorry for her too. I'm waaay sympathetic to her plight :(

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Review #7, by Luna Dominique PotterNot Just a Bystander: And then I am in mortal danger (and so is James Potter)...

20th August 2012:
An incredibly sweet chapter! I love Autumn and James's conversations!

Author's Response: Arent they just so cute? :D

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Review #8, by Luna Dominique PotterNot Just a Bystander: And then there are not-so lazy Sundays...

20th August 2012:
Whee! They kissed! :D That was so sweet!
Also, I love the rest of the chapter, of course. :)

Author's Response: PAh, everyone a cutesy kissing scene :)

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Review #9, by Luna Dominique PotterNot Just a Bystander: And then there is quidditch (and quidditch related activities)...

17th August 2012:
Lol, Lily cracked me up. XD I liked that little scene you had at the beginning too, with April and Quidditch. Very nicely done. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I loved writing about Lily and April and the Quidditch match and I'm very glad you enjoyed it too :)

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Review #10, by Luna Dominique PotterNot Just a Bystander: And then I turn seventeen...

17th August 2012:
Wow! Dom's story is really interesting . . . but it really does explain a lot! I'm also really curious about Autumn and her letter. . . .
It was so great that you had April come home for Autumn's birthday! That was so sweet!
Keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: Autumn and her letter? More on that very soon! Thanks for reviewing :) :)

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Review #11, by Luna Dominique PotterNot Just a Bystander: And then I am forced to socialise with a wider range of people (read: not Dom)...

16th August 2012:
Autumn's birthday is sure to be full of awesomeness knowing you. Dom's difficult, but maybe there's a reason for it . . . if there is, I can't wait to hear it. Benson might not be so bad. James Potter is still as cute as ever.
Your story is just full of brilliance! :D

Author's Response: N'awwh! You're too cute! Thanks for reviewing and being lovely to me :)

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Review #12, by Luna Dominique PotterNot Just a Bystander: And then further complications arise...

16th August 2012:
Ha ha, Flint gives me the creeps, which, I guess, is your aim, so well done. April sounds exciting! I hope we get to meet her. :)

Author's Response: N'awwh, poor Flint. More on him later! ;)

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Review #13, by Luna Dominique PotterNot Just a Bystander: And then I actually enjoy myself...

16th August 2012:
They are so sweet together! Eeee (fan girl moment XD)! As always, you'd story is simply hilarious and awesome. :)

Author's Response: FANGIRLMOMENT. I like these ;)

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Review #14, by Luna Dominique PotterNot Just a Bystander: And then I am reminded why people confuse me...

16th August 2012:
Aw, I already love James, even though we've seen little of him. And of course, Autumn's in my "Favorite OCs" list too.

I'm really excited to where this story's going to head! Next chapter, here I come!

Author's Response: Awwh, Autumn is honoured! Thanks for reviewing :)

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Review #15, by Luna Dominique PotterNot Just a Bystander: And then I deal with the fact I ruined James Potterís life...

16th August 2012:
Aha, poor Autumn! Thing just can't seem to go right for her, huh? Anyway, another brilliant and perfectly executed chapter. :)

Author's Response: Nope, they just can't... Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #16, by Luna Dominique PotterNot Just a Bystander: And then I became a pranking mastermind...

16th August 2012:
Wow! This is awesome!

Dom's point system is really clever; I never thought of something like that but it seems like it would work . . . for Dom at least. XD

I find Autumn hilarious too. She's so dramatic, and funny even though she doesn't know it.

Lovely chapter!

Author's Response: Ahha, I wouldn't advise trying to implement them in real life :|

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Review #17, by Luna Dominique PotterTask One : The Dragon of his Heart: The Dragon of his Heart

15th August 2012:
That was . . . that was beautiful. You nearly had me in Year's (and that's a achievement as I rarely cry).

Author's Response: Awww thanks Luna :D I'm glad you liked it :D

*Hugs*


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Review #18, by Luna Dominique PotterRemus' Literal Little Furry Problem: Remus' Literal Little Furry Problem

15th August 2012:
Ha ha, I never thought about that but it definitely sounds like something James and Sirius would do! Good job!

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Review #19, by Luna Dominique PotterDancing Shoes: Come and dance...

15th August 2012:
I've never read Molly/Arthur, so this is a wonderful start for me. This was so sweet. I absolutely love them both!

Author's Response: Thankyou! Haha I've never written Molly/Arthur before so I'm glad this came off okay. So pleased that you liked it, thanks for reviewing :)

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Review #20, by Luna Dominique PotterFireflies: Perfect Night

15th August 2012:
Oh my goodness, that was so sweet and adorable and amazing! Absolutely loved it.

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I'm really glad that the emotions were well captured :)

-Marissa


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Review #21, by Luna Dominique PotterPerpetual: ( i )

15th August 2012:
That was nice! You put a really interesting twist on it by adding her and Daphne's little "game". Loved it. :)

Author's Response: Thankyou! :D

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Review #22, by Luna Dominique PotterGravity Happens: radiance

15th August 2012:
Awesome! I loved the switching back-and-forth between their POVs and I love all the description you put in there! Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun exploring their different perspectives and writing the descriptions :D

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Review #23, by Luna Dominique PotterPride and Prejudice : Hugo and Keira

15th August 2012:
That was so sweet! I loved it! :D I love both Hugo's and Kiera's personalities; you characterized them both very well in such few words. Awesome story!

Author's Response: thank you so much! im glad that you like hugo and keira (:
thanks again for R+R! (:


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Review #24, by Luna Dominique PotterThe Damage Has Been Done: You Cannot Break A Broken Heart

15th August 2012:
That was so sweet! And so sad! But really, really good, of course. :)

Author's Response: Ah, angst. :D not something I write a lot, cause I'm not very good at it, but I liked writing this one. I'm glad you like it! :) and thank you SO much for leaving the review, I love seeing them.
-ric.


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Review #25, by Luna Dominique PotterPhotographs: one/one.

15th August 2012:
This story is a perfect depiction of not wanting to grow up. Lots of times I feel exactly like Dom does -- it's like you read my mind and put it into words! Very well done! :)

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