Well first off, let me say... This story is amazing! It's actually one of my absolute all-time favorites on here. So kudos to your excellent writing, seriously... I can't get enough!
I must say, I quite enjoyed seeing the feisty side of Lenny. It was very entertaining and showed how she has evolved and changed as a person what with everything that has happened to her. I believe she does deserve to be happy though, but I don't think Lenny and Sirius should get together right away, like the immediate future. I think she should make him work for it. Maybe a one on one confrontation after Lenny avoids him sort of thing would be good to add in? *shrugs * It's just a suggestion...
- Until next chapter ;)Author's Response: I'm so excited that you say that! Lenny has a little fire to her, as you'll see in the sequel ;). And Sirius and Lenny will definitely confront each other very very soon, you just wait. Report Review
They're so close but so far away (Lenny & Sirius)... What a phenomenal story; I can't wait to see what happens next in the next chapter!Author's Response: Awh thank you so much! Report Review
My favorite so far... So romantic if shaylee and remus would end up kissing in front of the camp fire! I was like awww so close lol. Report Review
This story is amazing.. really it is. I love Remus Lupin love stories. I just hope that Shaylee and Remus do realize that they love each other and have a happy ending. At this point, I'm glad they had an almost kiss- It makes you on edge to find out what will happen next. I hope Remus comes to his senses soon and tells Shaylee how he feels before it is too late and he loses her.
Ahh, I am soo looking forward to the next chapter !! Report Review
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