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Review #1, by LilyHermionePotterThe Sisterhood: The Scarlet Train.

13th September 2011:
you have made a HUGE mistake that you might want to rectify. Weasly should be spelt WeaslEy. just to let you know

Author's Response: Thank you! i'm not very good at spelling- i did think it looked a bit odd.

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Review #2, by LilyHermionePotterSecrets Well Kept : The Train, Nineteen Years Later

11th September 2011:
Its really good. I personally don't think, especially as being raised by the wizard equivalent of upper class, Albus would use the language that you make him use. I like the idea that Al has a big temper!!

Author's Response: Hmmm you may have a point there... I will confess that I swear a lot and I'm probably just transposing my personality on my characters lol but anyways, thanks for the review!


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