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Review #1, by inlovewithscorp_siriuslyPlaying the Field: Chapter 21

23rd June 2012:
Hi!!! I am so glad you are writing again, it makes me so happy yeyeye!!! Okay so I loved Remusís line about the ministry, ďAlways trying to keep everyone calm, even if thereís actually something to panic about.Ē Itís so perfect and made me lol :) I loved Siriusís rant it was awesome and it got everything in there, ahh you must have had so much fun writing it! And the end kiled me it was sooo cute and I loved it :) so happy you are back to writing and I canít wait for you to write more!

-your biggest fan

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Review #2, by inlovewithscorp_siriuslyPlaying the Field: Chapter 12

10th November 2011:
HI!!! Ok so this is by far the funniest chapter yet I can't even tell you how much of this made me legit laugh out loud, the letter at the beginning was hilarious and I pretty much loved everything Sirius said in the whole kitchen scene! James was so cute and protective I love James!!! (and Sirius of course) the line when James was like its kinda the only style I"ve got made me die!! I just loved this chapter so much -your biggest fan

Author's Response: It makes me very happy that you thought the chapter was funny!! I try very hard to make the story humorous. I'm so glad you liked the chapter!
Sabrina :)


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Review #3, by inlovewithscorp_siriuslyPlaying the Field: Chapter 11

10th November 2011:
HI!!! So I love this chapter and all the memories in it! I loved that he noticed she was wearing the scarf, then the kiss ahh I love when they kiss!! My stomach did a legit flip when he whispered in her ear I was dying!! Then the whole convo between Maddie and Lily was so funny and it really contributed well to ur goal in this chapter of wanting to show how much they all care about each other, it really showed how close they are!! I loved it- your biggest fan

Author's Response: I'm glad that my goal was successful and I'm very glad you like the story so much! Thank you so much for your constant positive feedback!
Sabrina :)


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Review #4, by inlovewithscorp_siriuslyPlaying the Field: Chapter 8

21st September 2011:
HI!!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH!!! it was my absolute favorite chapter so far, obviously because it is Maddie and Sirius snogging!!! aaah so anyways i love the stuff around their bed its perfect!! i love that he is shirtless and the convo between maddie and Sirius so flirty and cute!!! and the lines, i cant help it if i am hot, and what a great start to the day haha and the line, Apparently, sleeping at night and in every class isnít enough. they all made me laugh which i love to do haha!! i love the convo during the snowball fight when he is on top of her

Author's Response: Hi! I'm so glad you liked it! This is a pivotal chapter (obviously haha) so I hope it was a good one! Glad you had some new favorite lines out of this one, too!! Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews!
Sabrina :)


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Review #5, by inlovewithscorp_siriuslyPlaying the Field: Chapter 7

21st September 2011:
HI!!! ahhh i loved this chapter and all the dialogue between Sirius and Luke Sirius is just so funny i love it!! i love that Frank gets to be the keeper now!! hahaha at wow its not like i just said that or anything, and i loved when Lily congratulated James, it was so cute!!! oh and yeyeye for Sirius picking to hang wt his friends instead of being with Lauren!!! this chapter was absolutely wonderful and you wrote the game and the pep talk really well!!! so i loved it and cant wait for more!!

-your biggest fan

Author's Response: Hello again! I'm so glad you liked it! :) Reviews like this make me so happy and encourage me to write, so thank you so much! I hope my dialogue continues to make you this happy ahaha!
Sabrina :)


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Review #6, by inlovewithscorp_siriuslyPlaying the Field: Chapter 6

21st September 2011:
HI!!! so i loved this chapter but ah i hate Luke for quitting, and screwing the team over. I love the way she figures out Sirius was right its kinda like professor i didnt mention the graveyard ahh love it!! i love the line "i am most definitly not happy" bc he cares so much and ahh its just so cute!! i love what alice says about your frank is out there so cute and i love the incorperation of their romance on the side!!and i legit laughed out loud at James' response to who would you rather!! and i also laughed at the lack of confidence line haha i am so gonna use that line now!! loved it and cant wait for more!!!

-your biggest fan

Author's Response: Hi! haha yes it wasn't a very sportsmanlike move of him, but aren't you glad he's gone? (I know I am!) And hahaha to the "I don't think I said anything about a graveyard, Professor..." didn't even do that on purpose! I'm glad you liked a lot of the lines in this chapter! Thank you so much!!
Sabrina :)


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Review #7, by inlovewithscorp_siriuslyPlaying the Field: Chapter 5

21st September 2011:
HI!!! wah i hate that she doesn't believe him :( poor Sirius i love the conversation between James and Sirius, well i love all of them, but the one where they argue about who should tell her made me laugh!! i feel like you really nailed their relationship and how hilarious and close they are, and its great!!! i loved this chapter but wahhh :( i want her to believe Sirius so she can get rid of Luke and we can move on to Sirius! hahaha so any ways i loved it and i cant wait to read more!!!

-your biggest fan

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like the dialogue; it's my favorite thing to write! I'm happy you think that their characterization/relationship is fitting because that's really important to me. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Sabrina :)


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