Team Tom!!! Woot *waves flag with Voldies face on it* 10/10 :)Author's Response: New chapter is up! Thank you for your support :) Report Review
It's over? Waah!! You are such an amazing writer and this is such an amazing story, I can't believe it's over! You really ended it well, and I'm honoured I got a personal thanks :D I nearly cried when I saw the status "Completed". I'll be coming back to re-read this story, mark my words! I can't wait for your next story (I hope it's soon!). Sending you good luck and lots of love (via Owl Post) Best Wishes, Hana :) xxxAuthor's Response: Yes, it's over. :') Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the ending; it seems popular so I'm so relieved I added that final chapter. :) Well, you reviewed consistently, so I figured you earned a mention. :) Aww. :) Yay! :D It'll be up toward the end of the year. I found one that I started to write a year ago (it's only a few thousand words) so I might finish that sometime as well. Perhaps there'll be two stories. :D Thank you! Goodbye for now! MarauderLover7. Report Review
Your dialogues are so realistic, I don't even read the part when you write "Dumbledore said, Sirius said etc." Loving the deer/stag moment with Sirius and James. And, did you invent the rules for Life-Debt? I mean, I know J.K wrote that for Peter and Harry, but do you really have to do it like that? Sounds like the Unbreakable vow a bit :) And you write Dumbledore well, and most of the stories I've read don't write him that good...I can't either to be honest. I hope they come out okay! And where the HELL is Pettigrew? The rat, honestly. Same time tomorrow? Cheers, HanAAuthor's Response: Yay, thank you! I really pride myself on dialogue - I really struggle to read anything that's remotely stilted or formal, so I try to make mine as realistic as possible. :) Obviously J.K.'s idea for Life-Debts triggered me writing this - I needed Moody to fight James leaving, but for James to win out and go after Lily and Sirius - and yes, I tweaked the rules a bit to add my own spin to the whole matter. I don't know if it's necessarily like that in J.K.'s world, but it is in this story, although I was careful that nothing in my explanation disagrees with anything mentioned in the Harry Potter books. Thank you. :) I don't think I have Dumbledore perfect, but I feel like he's believable at least, which I can deal with. :) Peter's around - he listened in to Dumbledore's explanation, but before that he was lying on a stretcher, unconscious. :P Yes, the same time as usual. :D Thank you so much for the review! MarauderLover7. Report Review
Awww! Sirius and Lily teamwork! Theres just something cute about them :) And take that Peter! Held his wand the wrong way haha xD This is gonna finish soon? :( No! My story is going to end with their deaths... I just don't know how to end it if they're alive... Another great chapter, can't wait for the next one!Author's Response: Haha, I know! They're just like siblings, though they don't bicker much. :P Yes, I thought a little bit of karmic-justice for Peter was over-due. Yes, it is. :( I'm going to be so sad when it does end, but it can't go on forever. :S I had the ending planned from the beginning - originally, the end chapter was going to be a one-shot and then the concept of "White Flags" came to me and I couldn't help myself - and now look, it's almost 100,000 words long! :) Thank you! Chapter 57 will be up tomorrow, as per usual. :) Thank you so much for the review! MarauderLover7. Report Review
They were attacked? Voldemort? A voice Remus knows? Ahhh so much good stuff in this chapter :) I love this story!! Are you going to write until James and Lily's deaths, or... ?Author's Response: Yes, yes and yes again. :P Aww, I'm so glad you liked it! :D Thank you! All I'll say is that James and Lily will still be alive when I write the words "The End". Sadly, that moment is drawing near - there are only a few chapters left in "White Flags"! :'S Thank you so much for the review! MarauderLover7. Report Review
Haha Gideon and Fabian are funny! Aren't they Molly's brothers? I was relieved they weren't going to be expelled :) And that Peter is such a coward... And a traitor... I hate traitors! Anyway, when's the next chapter gonna be up? Two days without internet and I've lost my sense of time... I'm such a weirdo 0.0Author's Response: Haha, I really enjoyed writing them, and yes, they are Molly's younger brothers. :) The next chapter will be up tonight, at the usual time. :) Thank you so much for the review! MarauderLover7. Report Review
Oooh this is interesting!! I wonder whats up! On to the next chapter.and nice writing :)Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. :) Thank you! Thank you so much for the review! MarauderLover7. Report Review
:) Another great chapter! I won't be here tomorrow, but I'll read as soon as I'm home!! ~HanAAuthor's Response: Thank you! Haha, they'll be a chapter waiting for you then. :) Thank you for the review! MarauderLover7. Report Review
I want to kill Vernon. With a wand. I'ma Avada Kedavra him in the butt! Nice effect, I like it a lot. And I'm glad Petunia saw some sense in the end. Poor James...I'm sad now :( Plus I'm listening to a sad song so it's double effect... Okay, I'll stop yapping now...I'm just so excited (it's off topic, never mind xD)!!! Same time tomorrow? I'll be there to review tomorrow, if it's up! ~HanAAuthor's Response: Haha, I think that's the general consensus. :P Thank you. :) I wanted to show Petunia seeing sense in the end because I needed to show the small compassionate side of her that agreed to take Harry in. Yes, same time tomorrow. :) Thank you so much for the review! MarauderLover7. Report Review
Hahahaha. There's a light! Chapter 50! *pops open a bottle of wine* Fabulous! Great chapter, it made me laugh :D I like reading a new chapter before bed, it's become quite a habit :) Harold is a cool guy, and I wonder how Vernon will react to James and Sirius. Is chapter 51 going to be up at the same time? You've got lots of love coming your way! From me :) [duh xD]Author's Response: Haha, I know Chapter 50! :D Yay! I was hoping this would be a funny one. :) I had a lot of fun writing Harold. Haha, Vernon vs Sirius and James is up next! Yes, I will update at the usual time. :) Thank you so much for the review! MarauderLover7. Report Review
Aahhh this is such a good story idea! I luv it! Please update soon! Pretty please? With a time-turner on top? Hehe :) Report Review
I have a feeling that Lily and her mum and Tuney will be attacked at the shopping centre. And next chapter is 50!! Well done! I can't wait for it! And tomorrow is going to be a long day, so give me something to keep me sane! Lol just kidding. Take your time!! Cheers.Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see... I know! Chapter 50! It seems like such a milestone! :D Haha, sure! The next chapter will be up at its usual time. :D Thank you so much for the review! MarauderLover7. Report Review
Peters last line is so true...though he IS reffering to himself. Talented writer, you are. I can't wait for the next chapter :)Author's Response: Haha, I liked the irony of that line. :P Thank you! :D The next chapter should be up tonight! :) Thank you for the reivew! MarauderLover7. Report Review
I felt a strong surge of affection for Snape, even though he didn't say it was Peter...but he said "rat"!! Anyway, lovely chapter, and I'm on to the next one :)Author's Response: I'm so glad you like Snape after this chapter - I thought it was really important to put him in because it shows his underlying good, but it also shows that James has matured, since he is able to speak with him. :) Haha, it took me ages trying to word that "rat" part properly. :P Thank you so much for the review! MarauderLover7. Report Review
The Unicorn Association! Woot! I love this story, since it's well written and always makes me laugh :) I wonder what Dumbledore was thinking when he saw the cloak? Can't wait for the next update!Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked that part! :D Thank you. :D Haha, I think he was so surprised about having Sirius, Remus and Lily materialise in the middle of his office that he didn't have time to properly comprehend it. I suspect he went straight to his Pensieve once they left and watched the scene again. :P From there, his interest was piqued, eventually leading to him having the Cloak when James and Lily died. :S The next update should be up tonight! Thank you so much for the review! MarauderLover7. Report Review
Beautiful work :') It's written so nicely... Poor Sirius :(Author's Response: Thank you! It means a lot that you liked this story! ^_^ Report Review
Hey! Nice beginning! I like the name Echo :)Author's Response: Thanks :) and I really like the name Echo too :D Report Review
Yes! It's finally here! I love the way you made Dean and Ted meet, and everything else! This is just so well thought out! Love it! 10/10 and I can't wait for the next Chapter!Author's Response: Aww thank you, that means a lot! Oh and by the way, the next chapter should be up soon ;) Report Review
Eep! So cute! Love this story! And I love Remus too now! Not that I didn't before :) Upload soon please!Author's Response: Aww! Yay, I'm glad! :D Haha, I really liked writing about Remus in this chapter - I liked his sense of humour showing, and how the approaching full-moon alters his personality. I'm away at the moment but I'll be back tomorrow, so there'll be a chapter up at some point tomorrow night. :) Thank you for the review! MarauderLover7. Report Review
Hahhahahahahha Scorp and Rose at the end! I like old Sluggy uere, he sure does know how to pair them up :) Keep on the good work!Author's Response: Yes, he is quite a character, isn't he, now? Report Review
Can't wait for the next chapter! Ol' Minnie crying :') I love Sirius' personality! And I want to rip Peter up and throw the pieces off the Astronomy Tower! Violent much? :) 10/10Author's Response: Yay! Haha, yes, I figured she would and then I couldn't help but put it in. :P I love Sirius too! :) And I hate Peter - I certainly like the sound of that punishment. :P Thank you for the review! MarauderLover7. Report Review
This sounds interesting! Scorpius and Orla are hilarious!! Favee :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! Enjoy the rest (when it's up!) :) Report Review
This is SUCH a good story! I like their humor :) Is it really ending next chapter? :( 10/10 :))Author's Response: Sorry, but it is the end. I was toying with the idea of another chapter because there is one thing I would like to fix, but I'm not sure I could make it work in context. I'm currently trying to work it out as a one-shot mini sequel. (Along with four other stories. I currently have cooking.) Glad you enjoyed this one. Hope to hear from you again. Report Review
The heck? His girlfriend? How could he have an effing girlfriend??? Oooh Nia is going to be so mad :OAuthor's Response: hah yeah she does! keep reading!(: Report Review
They are all so hilarious xD I crack up ^^ ~HanaAuthor's Response: thank you so much!(: keep reading and reviewing! Report Review
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