{reviewid: 2775480, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
12th March 2013:
PLEASE Make this all better! And PLEASE update soon! Dying over here! And I'm really sorry I've never reviewed until now! You're story has just put my brain into over drive. It keeps telling me: "Muuusst Reeeaad" I think I caught a reading virus or something... anyways! Help My Brain! Please! Oh yeah! And I L>O>V>E Your story!
Author's Response: I have a strong urge to tell you the entire plot for the next two chapters BUT it would completely spoil the fun (or my fun)
So I'm actually writing right now, however this chapter is very different than anything I've written so it's a bit more difficult to write...
I hope to see you back when I publish the next chapter (Which I hope will be in the next few days!!)
Thanks for the review darling!
-HarryandGinnyForEver
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{reviewid: 2774082, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
4th March 2013:
That was really really great :) Super enjoyable to read! Kudos!
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{reviewid: 2773164, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
28th February 2013:
OH MAN!!! KEEP GOING! PLEASE PLEASE!!
I NEED this!!
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{reviewid: 2772054, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
22nd February 2013:
Oh please keep going with this story!! It's fantastic!!! What is going on between Rose and Scorpius!?!?! ARG!! This is too much!! please update soon!
Author's Response: Hello TheHallow,
I will definitly keep going with this story! Never fear! No one knows what's going on between Rose and Scorpius inclusing, I highly suspect, themselves. Hope to update shortly but thank you for the review,
Irish Myth.
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{reviewid: 2772034, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
21st February 2013:
Like this story! But you should put in some more Scorpius stuff! Like maybe have it in his POV or something! :) Really Enjoy your story!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you like it :D
I was thinking once (if) I finish this, I might do a few one shots from different people's POV's so look out.
Thanks again
-Potterfan310
Soph x
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{reviewid: 2772017, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
21st February 2013:
Okay! I haven't reviewed yet because i have been so engrossed in reading this story! Please keep going! I loved how you ended it with a sweet note on Harry and Ginny. But I think you should add some opposition to the PEACE, some people might not like restarting a Wizengamot. I think that you shouldn't make it too similar to the 2nd Continental Congress, (Idk if you live in America but that is a part of American History) But that you should totally be creative with it and let PEACE fly! I REALLY REALLY love this story!
Author's Response: No problem, I'm just glad that you did review. My plan is for PEACE to have some opposition, someone to throw them back so they only get so far forward, but I'm working on who/what would be the right opponent. Mostly what kind of character should I have for-fronting the opposition group.
I am American, and it is actually really sad that I can't recall the 2nd Continental Congress. History is my favorite subject, and I know the 1st Continental Congress, but I have no idea the 2nd and it's really bugging me. (Going to go look it up right after this.)
Thank you so much for reviewing and I hope I can put the next chapter in the Queue in the next day or so!
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{reviewid: 2771653, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
19th February 2013:
That was great! But my question is how did Rose get that made at Scorpius! :OOO Something's going on here that didn't happen in the Epilogue of the last one!!! Really Love it! Although i kinda admit it was obvious scorpius was her partner but seriously if he wasn't then we would all be really disappointed! XP I'm excited to see the rest!
Author's Response: I will tell you that nothing happened after the epilogue. There will be some moe clarification on her reaction in the next chapter. It was meant to be obvious that Scorpius was her partner, I mean really if he wasn't her partner there wouldn't be a story because he would still be in london and she in New York. Anyways thank you so much for the review.
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{reviewid: 2771509, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
18th February 2013:
I wanna cry but at the same time i don't because i wanna laugh and smile at the same time! one word: Brilliant!
Author's Response: So glad that you liked and please don't cry although laughing is good. lol Thank you so much for the review.
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{reviewid: 2771498, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
18th February 2013:
LOVED IT! I LOVED IT! IM FOAMING IN THE MOUTH!! FLIPPING AROUND OM MY FLOOR SQUEALING! THAT WAS FANTASTIC! I LOVE YOU!! . as a writer of course :P If i could i would give you a thousand points!
Author's Response: Sooo glad that you liked it. Thank you so much for the review. I hope that you enjoy the rest.
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{reviewid: 2771483, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
18th February 2013:
I love how you wrote this! And it's a long span of time so its not like a big BAM I love Rose kinda thing! Love this!
Confession time: I was one of the people who wrote your first chapter before it was finished... and I didn't like it! But I saw you had completed it so i thought "what the hey" and I LOVE IT! You did a great job of turning it around!!
Author's Response: Yes I am a huge fan of time in books. I was trying to avoid rushing their releationship so I am glad that you are enjoying it. Thanks for giving it a second chance. the reason I have the first chapter tha way is because I felt that it was a good set up also I am a huge Ron and hermione fan so I wanted to do something with them. Thank you for the review.
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{reviewid: 2771116, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
16th February 2013:
O Exciting! Sibling Rivalry! I love how you have developed Rose and Scorpius's relationship slowly! And I like how it wasn't like a big BAM romance! It fits in nicely with all the action and adventure! Please release the next chapter soon! :P
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{reviewid: 2771051, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
16th February 2013:
That was super cute! But idk if scorpius liked it or not :/ I guess I'll find out later XP LOVE THIS STORY!
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{reviewid: 2771035, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
16th February 2013:
That is sooo sad!!! Poor Albus! i was hoping it was going to be the other way around ): BTW! I LOVE this story! You are a real writer and I am so glad to finally see somebody on here who can write something reasonable! :P Thank you for this fantastic read! I'll be enjoying it!
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{reviewid: 2770899, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
15th February 2013:
I like your story! But i have to admit i find it hard hearing Harry saying things like that to Romilda... not because its Romilda but mostly because it just doesn't seem like Harry to me... whateves! It's your story anyways! And I like it! I like the twist you put on Harry and Ginny's relationship!
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{reviewid: 2770208, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
12th February 2013:
I LOVE this story! Few grammar and spelling errors but we all do that! anyways! Fantastic story! I hope you are writing a new chapter now!
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{reviewid: 2746635, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
17th October 2012:
LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP GOING BEFORE I GO MAD!
Author's Response: I will! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2729765, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
9th August 2012:
OHEMGE! I am so hooked on your story that i couldn't even review until now!! and ... wtf?! Why would you kill Albus? I have to admit i cried when he said the same lines Sirius said to Harry... it was so heartbreaking. But i swear if you kill scorpious i will stop reading 3; don't kill him!!
Author's Response: I made you cry? Is that sad that it's like a victory to me? Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2728971, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
7th August 2012:
I LOVE IT! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! Sigh i am in love with this story!! I'm getting giddy while i read it!! i can't stop giggling!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2728936, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
7th August 2012:
i LOVE this story! IT'S PERFECT! I've been looking EVERYWHERE for it! Thank you so much for creating something for me to sink my teeth into!!
Author's Response: You are so welcome! Thank YOU for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2728274, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
5th August 2012:
Okay im going to be blunt... this story is annoying.
There is no raw emotion in it. it just sounds like "OH! Scorpious!" and "Oh! Rose, i love you." No offense but im not into it :/ sorry although you are a very good writer!
Author's Response: The first few chapters I admit are a little cheesy; blame it on my age when I was writing them.
I believe that the later chapter get a little more in-depth and heavier, so keep reading a little bit more and let me know what you think! Regardless, I appreciate your commentary and look forward to see what else you have to say!
Thanks again :)
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{reviewid: 2728243, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
5th August 2012:
I LOVE this story! I am OBSESSED!!! Truly!! Keep going please? I want more! :D It's is so awesome! The story line, the ideas, the imagination!! The fact that they keep going back in time is so cool! What an awesome idea!!
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{reviewid: 2594300, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
24th September 2011:
BRILLIANT!!! OH MAN! THAT WAS EXCELLENT! I LOVED IT! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! KEEP GOING! PLEASE!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! :D
The next chapter is waiting in the queue right now so it should be up in a day or two.
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{reviewid: 2586632, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
8th September 2011:
Great story! A bit choppy but great! I cried like a blubbering baby when Mary died though! That was terrible!! I absolutely LOVED your story line! i read it from start to finish! Excellent story!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you liked it, and glad (though sorry) that you shed tears. I really appreciate your feedback :)
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{reviewid: 2584610, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
5th September 2011:
THis is absolutely Excellent! Keep going! PLEASE!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm trying to write the next chapter as fast as possible!
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{reviewid: 2584471, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
5th September 2011:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! GIVE ME MORE GIVE ME MORE!! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I'm nearly done with the next chapter so it should be up soon.
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