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Reading Reviews From Member: BethanyRose

6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by BethanyRose

15th January 2012:

I like the start of this story and looking forward to the next chaper :)

Author's Response: Glad to hear you like it! Next chapter will be out soon :)

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Review #2, by BethanyRose

Harry Potter and the Legacy of Slytherin: Chapter 3: In to the Light

8th October 2011:

This is really good but you keep switching between past and present tense which makes it a little hard to understand :)

Author's Response: Thanks. And sorry about the tenses. trying to improve as i write more :)

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Review #3, by BethanyRose

Gone: Missing

6th October 2011:

WOW this is brilliant. it made me so excited I forgot to breathe (which was an issue :D) do we find out how Harry vanishes? This is brilliant keep writing :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! (Please keep breathing! :p)
Yeah, you find out later on more of what happened to Harry. Al tries to find out where Harry went, of course.
Chapter four is validating!

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Review #4, by BethanyRose

Harry Potter and the Silent Siege: The Burned Down House

24th September 2011:

your story is really good but Ginnys full name is genevra but I dont know how to spell it. You probably already know but I was just saying :)

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Review #5, by BethanyRose

Normalcy: Chapter 47: Goodbye Surrender

24th September 2011:

THIS IS SO GOOD, IT MADE ME CRY:') SORRY FOR THE CAPS MY LAPTOP IS SORT OF MAD AND RANDOM THINGS DONT WORK, LIKE THE CAPS LOCK BUTTON :(

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Review #6, by BethanyRose

The Road Home: The Crossroads

19th September 2011:

WOW thats such a good ending so thanks for writing this !!! :D sorry but why do you spell shop like shoppe? sorry if it sounds rude but in just wondering :/

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