Reading Reviews From Member: mashforever
55 Reviews Found

Review #1, by mashforeverPrime Suspects: Epilogue - Wounds

13th November 2012:
I have to say that, that was the most perfect ending you could have possibly created! Thank for you a fantastic read!

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Review #2, by mashforeverPrime Suspects: Day 43

19th July 2012:
This is really intense! I'm anxious to see how everything works itself out.

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Review #3, by mashforeverPrime Suspects: The Breaking

10th June 2012:
Oh. My. God. I'm practically sobbing. I can't wait to find out what really happened!

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Review #4, by mashforeverPrime Suspects: The Confession

3rd June 2012:
Why is Peakes smiling when Rose confesses? I'll bet that jerk is somehow involved in this whole thing.

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Review #5, by mashforeverEros, Greek God of Love: The Only Chapter

2nd June 2012:
This is good; I like it. But I have one little-bitty baby problem: Zacharias Smith is a Hufflepuff. Other than that, this tale is awesome.

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Review #6, by mashforeverPrime Suspects: The Murderer With a Face and a Name

29th May 2012:
So Rose did do it? Or is she just covering for Scorpius because she (thinks she) loves him? This is so good!

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Review #7, by mashforeverPrime Suspects: My Home Away From Home

24th May 2012:
*squeals at the adorableness that is this story* This is so good!

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Review #8, by mashforeverLe Scorp!: This is the last chapter!

24th May 2012:
I love it! This is one of the most hilarious things I have ever read. :)

Author's Response: Le Scorp thinks you are one of the most awesome reviewers ever. Fact. :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #9, by mashforeverStupid Red Head : It Had To Be Him

13th March 2012:
So, this is intriguing, but I have a couple of points of confusion:

A) Why do they have to have a real baby? Wouldn't it be better to use a magic doll? And where would the child go after the course finishes?

B) In case you haven't noticed, you have Dean paired with both Lavender and Luna.

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Review #10, by mashforeverPrime Suspects: Between A Rock and A Hard Place

28th January 2012:
Oh, this is good; brilliant, even! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

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Review #11, by mashforeverPhoenix Ashes: Chapter Two

23rd January 2012:
This is getting exciting! Great characterizations, by the way.

Author's Response: Aww thank you. I am kind of worried that they are a bit ooc, but I'm trying my best.

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Review #12, by mashforeverShadows: Meeting

11th December 2011:
I like it, but Rose, Al, and Scorpius seem WAY too comfortable with each other. I'm sure Harry and Ron raised their kids to be nice, but I feel Draco would still be pretentious and raise his kid as such.

Author's Response: Thanks very much for your feedback, it's always good to get other peoples perspectives on things. I think I'm working from a place where children are less of a reflection of their parents and more their own people, with their own values and beliefs, I'm not sure how far I'll go with it but thank you very much for reading and thank you more for reviewing!
(Sincere apologies for the delay in response, I lost my login details and have only just reactivated them!) x

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Review #13, by mashforeverNot A Hero: Not A Hero

6th December 2011:
I like it; your tale has an ambiance of darkness that "Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows" encompasses, which is good for the setting. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you, that's good to hear :) I'm glad you liked this story!

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Review #14, by mashforeverWhile Daddy Wasn't Watching: Daddy!

2nd December 2011:
That is cute! Normally, I don't read Draco/Ginny stories, but it seemed too good to pass up. However, let me get this straight: Did Pansy marry Neville? That's how I understood it, and I don't get it. How did it happen?

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Review #15, by mashforeverEpilogue: The Next Generation: Old Endings, New Beginnings

1st December 2011:
Why does the story repeat? Is there a hidden symbolism to that my mind doesn't catch? But other than that, it's good.

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Review #16, by mashforeverRain or Sun: You'll Always be the One: Welcome to Hogwarts

26th November 2011:
Very mysterious. I'm eager to find out who Alex Wilcott really is.

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Review #17, by mashforeverLegacy: Breaking into Gryffindor

21st November 2011:
This is getting exciting! I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I've just finished writing Chapter 5 and I've now started on Chapter 6 :) glad you are enjoying it so far

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Review #18, by mashforeverSixth Year at Hogwarts: Being Neville

21st November 2011:
The part about Neville was adorable, but he deserves better than Harry; if I were to slash Neville with anyone, it would be...Seamus. And the SAG seems a bit far-fetched to me. But overall, a nice installment.

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Review #19, by mashforeverPrime Suspects: A Chaotic Mess

21st November 2011:
This is really heating up! I'll be waiting with bated breath for the next chapter!! :)

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Review #20, by mashforeverTruthache: Truthache

20th November 2011:
This is adorable! (The end, I mean).

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Review #21, by mashforeverVOLDEMORT AND THE INCOMPETENCE OF HIS FOLLOWERS: The beginning of a never ending day

19th November 2011:
This really is funny; though you could do with a bit more descriptive adjectives and keeping the thoughts limited to just Voldemort

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Review #22, by mashforeverPS ~ It's Payback Time: The Letter

19th November 2011:
Very intrigiung; I just wonder: why James went to Hogwarts and his sister was sent all over the world.

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Review #23, by mashforeverFirst Impressions: Candy apples and muggle witches.

16th November 2011:
Trés adorable! I love it.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

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Review #24, by mashforeverLe Scorp!: This is the first chapter!

15th November 2011:
This has brightened my day!

Author's Response: Awesome! Glad to hear it. :)

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Review #25, by mashforeverA Rendezvous or Two: To Class

15th November 2011:
YES! Snape references are always welcome and appreciated.

"Turn to page 394"

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