First off I absolutely love this story! I don't know why but I get a funny feeling whenever Alex mentions John, don't ask why I don't know? Anyway, I think that this would be better in like you add Harry's second year then start the third and fourth as a sequel and so on and have Harry's seventh year so The Deathly Hallows book as one whole story itself. I also think that maybe you should a nineteen years later thing like JK did. You know what I mean?
I really do love this story!! (: Your an amazing writer (:Author's Response: First off thank you! And also, I'm not sure why you get a funny feeling either... I like that idea. Maybe I'll do that and have two years as one story and then the next two as a sequel. And I most definitely will have some sort of epilogue thing. Don't worry. Thanks for reading this and reviewing! I love reviews so please keep reviewing! Thanks again! Report Review
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