Good chapter! However, I thought of a really cool title for this fic: Worlds Apart. Cool, eh? No? Whatever. Haha, thanks for the chapter!
-Fawkes

Author's Response: Thank youuu:))

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Nice chapter! I have read "A Midsummer's Night Dream", though I prefer Shakespearian tragedies, and was a little confused because you mentioned earlier on that she was auditioning for a musical, which this is most definetly not. I loved how you pointed out the fact that Hermia is the butt of all the short jokes! A great chapter overall! Thanks!
-Fawkes
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Author's Response: I loved Midsummer's Night Dream, it's my favorite Shakespearean play. I just decided to make it a musical because it seemed like something Dumbledore would do! Also, I played Hermia when we read did Midsummer in my grade 9 English class, and everyone made a point of making sure I knew that even the character was short, lol. Thanks for the review!

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I enjoyed that not so subtle reference and TE text of the chapter. Update soon!
-Fawkes
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Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, i'm so glad!:) Updates may take a while, but i'll try my best.
-Akansha.
PS. Definitely!

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Philadelphia born and bread--the home of the soft pretzel, so I know what he meant when he talked about the deliciousness. Great chapter. Update soon!
-Fawkes

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Personally, I would go for the Turkey Pot Pie. On a completely unrelated topic, excellent chapter, in my opinion. Nice ending tainted with a bit of Sunmer's humorous sadism. Thanks for uploading it, and I hope to see an update soon!
-Fawkes

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Ah! You finally updated! And it was a really great chapter. I love how awkward you made the beginning if their date. Oh and unsurprisingly, another cliffie. Sometimes I find myself wondering if you intentionally torture me. Thank for the awesome chapter, and I hope to update soon!
-Fawkes

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This is the part where I beg you to update this story!
-Fawkes

Author's Response: i've just finished the next chapter, so it will be in the queue before the end of the week :)

ellie :) xx

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Hahahahahaha good chapter. Update soon! Always love a good female Next Gen Malfoy fic. Thanks!
-Fawkes
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Author's Response: Thanks! Sure will :)

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Hahahahahahahaha no offense taken. A good chapter, and I am glad to see an update. Update again soon!
-Fawkes
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I think it's Al Potter because of the navy boxers. Love the story so far. Update soon!
-Fawkes

Author's Response: BINGO! I think I may have been a tad obvious, but who cares, I'm no good at keeping secrets anyway :) Thank you so much for reading this! I'll update as soon as inspiration hits me, I'm taking this story in a whole new direction, I'll explain at a later stage, just keep reading :) Siriusly xxx

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I really like th rides or this story and have enjoyed reading it so far. How do you pronounce her name, though? Update soon!
-Fawkes

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I think it's u-anth-hu?

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When I read amity's name I couldn't help but think of the divergant trilogy by Veronica Roth in which there is a faction of peaceful people who are 1/5 the population. It's a great series! I enjoyed the chapter! Thanks!
-Fawkes

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Team Summer! A amazing chapter as always. Update soon!
-Fawkes

Author's Response: oooh, team summer? interesting...
thank you so much :D

ellie :) xx

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Luke Castellan, and Charles Beckendorf? Really? At first I just read lukes name and I was like, 'oh it's just coincidence' then I saw Charles. Hahahaha character name theft!

Author's Response: yeah, i know. i promise that that's the only copying i'm going to do! i swear.

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AAH YES AN UPDATE! I saw on your author page that this was in the que and I just kept hitting refresh every ten minutes to see if it was updated. The chapter was obviously not a happy one but I thought you portrayed the emotions pretty well and I can say that that back story is not what I expected. Update soon!
-Fawkes

Author's Response: ahaha, yes, an update. i've done that before! and then when i saw that the story i was waiting for actually had been updated, i nearly fell out of my chair. awh, thank you for the compliments. i'll try to update soon :D

ellie :) xx

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All I have to say is: AH! I did not expect that. And of course, a cliffie! Thanks! Can't wait for an update!
-Fawkes

Author's Response: ahaha ~ i dont mean to use this many cliffhangers, honestly. they all just seem to be in this part of the story...

ellie :) xx

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Hey!
Wow fast update! I enjoyed the chapter. The stuff that happened with Kyle was interesting. I am so happy Fred found a loop hole in their agreement. I can't wait for the next chapter in James' PoV. Thanks!
-Fawkes
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Author's Response: awh, thank you :D

yeah, the updates are coming up pretty fast with me being on holiday and the queue being amazingly fast. i hope the next chapter turns out alright, im a bit worried about it atm.

ellie :) xx

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I know! I have tried to respond to reviews on my phone and it just doesn't let the box to type In appear. I dont know what's wrong. I have an iPhone. Love the story and the chapter. I will read on!
-Fawkes
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Author's Response: Yeah, I do too and iPhone's just don't like review responses obviously!
Anyway, thanks for taking the time to review! I hope you enjoy the rest of it, don't forget to review further chapters, I'm just off 200! ;)


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I was ecstatic when I saw this fic was updated. You really seem to love cliffhangers! I really enjoyed their talk with Connor and I am glad Penny finally ended it with Kane. Thanks for posting! Update soon!
-Fawkes
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Author's Response: thank you so much :D ahaha, i dont actually like cliffhangers that much, and i didnt mean to make this chapter one! but somehow it ended up as one... thank you for the review,

ellie :) xx

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Love the ending! Good job! I love your writing, and I will have to read some of your other works! Thanks!
-Fawkes

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Hello!
I am fourteen too, and I remember sleeping with an Elmo doll until I was in fourth or fifth grade! I have scene in my story Patience that is similar to your scene with Lily and Corner. You should read my fics because I barely have any reviews! *sniffles pathetically* Love the story!
-Fawkes

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Hello!
Sorry I haven't reviewed before, but take that as a testament to your writing! I was so absorbed in the story that I haven't reviewed until now!
I am slightly surprised that Lily didn't send a letter or talk to Ginny about Luke at any point because I see a lot of parallels between her dilemma and Ginny's of trying to get Harry to notice her.
Thanks for updating! Update soon because I love this story!

Author's Response: Im glad you are review now :)
You are far too sweet haha! There is a parallel between mother and daughter but in my mind, Lily would not divulge her secret to Ginny, because Ginny would not approve of keeping it a secret from James. Over the holidays, away from Hogwarts we will get some more mum and daughter stuff! Thanks so much for the review! A new update will be up soon!
xx

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What does harmony look like? There hasn't really been a description other then she is short. Thanks! I like your story!
-Fawkes
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Author's Response: I'll get on to that... :) thanks for reviewing x

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Oh Fawkes you are so wonderful! Hahahaha hah!
Can I really review my own story?

Author's Response: Thank you so much! hhahahaha jk!

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Hello,
In response to your question, yes I am a guy. By the way, I enjoyed the chapter and can't wait to read the rest.
-Fawkes

Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know! I hope you continue to enjoy it and I appreciate you reading and reviewing!

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