'Nope, I'm on the Acropolis.
I'm on the freaking Acropolis.'
Not surprised, honestly. :D
Oh, and new peeps! Aussies at that. good going! Report Review
''And if you're drinking, you're not thinking!'' Rose adds, bouncing up from her seat. ''I think, therefore I am. So by that logic, when youíre drinking, you cease to exist.''
'What does it mean to exist?' Al muses.
'What does it mean to not exist?' Rose counters.
'Stop being smart!' Theresa cries,.
Al exchanges startled looks with Rose. I donít think heís ever been called smart in his life.
OMG LOVE. :O
Great chapter! :D Report Review
New take, I like it. I've never read anything to do with magical universities before, so thumbs up for the idea. I like how you portray Lily, she sounds original unlike most fanfiction characters. Anyway, reading on.
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I can relate so much to Connie. The texts, the tumblr-full-of-hot-boys, the fanfiction reading etc. I love how natural and perfectly nerdinary she is, haha. And Scor-pee-us was hilarious, a different take but awesome all the same. More James in the next one? Great chapter anywhoo.
xxAuthor's Response: She's just an exaggerated me on a nerd high! Maybe more James...I haven't quite planned that far yet! :) xx Report Review
OKay firstly, I'm glad its Molly who has a crush on Scorpius and not Rose. I've had enough of Sco-Rose to last me a life time. It's become cliche. I don't think I'd be able to bear it if Dominique had to compete with Rose for the boy, lol.
Secondly, I love her nickname! Nicky is different from the usual Dom and much better.
Thirdly, I completely happy with Lorcan and Lysander being toddlers. Canon ftw!
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Scorpius Dominique is a ship I don't see much and would love to see more of. So I'm supremely glad I tumbled into this fic. Awkwardness is in the air. I love how they keep stuttering and mumbling all the time.
Anyway, I'm just going to r&r them all. :)
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I agree with Albus and Priscilla V-day is far too over hyped. I like how this fan fic is different from others which usually over exaggerate valentines day. I also like how Henry gives June those flowers. For some reason, despite being annoying, Henry is kinda cute. I don't even know why.
I'm glad June dosen't have rounds anymore, daily rounds would be too cliche and ofcourse Al would have to have a superior purpose. Anyway, ahmayzin chapter. xx Report Review
Yay, James! I've been waiting for him to make a reappearance, though he's just a minor character but anywhoo, I love the ending. Like how Al does want to spend time with her but just can't admit it. Its adorable heheh. (Never thought I'd call Albus adorable, in this story I mean) Junebus is coming on well. :)
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OMGG. Earthquake? whoaa. Still can't get past that twist. But all's good, they get to stay in the Leaky Cauldron. ( and no doubt, thats how Albus comes back into the picture, heheh) i actually felt horrible about the flat getting destroyed, I felt so bad for June's dad.
Oh, and I absolutely love the excerpts and Priscilla's running commentary. :DAuthor's Response: Haha, yes! Random earthquakes are unfortunately a thing with this story. Oh of course Albus comes back into the picture - he's too important not to! And don't worry, better things are in the future for June's living situation ;) Report Review
Ah, okay. Where do I start? Yeah. So.. I stumbled upon this story quite by accident when I was trolling through another authors favourites and I don't regret it one bit. I finished it last night but I'm just going to reread (and review) through every single chappy now because I absolutely lurrrve eeet, so far. And I love everything about June and her idiocies :D And every single one of your Original Characters for that matter. xx Report Review
This chapter was bloody hilarious. :D I was laughing out loud throughout and people around me kept giving me funny looks. But no matter, completely worth the read. The dream was weird. But then again, reading weather for ducks has convinced me that nothing can get any weirder than this fanfic. Weird in an awesome way, I mean. Like, rad. Totally rad.
Sad that Gwen and Tarkatron are leaving, but I can't wait until lettuce shows up, bound to increase the weirdness quo.
Andrew Socks is adorable as usual, and Mary-Sue just as Mary-Sue-ish. Lucy and Scorp-o are perf. :*
Can't wait for your next update. xxAuthor's Response: my aim in life: to make people chuckle to the extent that they get funny looks :)
i love weird dream sequences! haha, honestly, i think this is only the second time i've tried writing one. but they are such a staple of ANY sort of genre of writing that i so so so wanted to do one~
when lettuce is involved, the weirdness quota is through the roof.
thank you so much! really glad you liked it ♥ Report Review
My respect for Flora grew a hundred fold after her (mental) rant about how people judge females only because they're, well, female. I so agree. Flora: the feminist --> Me Gusta.
I also love how Scorpius sort of watches over her. Y'know, waiting up for her and agreeing to go to the party and stuff. Lastly, TEAM SCORPIUSS FOREVAA. XD :D
Update soon. xoAuthor's Response: YES! someone agrees with me! these are just my own views projected onto Flora because, well, that is something that does annoy me in RL. towards the end of the story, I have plans for her to bring up other things that annoy me too just...it doesn't sound exciting, but hopefully it will be XD
thank you so much, glad you liked it! ♥ Report Review
A date? A DATE? With WHOM?
The suspense is killing me. D:
Anyway, update soon, okay? I have to- no, 'need to' know. Haha :D
Plus, I have to say, Albus' antics pretty much made my day. And I couldn't help laughing at Bea and her biscuit obsession, which is odd, but completely rad.Author's Response: Bahaha, I was wondering if anyone would catch that 'date' thing. The next scenes were split from this chapter, but it's actually a pretty funny transition from this last scene to the first one next chapter, where you'll see what that date is.
Hee, thanks! ♥ I shall definitely try to update quicker than last time. Report Review
In my previous reviews I pledged that I would be Team Scorpius forever, but surprisingly enough, I'm going to take that back. Albus was simply mega in this chapter. I completely adore this chapter, myron wagtail and all, and I love how you've invented a weird sisters fan sign.
I know you're only 6 (actually 5) chapters in, but I've been obsessing over this story a lot. Update soon please? :)Author's Response: I love that there's already a Team Scorpius and a Team Albus...hold up, we're only six chapters in! Haha. The question is, who will you love at the end...
Thank you so much! Hopefully I can update soon, although I'm snowed under with coursework and revision right now D: ♥ Report Review
Albus is alright I guess, but Scorpius FTW.
More Scorpius in the next chapter? please? pretty please? pretty please with bertie botts every flavour beans on top?
kthxbai. :)Author's Response: How about Albus /and/ Scorpius in the next chapter? I'll take the bertie bott's every flavour beans regardless...om nom nom. Thank you for reviewing! ♥ Report Review
Flora and fauna made my day! I love love love the character of Flora, bottle cap glasses and all. And I'm already team Scorpius though Albus is. um.. intriguing.
Methinks the Scorpius here is kinda similar to the one in Starving Artists. Anyway I'm glad you began this story because I know I will be stalking it. :D
kthnxbai.Author's Response: Flora is totes your average quirky OC, enormous glasses and all. Haha, everyone is team Scorpius...I do hope to change your mind somewhere along the way. He is kind of like SA!Scorpius, except that this Scorpius is 100% my headcanon. All the bits of characterisation I never had room for in SA, like ruining romantic moments by having to puff away on his inhaler...anyway, thanks for reviewing & glad you enjoyed it! ♥ Report Review
forgive me for this, but I kinda like Henry more than James right now. Its pretty obvious she's gonna end up with James but he needs to be a ittle more likable for that to happen. Guess I'll continue reading to find out :D Report Review
I love the rose-scorpius dance at the end. It kinda reminds me of the Harry-Hermione dance in the DH-1 movie.
Cant wait till the next update! :D Report Review
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