Very good job on this one! Keep it up, I hate it when writers waste such a good opportunity like this one and just stop at chapter one. I'm pretty excited to see what happens next! You can check out my story, too, if you want :P. It's called "The Trick Is To Keep Breathing," and it's definitely not as good as this, but you know.. I could use some input on what I should do and such. It has Luna and Draco, too, but they aren't shipped together.
This one is definitely going on my favorites! KEEP IT UP!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the epic response!! To tell the truth, I didn't think this was going to get any sort of feedback, but then all of a sudden I get three comments and so I guess I should keep writing :). I'll update as soon as I can, I have to wait though for validation on my one shot 'Don't You Ever Grow Up' that I just posted. I'll definitely take a look at your story!! :D Report Review
This is pretty much the funniest story I have ever read!! I assume that was your purpose, so good show!! Report Review
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