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Review #1, by WaterylungsThe State of Things: the lantern

24th March 2012:
oh my goodness how has this not got any reviews yet? anyways I lovelovelove it so far, you're so good with draco/astoria. you're writing style is also awesome so far, the only critique I have is the end for this chapter was a little shaky. I hope you update soon :)

Author's Response: thank you so much for saying so! seeing as this is a rewrite, I'm trying to merge old chapters with new ones, so it may be a little shaky in places - I'll check that over if I go back to edit. thank you for the review & I'm really glad you liked it! ♥

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