Reading Reviews From Member: kjp
54 Reviews Found

Review #51, by kjpRenewing What He Lost: Chapter 2- Time-Turner Two

28th November 2011:
I think in this story it has potential. Is this you first story? because if it is I understand. The main plot of the story is amazing but the actual writing of it is not so good. Carry on writing and i'm sure you'll get better, i gave this a 6/10! Anyway don't worry i used to be crap at story writing until my last story.

Author's Response: Yeah, it's my first story and it's kind of not my best work. I'm gonna go back and edit the chapters eventually but probably once I finish the story. But thank you for the feedback :)

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Review #52, by kjpWaiting For You: Waiting For You

19th November 2011:
that was a really good piece of writing, i loved it!

Author's Response: oh thanks, i dont usually write about harry and ginny so it means a lot :D

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Review #53, by kjpWhen Darkness Falls: Dying

3rd November 2011:
I had to stop my self from crying when she said she was dying because my mum was in the room when i read this and believe me i'm not one to cry. Thank you for making this beautiful story.

Author's Response: Aw so sorry I made you cry :)
No, thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Big hugs

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Review #54, by kjpThe Best Day: The Best Day

22nd September 2011:
that story was just wow!

Author's Response: Why thank you very much!

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