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Review #1, by Flora HaninaMy Identity: My Mythos

13th August 2011:
I thought this was really lovely -it's completely believable that somebody about to go against all their family values would be feeling isolated and questioning their identity. My one slight qualm is that it's maybe a bit overwritten - e.g. "One can find solace in history for its firm foundation of fact." - and this can lead to errors - "He is not the man who she had loved and pledged to marry" should be "whom", and you've switched to the present tense from the past. But it's exciting and I want to know what happens next!

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