awesome chapter and awesome story. sorry I didn't review sooner even though I read every chapter. :)
The plot itself isn't unusual but I still like it and especially what you made out of it. really good! keep up the good work and update soon, please.:)Author's Response: thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and I update as often as i can :) There's still a lot to go before the stories over so i hope you keep on reading :D Report Review
yaaay! update :D so exciting. I really love this story :) awesome chapter! Report Review
I can't believe you updated!! :D so excited! especially because O was looking for this story like crazy but couldn't remember the name..^^
great update! can't wait for the next one (please don't make me wait this long again:) )Author's Response: Sorry, sorry, sorry! I'm incorrigible! But, a new chapter is in the queue now! Thanks for the review :) Report Review
Love this story and especially this chapter! wish you would update though :( please do so soon! :) great work! Report Review
LOVED this chapter! it was truly amazing :) really well written and it was interesting to see what was happening from different point of views over a longer amount of time. and Daniel's vision! great idea!
I'm already looking forward to the next update :) Report Review
wow, I really liked this chapter! It was really really good. And even though it could stand as a one-shot, I'm glad you decided to expand it, it's really interesting and your writing is really good as well!
can't wait for an update :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback. The next chapter is sitting in validation right now so look out for it soon! Hope you like the next chapters as much! Seriously, your review means the world to me! :) xo Report Review
Pretty dark theme, but I liked the chapter anyway. It's really interesting and I'm curious what's going to happen next. Good work!Author's Response: Thanks! It is kind of dark, but the rest of the story is pretty fluffy at the same time. haha. The story doesn't center around her being raped. It's more about why she won't tell anyone. Thanks for reading! Report Review
Hi! really interesting and well written chapter! :) I'm excited about an update :)
but I have to mention something: you got quite a few dates/numbers/ages/whatever confused.. :/ If Rose's birthday was in October, she'd be a year behind Al and Scorpius, or already 17..
and when you talked about Lily "ten years back", you wrote, she'd be 9, and Rose barely 11, so that doesn't make sense when they're both still in school now.
I'm really sorry for pointing it out!! I just think the quality of the chapter will improve if you edit/correct it. I hope you don't take it the wrong way and aren't mad at me :(
really, the plot seems interesting and also really funny, good work on that! :)Author's Response: Oh thanks! I'm sorry about that! I'll fix it! Gosh! How could I have missed those! Thanks so much!
oh my, awesome chapter! I really really loved it :) well done!
and to your question: easier one the next time, please ;) I'm not sure though, I don't mind either way. Ending it here would be perfect, but ending it at graduation would be awesome, too (and I'd get more to read of it ;) ). So, I'm sorry for my not-answering your question :( but I'm sure it's great either way!Author's Response: haha thank you. I think I have to keep going, both because I would be sad to end it so soon and I received multiple reviews telling me to continue. Thank you for the advice and review! Report Review
wow, great update!! I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter :) so good :) and Lara and Albus... they are so sweet and adorable and awww :) update soon!!Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter's up, and the one after that is in the queue! :) Report Review
oh my God, how sweet! the ending was awesome, I loved it! So unexpected. and the thing with the puppet: great idea!
really good chapter, can't wait for the next update :)Author's Response: Haha, thanks! :D More updates will be coming up soon! Report Review
great great story!! :) I love how special it's written and I love the content! and your writing :D
keep your good work up, and update as soon as possible :)Author's Response: Thank you very much for saying so! I'm glad you think this is special, that is so kind of you to say.
I hope that I will update soon! I have the next part all planned out, it's just a matter of writing it down.
Thank you so much for your review,
Joop. Report Review
aaw I already love this story! :) so cute and so much fun to read :) I especially like Lara! Update soon, please!!Author's Response: aw thank you! I'm glad you like Lara. :) she's something of a terrible author avatar but way cooler...so...shhh just let me imagine. xD the next chapter is in the queue already! :D Report Review
yay another update :) (I really really love this story!)
It was a lot of fun to read, even though it was a little bit of a filler, but thats ok, they are needed as well :) I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens during their holidays :) and what kind of gift Al got Addie...? :D
great work! update soon :)Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed my filler chapter. I'm working on the next chapter hopefully I'll have it out to you soon.
oh :) it gets really interesting! :D
I love how subtle you made the connection between Scorpius and Rose. It's a really interesting chapter, really well written :) I wished your chapters were longer though :) can't get enough of it :)
Please update soon!Author's Response: I've been trying to get my chapters longer, but it's difficult when I get everything I need into a chapter! I'll take note of your review :D Report Review
really liked this chapter, it was really interesting! :)
looking forward to an update. Report Review
UPDATE! :D and a really awesome update! :) :) I got so excited, and then the ending. I cannot wait for an update!! Please do so soon ! :)
I love Al and Addie, they're so much fun and so interesting.
awesome work, loved it! Report Review
I loved it! it was really interesting and exciting to read (even though the long part with the document got a little bit boring, but not too much, so it's ok)! I can't wait for an update, so please do so soon ;)
and btw, I'm really curious about Allesandra, she seams funny and interesting :) Report Review
wow, I really love this story! it's so much fun to read and I enjoy it very much! Please update soon! ;) can't wait.Author's Response: Thank-you so much! I'm really glad you enjoy my story it means so much! I will update straight away because I've already written to chapter 5 and it's just a matter of getting the validaters to validate them :) Please check out my beta NicolaEve's stories, that would mean a lot to both of us Report Review
UPDATE! I LOVE YOU! :)
so, it was an amazing chapter but also really dark and exciting and.. woah. I can't wait for an update! I feel so sorry for Scorpius though.. :( I'm kinda annoyed at Rose, but I know and understand that she does what she thinks is best.. even if it's not really :) I really need a quick update! Please? :)Author's Response: I LOVE YOU TOO! I'm writing the next chapter as we speak! Thank you for reading and reviewing! Report Review
ah I really liked this chapter! the story is really funny and special. can't wait for an update! :) pretty please? :)Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'll try to update as soon as I can. I'm editing the next chapter to make it as perfect as I can before I post it. Thanks tons and i'm glad you like this chapter. Report Review
aaah UPDATE! :D
I love this story!! this chapter was really good, a lot of fun and really exciting. I can't wait for an update! :)Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it! Already working on the next chapter :) Report Review
oh no, please update soon! :) I love this story but it's sad it wasn't updated in barely a year! you're a really good writer (in this but also in other stories) and it's sad the stories won't go on.
I don't mean it in a mean way, but please please update soon (on all of your stories...:) )
but anyway, good work on this chapter, it was really good and (as mentioned) I can't wait for an update!Author's Response: I know, I'm so sorry. I started my first year of college last year and was just so busy that I didn't have time to focus on any of my stories! I've started working on all of my stories again, and I think that an update for this story should be up soon! Thank you so much for your review and your support! Report Review
oh wow, that was an amazing chapter! so good! I love this story and can't wait to see what's going to happen next. update soon! :)Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it! Report Review
I really liked this chapter! especially because it's already cleared up that Scorpius and Angela won't be together for too long.. :) I can't wait for an update!Author's Response: thanks for the review. glad you like it :D Report Review
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