{reviewid: 2615484, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
13th November 2011:
i wanted to get in touch with you. i revised my story alot and i almost have 100 pages! but sadly i have some things that break the rules, so ill try to post elsewhere. also, i love what you have so far and i want to know who the dad is!!
Author's Response: Thankyou :)
Please tell me when your story is up but next time contact me on the HPFF forums. I am xxJazminexx on there aswell x
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{reviewid: 2579258, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
ugghhh. hes too old to be with her though (tom) and then she would be a hypocrite.
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{reviewid: 2579249, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
i didnt really like aidens pov but it was okay. im glad james is getting help
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{reviewid: 2579239, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
omg!! wizard steroids!! james. what were you thinking :(
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{reviewid: 2578889, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
Hahahahahahaa!!! i love scorpius again! and awwwkward! poor daisy kinda... and i totally called that.
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{reviewid: 2578884, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
ok. james is an idiot because he is seeing someone... maybe diasy? or theres incest or something with molly!? no scorp isnt bad he just wants to hide his feelings. and the only part that i cried in ur book was wen ron mentioned fred.he said he hated them both does that mean percy and fred!
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{reviewid: 2578883, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
ok it was interesting.
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{reviewid: 2578874, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
ugggh!! cauldron bottomed squib!!! hes worse than mundungus in lucius malfoys house!! stealing baby aiden!! oh well im probably going to like him again off and on throughout the book.
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{reviewid: 2578869, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
wow. cant waiit to find out what it is.
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{reviewid: 2578866, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
ok i dont hate scorpius. i hate daisy. and i think brian is dodgy.
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{reviewid: 2578856, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
omg!!! i lterally lost my breath when i read what scorpius just said!
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{reviewid: 2578852, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
hmmm. with the wedding coming up im just hoping that she doesnt go spontaneously snog him in a bathroom ;)
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{reviewid: 2578845, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
haha! personally this is my favorite chapter of both books. idk y. it was just so much fun!!
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{reviewid: 2578836, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
haha! wooow idk i sense connections there ;)
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{reviewid: 2578829, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
Omg!! i think i hate daisy!! wth!! shes so horrible!!
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{reviewid: 2578821, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
she doesnt have very good luck does she?
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{reviewid: 2578814, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
hahaha!! i almost peed my self!!! omg.
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{reviewid: 2578798, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
hahahahahahaha! i miss.. it! haha! lolz.
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{reviewid: 2578781, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
hahaha! thats funny!!
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{reviewid: 2578773, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
27th August 2011:
okkk. i aprove of richard so far. as long as he doesnt get her prego.
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{reviewid: 2578766, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
26th August 2011:
wow. that was interesting on many different levels.
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{reviewid: 2578764, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
26th August 2011:
arent crups supposed to hate muggles? uh oh!
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{reviewid: 2578761, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
26th August 2011:
haha! cow name. im pretty sure scorpius wouldnt go for a cow!
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{reviewid: 2578747, reviewer: 'alwaysandobviously'}
26th August 2011:
if i could record one of those low whistles like " that was not what you were planning" things i would.
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