Well, I know that the story is hard to keep up with and I hate to point out your faults, but here's what I think you might have gotten a little off in canon.
1. Ron fell into Snatchers which caused the Weasley family to go into hiding.
2. Luna was taken during Easer I'm pretty sure
These aren't really important to me, and I wouldn't do much about them, but this story is really good and just wanted to let you know. I may be wrong as it is, so if I am, don't mind me. But this is great!

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Yay for quick updating even if I didn't see it until now... I would most definitely read a story about Grace so if you write it I'll read it!

Author's Response: Thank you again for the review! I love hearing from you :)

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I'm glad that Xavier found out, but talk about the worse possible way for that to happen. Really am curious about Emmett's family and all that so can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: It was. I just hated hurting him like that, but it had to be done for the rest of the story and he'll be okay. He's strong.

Emmett's family are mentioned every now and again, they even pop up in the sequel. :)

Thank you for leaving a review.

Sam.

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This is great! I really imagine these sorts of interactions between a celebrity and reporter (okay maybe not all of them, but a certain dynamic of them) and I really like all of Woods Woodiness? I'm not sure if that's the right word. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: haha, there's definitely some professional boundaries being over-stepped, eh? I'm glad that you overall found it to be believable, though! Thanks so much!

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Not sure where to start on this chapter. It's always interesting to see how people write the death of both Lily's and James' parents. That sounds so bad. I think you did a good job with this this chapter.

So I have a question. Since I'm guessing this only goes for the summer before seventh will there be a sequel to do the school year? Or what?

Author's Response: Yes there will be a sequel. I just haven't got a title for it yet...

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Just wanted to start off by saying that this is an amazing chapter. You have an amazing style of writing and it is very gripping to read.

Your beginning with Bellatrix is amazing! I think you really captured her character well, showing her thought process so she's still a human, but a pretty messed up one at that. The whole way she thinks about pain and the foreshadowing of the train ride, well I can't wait for the next chapter.

I have my doubts about Sirius and Lily's relationship. Between everything that they've been through it seems fine, but I just, I'm not sure about it. Like they either need to be closer because of it, or farther apart because of something else. I can't quite put my finger on it.

Let's go Belle! You can do this! Just go to France tell them off and then you and Sirius can go skipping into the sunset!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hi darling!!

Aww I'm so happy you like my writing style! That really means a lot to me, because I do try and push myself into improving as much as possible.

I think Sirius and Lily definitely have an odd sort of friendship. I think Lily has a really soft spot for him because of the things he's gone through, and then after what happened with her parents, they really got a lot closer. I'm absolutely not ever going to put them in romantic territory or anything! But I do want to give them a real friendship, and not just a, friends because she's James's gf, sort of one.

Eeeek I'm so excited to see what you think of the next chapter!! To France we go!

Thank you so much for your awesome reviews, m'dear ♥

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No! I want to know what happens. Poor Ron, just trying to propose and it seems that everyone is just getting in the way. And now Rabastan is there. Please update soon!

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This is an excellent fanfic that you have so far. Your writing style ia great and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon!

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Ahh. Death sucks and I hope that your great-grandmother was an awesome person. This is good as always and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Next chapter is on its way. Updating is kinda hard though as I almost broke my wrist yesterday :/

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I hope Harry gets his act together for once. Realizes that he hasn't been doing the right thing and gets out of it. And then Ginny just breaks up with Viktor. Well yeah, please update soon!

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Your style of writing is amazing! It's funny but sweet at the same time and very interesting to read. I love the way you represent Harry and Ginny. This is great!

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. This was a lot of fun to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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I likeCraig. He seems like a nice guy. And I hope that Al doesn't get in trouble with the International Statue of Secrecy. And I hope that they can keep themselves safe from Jessica. Please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like Craig, I do, too. Al won't get in trouble; he's too over cautious to let something like that slip. :D

As for Jessica, she's more of a talker. Lexi will be able to handle her, she just doesn't want to. :P

Thank you so much for leaving a review.

Sam.

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Yay! This ia great! You are an amazing writer, but I think you already know that. I think James should just screw the code like in Hogwarts but that's just me. Please update soon!

Author's Response: But if he says screw the Code then he gets benched -- that won't be good for his career. At Hogwarts you just got some people mad or you went bald. Thanks so much for the review! Hope you like the rest :)

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I hope that she tells Blakeslee. She deserves to take revenge. And Rose deserves to go done. Please update soon this is so good!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Chapter Twelve is all written, but I need to go back and finish what I've been putting off with Chapter Eleven xD The conversation between Edie and Blakeslee is really hard to write!

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Yay for the quick update! I really am liking all of this character development! Lily's dad seems pretty awesome. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: I had a lot of chapters already written for this story so I updating pretty quickly. Once I get up to as far as i've written things will slow down a little as I'm back at school as of tomorrow and It's my final year so its pretty important. But I will try to update as often as possible. :) Glad your enjoying the story

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I think you did an excellent job on what to include and what not to include. Lily's character is awesome and the whole speaking with the portraits thing is a very good idea. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: I'm so relieved to hear that! I was worried people would be unhappy about not hearing Belle tell Sirius, but honestly I just couldn't write the whole thing again and keep it interesting!


Thank you so much for your review ♥

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James is awesome! I adore him. And this is a great chapter. Really loving this story!

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Hahahahahaha! Fleur as a janitor! That got me a good laugh. Can't wait to read the next part!

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Oh some Fleur and Bill action! And we get to meet Gabrielle! Your writing style is very good and I enjoy reading this a lot!

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I figure that Fleur would be some sort of a shop-a-holic. It fits her. This is really good.

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This is very good, I can never get accents right but you did a remarkable job on them.

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Babies! It's getting closer and I just love Ginny in this. This is the way she should be portrayed and if you don't mind me saying, but her part in the movies just made her look like some airhead not like the BAMF that she is in the books. Please update soon, this story is amazing!

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Oh weddings. They are very nice. I'm glad I haven't had to try and attempt to write one because I was never a sucker for details. You were flawless though, and this chapter is amazing!

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Wedding should be very good and here's to having Teddy not mess up! You are in control after all... This is great!

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Is it bad that I want my brothers to take my future husband and threaten him with a hose now? Yes, it is? I'll be quiet now...

Excellent writing as usual, this story is sweet, and funny, and all of the things all in one.

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