I loved this story!!
The storyline was great, and you wrapped it up nicely.
I hope to see more of your works~Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Draco's power to see Hermione reminds me of Harry's power ( or curse) to see Voldy.
Anyway, decided to review here. Love the story!👍 Report Review
Whoa. That was really random. Funny, but I didn't see a real plot. Oh, well, this story was fun. ( you really like Michael Jackson, do you.)Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And Micheal Jackson = Winning Report Review
Hahaha!! This is really funny. Report Review
I usually don't leave posts until the end of a complete story, but this chapter had some really funny parts, like Draco beating his mother in Chess.
“Wait a minute…I have to stand up to say this, to get the proper inflection,” Draco pushed himself up out of the armchair, grinning diabolically. He made a big show of clearing his throat.
“Son, let’s not make a career out of this.”
“CHECKMATE!!” he roared.
Yeah, I really liked that part.Author's Response: Hee hee...thanks. That was actually one of my very favorite parts. :-P Report Review
The whole thing was kinda confusing, but if you took it apart, I relized this is really funny. Report Review
I loved it!! I think you are very good at humor.Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you liked it :) Report Review
I'm so sad the story ends here~~
Could you write a squeal about--
Loved the whole thing! Report Review
I'm so sad the story ends here! I feel like I just left Hogwarts, even if I've never been there...
Anyway, I loved it! Report Review
I read this story three times. The first time I read it, I'm like " what?" the second time I read it, I'm still like" what?" the third time I read this, I'm finally get it. They're sewing!!!
so funny!! Report Review
I just relized, Percy Jackson has the same first name as the Weasley, Percy.
Anyway, I luv this story. Keep on writing! Report Review
Loved it! I really liked your way with writing. I think this story deserves ten Dobby's!! Report Review
Every thing is great, just when does London use " dollars"?Author's Response: thank you, and yes i know that they dont use dollars lol. ocassionally i slip and im not correct with reality.
thanks for reading and i hope you continue to!
-WP :) Report Review
The story is good, but you can work on the grammar Report Review
It was ok. Could do without to much uppercases, ya know? Kinda irritating. Report Review
What??!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!???!?!!?!? Report Review
Uhh... Twisted, odd, gay, crazy. When whould Malfoy fall for a Weasly, then a boy, then Neville , and the hermioni, the Harry potter, and then to his self? Really, really odd. But funny. But I hope you won't write anymore of these one- shots because it's creeping me out.Author's Response: Hahahahahahahaha, glad it was funny. I would NEVER, EVER write such poop again haha. It was simply for the challenge. I hope you'll read some of my *good* stuff! :D Report Review
I loved the whole story!!!Author's Response: thanks. happy reading. Report Review
Luv them( as in two to tango and this one). Report Review
Please, please, please, please, write more. I luv Harry Potter and Percy Jackson books. This story is the best. Keep writing, I'm waiting for more! Report Review
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