Like others I did ot like the last two chapters .. But the rest was great
For the last two chapters the rating is 2 :(

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If he could do so much .. Mayb he can write tooo ...?? O.o
Right? :P

Author's Response: haha, yes. draco can certainly do a lot so y not manipulate a pen? we'll see how communication gets much better soon ^_^

thanks for reading/reviewing!
-WP

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In one word .. It's AWESOME :P

Author's Response: nikaya29,

Thank you! I'm so glad that you like it.

A lot has gone into this story, as it is now in the realm of 'long'. And there is much more to come. :)

Thank you sincerely for your little compliment. It goes a long way, as all reviews are so much appreciated!

Sincerely,
Dark Whisper



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You amaze me with each story
This is my first comment for you.. I have read two more in the past two days... One in which hermione has five children .. oMG it was awesome ... And condemned with reason...
I love how you work out with your imagination ... And I really envy you for that lol..
nyways keep writing it just gets better and better..
I hope that sometime in near future you'd decide to go proffesional and would publish books .. Nt HP fanfics ofcourse .. Some better and different stories..

Much love
Nikaya29

Author's Response: hey there and thank you!!

i'm really glad that you like my stories. it really means a lot. i do hope to be an author one day and in my spare time i do work on some non-HP stories i'd love to get published. in the meantime, HP fics helps me ALOT with my writing.

thanks so much once again and i hope that you continue to read my stories ^_^

-WP

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Hey . I have been waiting since forever for an update.. And thought it was finally time to give a review...
Lol so u seee it is awesome ... I really love it...
How about u make a fan page for it on Facebook ..??
U can update us there too ... I mean u don't have to post the stories ther just an update about them or something ...
Anyways hope to see the next update soon

Author's Response: I am so, so, so sorry for not updating. I have started writing the next chapter, but right now I really have a lot of work to do (essays and revision). I will try to finish and post as soon as possible, but I really don't know what that means right now. Again, I apologise.

A Facebook fan page sounds interesting. Thanks for this idea, I may do it. In the meantime, you can look at my author page to see where I am with writing/posting the next chapter. Instead of personal information, I usually write where I am with a chapter and roughly how long it will be until I post.

Thank you so much for your review and I apologise once again for the lateness of Chapter 15. If I would have no work, writing it would be the first thing I would do.

Merope :)x

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Nice one ,,, and that kitten is soo cute ... Imma eat it up
But u need to update alil bit more frequently :P

Author's Response: I know, I'm trying to make frequent updates but it's hard because there are so many other things on my plate. Hopefully it doesn't bother you too much...

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Ok I loved otherwise engaged ... But I am not enjoying this one soo much.. That's because I don't want this girl ruining her life. Don't get me wrong I know killing is not a good thing but I seriously want her to lose this baby... Mayb she could have one after u r done writing the whole thing :P .. Please please please I beg u... Don't ruin her life please please please change the story line

Author's Response: I am so sorry you're not satisfied with the story, I really am. But I can't change it now, I'm afraid :/ I wish I could please every single one of my readers, but alas, that is impossible .. :( I am sorry, though.

*Maria

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Ooopsie I forgot that I had already read this.. But anyway I love this one.. It's awesome... I always liked hermione/ Fred but I like dramione more :P

Author's Response: Lol no worries :D I've always liked Hermione/Fred too!

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Nice I really liked it.. Hmm the best part is that in the end both of them realize their mistake :D hope u write more stories :) (please don't mind the spelling mistakes , I am not a native speaker)

Author's Response: Awh, thank you! I'm so glad you liked the end, I wasn't too sure about it, so I'm glad it was ok. Thankyou for the review, and your spelling is excellent! :D

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Lol they'll eventually find out right anyways I sent u a link on ur hotmail Id please have a look at it n update soon :)

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Lmao I know this movie... They wre studying law in the movie :P :D

Author's Response: Haha yeah it's one of my favorites xD. Yup!! Hope you're enjoying the story. :)
~Mischied_Managed18


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Too much of repetition :( (I hope I did not make a spelling mistake there) :P

Author's Response: oh well i don't really like this story im just trying to finish it soon


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as u r my favourite author.. i want to give u some awesome DRAMIONE pics i found. for this story :P lemme know how i can send them n where.. :P

Author's Response: Oh, thank you, honey :D
Wow! Okay :D my email is written on my authors page(apparently, it's not allowed to post your email in comments...).
Or you could add 'Maria Fiction' as your friend on Facebook :) It's an account I've created to connect with you guys at hpff ^^

Thank you!

*Maria

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Mmmm I really liked ur summary but u c I am sooo confused ... With the narration I don't really understand who is narrating n about what... But I guess it's Al talking about rose or sumthing. Shit I m so confused o_O... I am waiting for u to enlighten me... :D

Author's Response: Sorry for the wait. School stinks. But, this is James reflecting on Al's suicide. Does that help? I hope you liked it.

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hey i like your story.. it seeems different :P .. i hope u'll update soon n wont keep us waiting :P

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Dude are u serious umust be an Indian to pick up thenane Mira kapoor... I was just goig to skip it as it was a James and oc fic as I am scorp/ rose fan.. But then as I am an India, I thought why not give a try to a name which resembles an Indian name .. Uh.. Bunk that I just wanted to say u did a nice job I really really really liked it dude . N erm ignore my errors ... I am not a native speaker :P :D keeep updating plz plz plz plz make it as fat as possible :P

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Hmmm nice chap. Sometimes I wish i I could write like u guys but I guess m better off Reading ;) nice work

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Aw, darling, I'm serious when I say that my secret is; PRACTICE, PRACTICE, PRACTICE. I've tried a lot and failed a lot. But you know what's the true failure? To stop trying ;) So keep on writing! You'll get the hang of it eventually :)

Good luch, honey.

*Maria

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erm... arent the kidnappers suppose to die because they are not there in draco and hermiones list

Author's Response: lol, already answered this sweetie, read the reviews, you'll see what I posted!

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