Like others I did ot like the last two chapters .. But the rest was great
For the last two chapters the rating is 2 :( Report Review
If he could do so much .. Mayb he can write tooo ...?? O.o
Right? :PAuthor's Response: haha, yes. draco can certainly do a lot so y not manipulate a pen? we'll see how communication gets much better soon ^_^
thanks for reading/reviewing!
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In one word .. It's AWESOME :PAuthor's Response: nikaya29,
Thank you! I'm so glad that you like it.
A lot has gone into this story, as it is now in the realm of 'long'. And there is much more to come. :)
Thank you sincerely for your little compliment. It goes a long way, as all reviews are so much appreciated!
You amaze me with each story
This is my first comment for you.. I have read two more in the past two days... One in which hermione has five children .. oMG it was awesome ... And condemned with reason...
I love how you work out with your imagination ... And I really envy you for that lol..
nyways keep writing it just gets better and better..
I hope that sometime in near future you'd decide to go proffesional and would publish books .. Nt HP fanfics ofcourse .. Some better and different stories..
Nikaya29Author's Response: hey there and thank you!!
i'm really glad that you like my stories. it really means a lot. i do hope to be an author one day and in my spare time i do work on some non-HP stories i'd love to get published. in the meantime, HP fics helps me ALOT with my writing.
thanks so much once again and i hope that you continue to read my stories ^_^
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Hey . I have been waiting since forever for an update.. And thought it was finally time to give a review...
Lol so u seee it is awesome ... I really love it...
How about u make a fan page for it on Facebook ..??
U can update us there too ... I mean u don't have to post the stories ther just an update about them or something ...
Anyways hope to see the next update soonAuthor's Response: I am so, so, so sorry for not updating. I have started writing the next chapter, but right now I really have a lot of work to do (essays and revision). I will try to finish and post as soon as possible, but I really don't know what that means right now. Again, I apologise.
A Facebook fan page sounds interesting. Thanks for this idea, I may do it. In the meantime, you can look at my author page to see where I am with writing/posting the next chapter. Instead of personal information, I usually write where I am with a chapter and roughly how long it will be until I post.
Thank you so much for your review and I apologise once again for the lateness of Chapter 15. If I would have no work, writing it would be the first thing I would do.
Merope :)x Report Review
Nice one ,,, and that kitten is soo cute ... Imma eat it up
But u need to update alil bit more frequently :PAuthor's Response: I know, I'm trying to make frequent updates but it's hard because there are so many other things on my plate. Hopefully it doesn't bother you too much... Report Review
Ok I loved otherwise engaged ... But I am not enjoying this one soo much.. That's because I don't want this girl ruining her life. Don't get me wrong I know killing is not a good thing but I seriously want her to lose this baby... Mayb she could have one after u r done writing the whole thing :P .. Please please please I beg u... Don't ruin her life please please please change the story lineAuthor's Response: I am so sorry you're not satisfied with the story, I really am. But I can't change it now, I'm afraid :/ I wish I could please every single one of my readers, but alas, that is impossible .. :( I am sorry, though.
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Ooopsie I forgot that I had already read this.. But anyway I love this one.. It's awesome... I always liked hermione/ Fred but I like dramione more :PAuthor's Response: Lol no worries :D I've always liked Hermione/Fred too! Report Review
Nice I really liked it.. Hmm the best part is that in the end both of them realize their mistake :D hope u write more stories :) (please don't mind the spelling mistakes , I am not a native speaker)Author's Response: Awh, thank you! I'm so glad you liked the end, I wasn't too sure about it, so I'm glad it was ok. Thankyou for the review, and your spelling is excellent! :D Report Review
Lol they'll eventually find out right anyways I sent u a link on ur hotmail Id please have a look at it n update soon :) Report Review
Lmao I know this movie... They wre studying law in the movie :P :DAuthor's Response: Haha yeah it's one of my favorites xD. Yup!! Hope you're enjoying the story. :)
Too much of repetition :( (I hope I did not make a spelling mistake there) :PAuthor's Response: oh well i don't really like this story im just trying to finish it soon
as u r my favourite author.. i want to give u some awesome DRAMIONE pics i found. for this story :P lemme know how i can send them n where.. :PAuthor's Response: Oh, thank you, honey :D
Wow! Okay :D my email is written on my authors page(apparently, it's not allowed to post your email in comments...).
Or you could add 'Maria Fiction' as your friend on Facebook :) It's an account I've created to connect with you guys at hpff ^^
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Mmmm I really liked ur summary but u c I am sooo confused ... With the narration I don't really understand who is narrating n about what... But I guess it's Al talking about rose or sumthing. Shit I m so confused o_O... I am waiting for u to enlighten me... :DAuthor's Response: Sorry for the wait. School stinks. But, this is James reflecting on Al's suicide. Does that help? I hope you liked it. Report Review
hey i like your story.. it seeems different :P .. i hope u'll update soon n wont keep us waiting :P Report Review
Dude are u serious umust be an Indian to pick up thenane Mira kapoor... I was just goig to skip it as it was a James and oc fic as I am scorp/ rose fan.. But then as I am an India, I thought why not give a try to a name which resembles an Indian name .. Uh.. Bunk that I just wanted to say u did a nice job I really really really liked it dude . N erm ignore my errors ... I am not a native speaker :P :D keeep updating plz plz plz plz make it as fat as possible :P Report Review
Hmmm nice chap. Sometimes I wish i I could write like u guys but I guess m better off Reading ;) nice workAuthor's Response: Thank you :)
Aw, darling, I'm serious when I say that my secret is; PRACTICE, PRACTICE, PRACTICE. I've tried a lot and failed a lot. But you know what's the true failure? To stop trying ;) So keep on writing! You'll get the hang of it eventually :)
Good luch, honey.
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erm... arent the kidnappers suppose to die because they are not there in draco and hermiones listAuthor's Response: lol, already answered this sweetie, read the reviews, you'll see what I posted! Report Review
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