This is the first luna/rolf I've read and I love it! Luna is really hard to write, and I think you've portrayed her really well. And I love Rolf :) can't wait to see how things are gonna play out. Please update this story eventually - no pressure, I know you have a ton of WIPs, but don't forget about this one! Report Review
This story is really amazing and creative and hilarious so PLEASE keep trying to write it :) I love it and have to know how all this is going to play out! Writer's block sucks, but you can push through it - we believe in you! ;) Report Review
Perfect ending! The letter was a brilliant way to wrap it all up and this last chapter definitely tied up any loose strings. All in all, a thoroughly enjoyable story to read and congratulations on finishing it! You must feel very accomplished :)Author's Response: Thank you ^.^
I do feel that way. It's been two years in the making. Thank you for all of your reviews and all the time you spent reading my story. It's greatly appreciated. Just..thank you! --Jenna Report Review
And it comes full circle! Really amazing :) I can't wait for the last chapter, its been wonderful to read all this time :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter should be up very soon. :) --Jenna Report Review
I love this story so far! Percy is spot-on and Audrey is wonderful too. They're absolutely adorable together! Please keep writing this, it's really good :) definitely a deserved Dobby winner! Report Review
Good second chapter! I think her parents reactions are pretty accurate. Can't wait for the next update! I want to see more interactions between Victoire and Teddy - and more about him running for Minister!Author's Response: Thank you!
Good, I'm glad you liked that. I had a lot of fun writing writing about Bill and Fleur. So much, in fact, that in the next chapter...well, you'll just have to read and find out ;D
There will definitely be more about Teddy. He is an important character and should be butting into the story a few more times...or a lot...
~Miss Muggle Report Review
Great first chapter and interesting start - I honestly did not expect Levi to be Teddy's son! I'm looking forward to seeing how this all plays out. Onto the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoy my story. Keep reading!
~Miss Muggle Report Review
Two more chapters? :D Looks like I caught up just in the nick of time! I'm really looking forward to how you're going to end this, but no pressure; you've done everything so perfectly up to this point, I have complete faith in you! I'm sure it will be amazing, and I have a feeling I might cry :)
And props to Regulus for standing up to Bella! And Orion - you gradually made him into a really interesting character throughout the story, and I'm sorry to see him go. Stupid canon. lol ;)Author's Response: Yes you did. ^.^
These last two chapters are seriously the most difficult thing I've ever written, just because there's been 80 chapters worth of build up and tension, I'm terrified to have them turn out anything less than the others. :(
Thank you so much, and yes, sometimes Canon is quite unfortunate. :'( --Jenna Report Review
I love the comparison between Kreacher and Regulus - quite powerful, I think. Now would be a good time to say that this is honestly one of the best fanfictions I've read - if not the best :)Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Your reviews are amazing and I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story. :) --Jenna Report Review
Oh, and I thought I was addicted to this story before! It's brilliant that Regulus learns about Horcruxes from his father - I was wondering how you were going to have that happen, and it's completely believable and realistic.
And Anthony's back! I'm torn between thinking he's a ghost or a figment of Regulus's imagination... or a combination of the two. Now onto the next chapter, I'm dying to read on! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Initially when I was planning this story, I really struggled for a realistic way to bring the knowledge to him. For some reason, him digging around and learning about it, just didn't seem Regulus' style. :)
Hehe, again, you already know the answer to that one. :D Thank you so much! --Jenna Report Review
Oh, Anthony - making me smile even long after his death... And Barty! That little rat! I'm quite angry with him right now. Really curious as to what's in the book and, as always, as to what will happen next! Great chapter :)Author's Response: I would say "you'll see in the next chapter" but you've already seen the next chapter, so you know that. Lol.
Thank you so much!! --Jenna Report Review
Good second chapter! I like how it switches back and forth between present day and flashbacks - and Sirius's plan sounds hilarious just from the snippets that we heard. Can't wait to see how the rest of this plays out :)Author's Response: Thank you! :) The next few chapters will be similar to this, with snippets of flashbacks/the operation. Hopefully it won't dissappoint! :D
~Khanh Report Review
Good chapter :) I liked the letter from her dad: Very interesting and I can't wait to find out what he did! For the time being, though, it's a great subplot and something to speculate about.
I liked the girls joking around when they were sitting by the lake - it was funny and completely reminds me of my own friends... :P And the boys' prank-related mathematical genius made me giggle - I could completely see them doing a survey like that!
I liked the scene with Sirius - it's cute how bent he is on discovering who the girl is :)Author's Response: Thanks very much! :)
-becky Report Review
Regulus's task is kind of ironic to me, because I just read somewhere (like, this morning) that you're most likely to be murdered by a member of your own family on Christmas Day... -_-
Well, it seems you really can't keep anything from Voldemort. But I hope that nothing happens to his son... that would be heartbreaking :'( I'm interested to see how this all plays out!Author's Response: O.O Seriously? That's scary as heck!!
Considering who the kid grows up to be *coughRogerDaviescough* I'd say he's pretty safe :D
Thank you so much! Hope you enjoy the rest. :) --Jenna Report Review
Haven't read this in a while and forgot how good it was :) Really enjoyed this chapter. I love how worried Barty is about him, but I'm starting to question his motives now that it's been brought up by Regulus.. and: I'm just hearing voices in my head, no big deal! XDAuthor's Response: Aww thank you. ^.^
Barty's always up to something. Even if it's just something little. ;)
Eeep...*innocent* Report Review
Great beginning! Quite hilarious - especially her grandma's advice... where do you come up with this stuff? :P Looking forward to the next installment!Author's Response: Thank you for such a nice review! :) Ideas seem to pop into my head at the most random moments. xD The next chapter is in the works, and will hopefully be up soon!
~Khanh Report Review
Love Mumford and Sons, and the song, though I would've never thought of it for Snape/Lily - but you've made it work perfectly! Very sad and very good little one shot songfic :) Loved it!Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much! I think it fits him well, I dunno. :) I'm so glad you liked it! Report Review
I love Mumford & Sons and this is one of my favorite songs of theirs :) I like Lee/Alicia because I've never read it before, so it was good to see something different. At first, I was a little wary of characters quoting the song in dialogue, but I warmed up to it toward the end. Over all, nice one-shot! :) Report Review
I had to read this because I LOVE Mumford & Sons (and this song is one of my favorites - along with all their other songs) and I liked this story, too! It's interesting how Rose is using him like that, and it fits with the lyrics perfectly. Well done! Very good one-shot songfic :)Author's Response: Oh I know, they're just amazing aren't they? Love them. I'm really glad you liked the story too, thanks for the review! :) Report Review
Ah, so I'm to assume that Pompfrey knows about Iz's condition... I want more of her past (Iz's, not Pompfrey's... obviously), her family life, the origins of her abilities, etc... Coming soon, I hope? :) Looking forward to the next update this is an intriguing story and very different. Report Review
I wonder if there's more bad blood between Galen and the Marauders or if it's just because he's a Slytherin...? Either way, I'm sure the clashes between them will be great. So another good chapter!
P.S. Noticed you A.N. - I used to have a pet rat :) They're fun, aren't they? Report Review
Haha, that was fun :) So the Draci marten thing is her animal familiar? Another good chapter, I like the story so far. Report Review
Cute :) Izora and her friends have an interesting dynamic... I'd like to see more of that! And I hope the Slytherin in Galen will show :) It's a little strange that the Marauders have latched onto her all of a sudden, but... eh, whatever. She's interesting enough for them, I guess. Good chapter! Report Review
Ooh, I have the feeling that her special abilities are going to make for a very interesting story! Good chapter :) Report Review
interesting start, I'm intrigued :) Especially as to how her abilities are her father's fault... Onto the next chapter! Report Review
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