hello there! sorry i haven't reviewed for ages.. really, i am!
it's just that i had exams and was off on vaction right after that, i never really get the time to R&R!
but now i'm back and woah! the story sure has progressed! lily is being a real * and i felt really sorry for poor james.. i mean, is that really all she understands him? how can she still have snape overweight him...
i really felt sorry for maylea! i knew she was gonna be scarred!
i just hope that what james yelled at her might have gone into her brain and knocked some sense into her...
anyway, update soon!
fannaAuthor's Response: That's totally fine, I'm sorry I haven't updated in ages. I'm working on it though! I WILL HAVE THE NEXT CHAPTER FINISHED (but not uploaded) BY MY BIRTHDAYY!! (which is tomorrow (so I better go write))
But anyway, I'm sorry my story is making you all uurggghhh It may or may not get better from here. You just have to read the next chapter to find out! ^_^
Katie Report Review
i'm sure you've forgotten about me by now.. and i can't blame ya either, i've been one lousy reader...
it's just that i had exams... and then was on vacation and..
but back and ready to read and review!
and my the story is progressing quite well!
i'm really loving the increasing bond between lily and keira... the way she let go of everything she was holding inside her in front of keira.. it showed that lily was truly comfortable with keira and that she had complete trust in her..
and then the sweet moment smoothly transited into a much more light hearted comedy one, with the arrival of padfoot..
seriously, i grinned and laughed so much throughout the scene that my cheeks were hurting.. :D
lol, it was so like sirius to grasp the opportunity and rub on lily's legs (earning a scowl from james) and nuzzling into keira's chest...
and then in hogsmead, the way he smirked as he looked at keir and henry.. well, let's just say that i found pads VERY entertaining in this chapter..
but even though i want keira and sirius to be together, i like henry as well..
and i wonder how you plan to have things play out in the end..
anyway, update soon!
fannaAuthor's Response: I COULD NEVER FORGET ABOUT YOU!
I'm so glad that you're back, and like what I've written. I'm enjoying writing it, so i'm glad you're enjoying reading their relationship, too.
Ah, Padfoot. He's wonderful isn't he? Agreeing to help out James and then rubbing himself against Lily's legs. Such a cheeky puppy. :P
Haha, that seems to be a consistent thing in my reviews. Everyone's like, 'do you have to get rid of Henry? Because while I want her with Sirius, I really like him too...' Hopefully the next few chapters will be up to standard, as a few more things start to develop from here on (or I think so, anyway.)
I'll try and finish the next chapter this weekend!
- Adele :) Report Review
am i glad to see another chapter up... and that too after the reply you gave me in the last review.. :)
but i can understand lina's feelings... after so much drama and misunderstandings, she finally got together with him.
to find what?
her boyfriend nearly dying because his whole family had tried to murder him and they had been torturing him ever since he was a kid but he had never even bothered to share that information with her?
that is a pretty low blow for any girl...
but, like always, the black charms are irresistable and i found myself melting along with lina...
it was an awesome chapter, but the sneak peak was what really got me going... i mean, REMUS grinning MISCHIEVOUSLY?
THAT would be something to read about.. :D
so don't make me wait too long and update soon!
fannaAuthor's Response: Hi there! I'm glad that you reviewed. I'd been missing your reviews ;)
Yes, I know how Lina feels. Well, not really. But, my best friend ever been in her position and I kinda interviewed her to write this chapter, so I know what it feels to be Lina. You feel like betrayed, because your boyfriend doesn't trust. Poor Lina :(
But, as always, the Black charms are too hard too resist. I think I'm in love with the idea to write a little cute scene of Sirius and Lina. I bet every girl would be melting if Sirius charmed them. Because, I know I would :D
I'm gonna post the next chapter tomorrow (20/07/12). I have this assignment I have to finish. I really do prefer to post another chapter than doing that cursed assignment. Oh well..
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Sophie Report Review
oh! another chapter.. that's quite a pleasant surprise.. and it was a nice one too...
i'm glad to see that my prediction that padfoot would be starting to get more and more fond with out very own turtle is turning out to be true.. :P
turtle can sing? woah! first quidditch and now a talent for singing and handling magical creatures..
you really DO have watch out for the quite ones don't you? ;)
anyway, update soon!
PS: you might just want to start responding to the reviews.. most readers find it impolite if they go through the trouble of reviewing and they don't even get a response! just a little piece of friendly advice.. :)Author's Response: Eeep! Thanks! Sorry about that, was off the site for a while. I keep meaning to thank you for your reviews, they're always great, and it's fantastic to have someone review every time :) Report Review
this is like the third time i'm typing this review, so it ain't gonna be that long...
but anyway, first of all, i would like to apologise for not reviewing sooner.. i just had exams and then i was off on vacation, so yeah, i was hella busy!
but no fear, i'm back and ready to R&R, and boy has the story progressed!
james and lily no longer hate each other but are now together, and sirius and alex are strong as ever, and yet, the dark cloud is still hovering over their happiness reminding them of their future.. really it's heart breaking!
and those damned death eaters.. don't even get me started.
and the worst part is that james's mum was pregnant.. :(
it just so sad to see the guys to broken and unstable..
ah well. update soon!
late but ever loyal,
fannaAuthor's Response: dont worry about not reviewing sooner, i just love that review at all! thanks for all your comments :) Report Review
yeah, that pretty much explains my expression throughout the chapter... from when james and liy revealed that her parents were now under his parents protection to where pads let's all out to madds...
really, even i didn't realise he let it get to his head that much, even though i did guess that his family would be related to why he was sulking..
fanna Report Review
about bloody time! i thought you had given up on the story or summat!
but you're back with a bang, i see!
i started off reading with a worried expression; what the heck happened to lily?
and then i'm like.. oh, it's the hangover...
then i smile at james cuteness and grin when opens the window to tell the world what lily said...
and i feel sorry for dirk... poor guy doesn't know that voldy's got him in for his life...
and the i'm surprised at pads behaviour... why is he acting like this..?
good thing madds followed him..
and then as the chappie ended, i felt a suspicion... is pads behaving like this because his family is full of death eaters including reg?
any way, reading on,
fanna Report Review
ok this chapter was BLOODY AMAZING!
really, i don't have enough words for it!
everything was Fabulous; from james landing in detention, telling lily that he happy to do it for her, replacing himself with evie, remi's outright honesty to james, her joy at evie's placement in the team, them making up (i swear i nearly cried) annd then to the match..
man, i've read hundreds of fanfics, nearly all of them having at least 4 matches but this one?
i'm just speechless! there's no way i can tell you what a wonderful job you did on that one! i was totally IN it, right there, laughing with the griffies, enjoying fleet's commentary, feeling sorry for old mcgonagal who was shouting herself hoarse.. and cheering with every goal! really, fleet got one thing right; that girl plays dirty and i LOVED it!
and then sirius and evie.. they have so many complications to their love and yet sirius is so fully and sincerely in love with her that i feel like giving him a hug..
although i'm sure, with sirius's personality, that he will decide to go with her... he would never let her go alone...
anyway, i just realised that i wrote half an essay, so yeah, update soon!
PS: sorry if i'm late in reviewing... just had my exams and then went to a tour to the UK...
well, let's just say that i was hella busy and just got free.. :) Report Review
yay another chapter!
though it did feel a bit rushed though!
anyway, the chapther was a good one!
i loved the way james punched eric out of sheer jealousy... but eric got a one up in my book for being resistant for the sake of lily and trying his best not to rise to the bait. really, lily needs to appreciate the guy more!
someone needs to push alice onto the bandwagon with frank. really, the girl needs it.
alex's character development is going fine, but she needs her powers showing up soon or readers fight forget about them soon!
fannaAuthor's Response: Thank you! I love you haha and I love your reviews, you always give me brilliant advice! and don't worry, a lot will happen in the next chapter so I hope it makes up for this one (: xxx Report Review
yup, i'm dumbstruck and i just fell in LOVE with this story all over again...
padfoot was so sweet and understanding, it's hard to believe that he's the same womaniser from the beginning of the story...
really right now i have no idea where this plot is gonna lead to but there's one thing i'm sure as hell of, is the fact that i'm gonna be loving every minute!
fannaAuthor's Response: I think I just fell in love with your wonderful reviews all over again! Sirius has grown a lot emotionally since the beginning of this story, and I think that really came through in this chapter. But fear not, because he's going to be a complete noob once more in the coming chapters, because for some reason, I enjoy torturing my leading couple with communication issues! Report Review
i'm speechless. no, really, i am. this was one HELLA AWESOME chapter!
really, it was sizzling it was like a house on fire! (see what i did there? ;) )
it was totally worth all the torture of having fillers before, cause really, this was a very emotionally important chapter and you totally did justice to it..
the comments, the dance, the embrace and the kisses... really, everything was explained well, both emotionally and physically!
hats off to you for that!
can't wait to read more!
fannaAuthor's Response: I DID SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE! And yeah, you're right. Other than the fact that I enjoy torturing you all with fillers, they were necessary because this chapter is a whopper in the emotional department. And thank you so much for loving this chapter! It was one of my favourite to write! Report Review
thank goodness pads is back! the "new" sirius was annoying the hell out of me...
and jason... well lets just say that if cappie ever get back with the git, then she deserves a good bashing as well.
loved the party sequence!
and there was quite a LOT of character development in this chapter..
let's just say it was worth the wait!
fannaAuthor's Response: The 'new' Sirius was supposed to be annoying and wanting people to hurl things at him :P I'm glad you think it's worth the wait. Hope you like the new chapter :) Report Review
hi there! remember me? no? well, i can't blame you, i've been one lousy reader for quite a while.. first exams came up and then i went of touring over france and the UK...
and well, i couldn't really review...
but oh boy, has the the story progressed!
it went from arguing, fighting lina/pads and lover boy jamsie after lily to happily in love lina/sirius and ego+emotionally fed up and hurt jamesie fighting with lily all the time!
an the way you pulled off the whole sirius-running-away-from-cold-hearted-parents thingy was amazing!
really, i could almost FEEL the pain!
late but ever loyal,
fannaAuthor's Response: Hi Fanna! Of course I remember you. You're one of my constant reviewers. And for me, those who keep on reading and reviewing deserve a place in my heart ;)
Yeah, I understand you can't review or read my story. Exams are the Cruciatus curse teachers give to us. And it's summer, by the way. I be you're summer was amazing. Mine was lousy.
Well, thanks for reading or reviewing! The next chapter (chp 32, if I'm not mistaken), will also include a little sneak-peek of chapter 33. And the next chapter, maybe until chapter 36, will be all about comedy and the Marauders + dear Napralina and sweet Lilian! I hope you'll like it ;)
Till next chapter!
Sophie :) Report Review
ah, hello again!
you might have forgotten me (or worse, given up on me) and not without reason, either..
i sure am late in reviewing aren't i? it's just that i had exams and then my dad took me touring across france and the UK...
well, let's just say that i've been hella busy.
but i'm back and boy am i glad to see another chapter added to your story..
really, it was awesome! i started off with a feeling of dread and i was like "girl, you're a goner now... malfoy's gonna be using this as much as he can"
and then when draco was harrassing poor mione, my hormones were going into an over dive!
and then i practically felt confused and frusturated along with hermione, did the conga when she gave old lav lav a verbal smack..
but at the end, i think i detected a little bit of hurt on draco's side... i dunno whether it has anything to do with feelings for mione or not, but it's sure to hurt his ego!
can't wait to read more!
late but loyal,
fannaAuthor's Response: Fanna, how could I forget/give up on you? Of course I remember you! Reviewers are like angels to me, and that makes you five-times-an-angel ;). You see, I didn't like this chapter much myself. The events were there, but I felt I hadn't put enough charisma in my writing. But your review makes it all better! I'm glad you get Hermione's emotions (poor girl!) and as for Draco's reaction... you guys were NOT expecting that, were you? I'm not even sure if Draco was! Report Review
LMAO! really, only sirius can think of tying people together so they can work their problems out! really,
by the way, maylea has taken quite a turn, hasn't she? she's much more daring now! wink wink.
i'm glad to see that things are finally getting better.
remus, he has quite a guilty conscience doesn't he?
i guess he can never forgive himself for being a werewolf.
ah, reading on.
PS:sorry for not being here for such a LONG time! really, i was just busy as hell with exams and stuff..
but now i'm back and ready to R&R. :) Report Review
AWESOME FANTABULOUS CHAPTER!
really it was awesome! pads is such darling!
millie's character development is going great! i feel like i almost know her now and i can mostly predict her reactions...
and you fly for that! :)
you, sly devil, you!
torturing us with a filler when were starving for the ball like a man starving for food!
but it's ok, i understand!
you need to get up hanging before you give the treat..
just-- update soon, ok?
fannaAuthor's Response: I SHALL UPDATE SOON!
And it's good one of us can predict her reactions...
And well, I do enjoy the torture fillers create... Report Review
awww.. it the end already! i'm sad to realise that there will be no more chapters for me to read!
but it was quite a sad end...
i was happy, though, that you didn't give the story some cheesy end but kept it more realistic.
really, this will be a story i'll always remember..
loyal for ever,
fannaAuthor's Response: Im glad you liked it. I know it is sad but it seemed the only way for things to go. Please read some of my other stories if you are even interested. Forever grateful. Report Review
i take back my words, THIS is the best chapter! really, it had me totally lost into it...
and the white house sounded scary but endearing at the same time...
and sirius.. lets just say that i have no words to describe how much i love him!
fannaAuthor's Response: I actually really liked writing this chapter. And I'm glad you got that sense about the house. I wanted to make it sound like the house itself was feeling really lonely and forlorn.
AND SIRIUS IS MY KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR! Report Review
aww... i love sirius!
and millie sounded just like i do when i'm dragged off to shopping.
well, can't wait suspense is killing me..
fannaAuthor's Response: The shop assistant was partly based on when I go shopping with my mother... and I'm the shop assistant in this scenario Report Review
yeah it's fillery but hey, i understand! get studying, pass the exams with good marksa and come back to make out days again!
nah, i LOVE sirius's POV.
and Mrs.P rocks!
fannaAuthor's Response: I felt that an entirely fluffy chapter was needed just before I jumped into the really meaty plot-development chapters... Report Review
awww... AWESOME CHAPTER! best one yet, if i dare to say. i absolutely LOVED mrs. P and her relation with all the kids.. really, she sounds like such a dear!
PS: i still miss snuffs!Author's Response: I love Mrs Potter too! I think I love how much Sirius loves Mrs Potter more though... he's too sweet for words!
And Snuffles... he's turning into a bit of a Regulus situation, isn't he? Report Review
YAY!!! millie said YES! :DDD
i'm so happy (even though i know she's gonna do a millie and curse herself for saying yes later on)!
can't type much, got to read on..
PS: i missed snuffles!Author's Response: OF COURSE MILLIE SAID YES! How could she not when Sirius is just so adorable and sweet?
And you're gonna have to wait a while for Snuffles' return! Report Review
hello! i'm back and ready to R&R. sorry i didn't come sooner! had exams and all (you would know).
but really, i knew this was gonna happen, i never expected to enjoy it this much!
the way you depict prongs and pads relationship, honestly it's wonderful!
and i loved the scene between snuffs and millie!
well, i'm reading on.
fannaAuthor's Response: I'm completely with you on exams! Isn't it enough that we learn it in the first place?
I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it so much! I had a good time writing it. Snuffles' behaviour is largely inspired by my own dog, so this chapter holds an extra special place in my heart! Report Review
ah. the pain and agony of having voices inside your head that try to knock sense into you but you end up acting like a raving lunatic.
poor letta. i truly sympathise with her... ;)
it's been a while since you've added another chapter.. i'd almost given up hope that i would ever get more of this to read!
but it was totally worth the wait!
fannaAuthor's Response: I know, I'm so sorry I haven't updated recently! I've just been so busy. But I promise the next chapter is almost ready to go! Thanks so much for the review, I really appreciate your feedback :) Report Review
woah! this chapter sure made me realise the whole impact of this story!
alex has really bloomed! from quite and mysterious, she has gone to open and daring... this chapter was fantabulous!
the way mayfield seduced regulus, the way pads felt jealous and possessive but didn't even realise it...
really, it was totally worth the read!
keep writing and keep happy.
fannaAuthor's Response: Awh thankyou! I was really unsure about this chapter but I'm glad you are supportive of it ^-^ Report Review
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