I love your story. It was very cute and well-written and I liked where you ended it. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing it with us. 10/10. Report Review
I love it so much! The way that you changed the story is amazing and the characters are exactly how I pictured them. You're an amazing writer, especially because you write the talking how it would sound. 10/10 Write soon :)Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it! I know this story hasn't been updated in a while, but I feel that I'm ready to continue writing again. All thanks to readers like you! Report Review
I love your story. The way that Scorpius and Rose are with each other is very real and I can imagine it being a real life relationship.
Rose's family's interrogation was hilarious. Frankly, it sounds scary. Scorpius has nerves of steel.
The story was very good, but felt a little unfinished in this chapter. Overall, though I loved it :)Author's Response: Yeah, I was a little afraid that it would feel a bit unfinished. I think I'll leave it for a few days and then take another look at it - hopefully I'll be able to tie the ends up more neatly.
Thank you so much for the review. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story, and as I said in response to your other review (again, thank you for being the first review on the new story!), I really hope you enjoy the sequel as well. Report Review
Very good first chapter. I love how they definitely have differences, but they work through them. They're a very realistic couple and you're a great writer. I can't wait to see more :)Author's Response: Oo, first review for a new story! ♥ Thank you!
I'm glad you felt that it was solid as a first chapter, and I'll try to get the next one up next Wednesday. :) Report Review
Wow. Clemence as the replacement? That is great. She DOES seem to enjoy Al ;)
I love this story. The banter between the two of them is so hilarious and has greatly extended my vocabulary :) It seems that Al should be in Slytherin, too, because he is just like Clemence. They're both manipulative and scheming. I love it. Please update soon! 10/10Author's Response: Just when things couldn't get crazier~
Hee, I love dropping the occasional big fancy pretty word in, and sometimes I wonder if it's too obscure but then I think to myself WELL that's what context clues are for.
There isn't really anything that says Slytherins are manipulative and scheming - people seem they are not an *evil* house, and I've never been fond of JKR's one-sided treatment of them. They do tend toward the cunning. I like the idea of Slytherins just looking out for themselves first, which others can construe as selfish. But this is also why I don't believe Albus to be a Slytherin; he's motivated by other things, like "a greater good" (at least in his eyes), curiosity, etc.
Thank you for reviewing! :3 Report Review
I love this story so much. I really enjoy seeing the story through Al's eyes. I think it's really cute how nervous he is and the story is so well written. I can't wait for the next chapter :)Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm currently working on a new chapter so hopefully it will be up soon. Report Review
This is my all time favorite fanfiction. I loved the way that Sirius and Laura's relationship was gradual and that they got to know each other. I was really sad about Laura's death in the end, but when I read the short story collection and Sirius met up with her after death, it was really great and I liked it a lot. You're a magnificent writer. Thanks for the story :)Author's Response: Thank you! I'm thrilled that you like my story so much, and also that you've read the one-shots that accompany it. At least that way we get a happy ending, right? Thanks again. :D
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You're right. There is no excuse for you not updating ;) That is an amazing story and I was practically going through Enemies with Benefits withdrawls. 10/10 :) Report Review
I love this story so much. The way that Clemence and Albus interact with each other is hilarious and so amazingly written. I cannot wait until you finish the story. I really want to know how it turns out.Author's Response: Ah, I'm so glad you like it! Thanks! :) Report Review
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