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Review #1, by greekobsessedTrain Wreck: Being Proactive

22nd January 2012:
So I really like this plot line but the writing seems a bit...underdeveloped. its like ur in a hurry to write the major plot points like james and cassia getting together or her tellin dom and freddy and her brother. Also theyre reactions are not very realistic quite honestly. I do really like this, but elaborate more. Tell the audience what cassia is thinking and what facial expressions are being made or how it feels to kiss james. Ya know, things like that. :)

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Review #2, by greekobsessedStill Delicate: The Other Side of Normality

20th January 2012:
No!
How can this be!!!???
Ah! I just might die!!!
Some updating needs to go down!! Like stat!!
Oh man. Oh man oh man oh man.
Btw I love this story!! Just so ya know :)

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