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Reading Reviews From Member: Wrackspurts

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Review #1, by Wrackspurts

26th March 2012:

Hia, I really like the story so far. You've done a good job of describing anorexia despite never having been through it. Anorexia is a really complicated issue and it's normally about feeling in control. It would be nice to find out the underlying cause of Hermione's illness at some point because it's not really about food and weight - that's just the focus. I'm writing a similar fanfic myself and would love you to take a look.

Author's Response: Thank you for mentioning the control and underlying problems. I actually know about those, but uhh... forgot. And I will check into your story, thanks for your time and reviewing.

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Review #2, by Wrackspurts

Past in the Present: Prologue

19th August 2011:

Absolutely love it. Masterfully written. I think you've captured the relationship between Ron and Hermione really well as it would have been after the battle. 10/10

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Review #3, by Wrackspurts

Perfection: Black Out

29th July 2011:

Hey, I really like your story so far! I know you have more chapters uploaded and I'm going to read them next, but I just wanted to say that I think you've captured what it's like to live with an eating disorder really well. I'm writing a similar story at the moment called "The Secret World of Hermione Granger". Maybe you could take a look?

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