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Review #1, by Serendipity1234Animal Magnetism: Owls, Presents and Sharing Secrets

30th January 2012:
Wow. I love this story so much. All the characters are just so unbelievably adorable!!!
James and Alice make such a cute subplot :) I love how James is all smitten and Alice is completely out of her element -unsure and confused, yet obviously pleased. I just want to hug her every time she blushes!!
Lucy is hillarious and endearing. It's incrediy annoying that she doesn't realize Al likes her (the palm reading thing was a pretty obvious example of flirting) but I love that she doesn't because I feel like I would be just as clueless in that sort of situation.
In another chapter l could just not stop laughing after reading this:
"“Keep up genius, I was paying you a compliment.  Thanks to your bespectacled father, you have just a little more subtlety than your dear cousin over there;” I indicated over my shoulder towards Louis with my thumb, “And as for your hairline, well that was just a general example for the purposes of illustrating my point; your reaction however, indicates a deeper anxiety about the whole hair-loss situation.  I’d see a specialist about that, you obviously have issues.”"
ABSOLUTELY HILLARIOUS. I love it!
So perfect...and it fits Lucy so well.
I could go on and on forever about all the things I love about Al. He's adorable, funny, sweet, smart, a great friend, great cousin, amazing gift-giver...I'd better stop. I think you get the picture: I LOVE him!!
My other favorite sub-plot is Jane and Louis. I love Rose and Scorpius, but I think Jane/Louis is slightly more completely adorable.
I love that everyone has someone too. Well except Molly...but anyway I like how there are so many little subplots and while they're all a bit alike in some ways, they all have their unique qualities too.

I'm dying to read about that new years party! Please update soon??!?!?!

Author's Response: Whoah! Huge review! I love it :D
I'm glad you like how clueless Lucy is, I made her like that on purpose but it seems to be a quality that gets mixed reviews. I don't know if people prefer their heroine's to me completely clued in and super confident but I actually think the insecurity and denseness when it comes to all things romantic is much more realistic.
I'm also glad to hear you like all the little subplots. It might seem a bit cliche` but this story really is meant to be pure fluff so that's the way it's gonna go! :)
Thanks for the review and please keep reading!


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Review #2, by Serendipity1234Everyone Has a Secret: Relationships and Qudditch

2nd January 2012:
Hi :)

I love your story so far!! I'm so excited to see this plot work out. I love how you worked in so much background and introduced so many characters so quickly.

I really like Rose and Dom. And even James, despite the fact that he seems really immature. He's a funny character. I'm looking forward to learning more about all of them. Especially Scorpius -he seems really ridiculous. Like a five year old boy pulling on Rose's pigtails. At least I have the impression that he has a crush on her. I really hope he's not bothering her just to be mean.

Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love when people tell me that they like the characters:) I'll be updating really soon! Thanks:)

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Review #3, by Serendipity1234The dreamland of angels: Act 8 - The secondary effects of shockwaves (part 1)

27th August 2011:
Hi
I was wondering if you can tell me how to make banners like the ones for your story? I see them on most stories and I was wondering what program people use?
I have photoshop and paint, or if there is a website that you use to make them or download a program, I really want to try it. Both for things like banners and just making cool pictures =]
I love the effects used in them..
If you know how they're made and are kind enough to share your knowledge, I'd be happy to make you one for this story or another of your stories.
I really love this one.

And can you please try to update this story soon? I'm addicted to it =]

Author's Response: hello, it good to hear from you again (im working on the story i promise, the next chapter is almost finished.) Alas, im very much ignorant when it comes to banners and such. Those beauties in ym stories are made by talented OTHER people ;D
Artists that make banners for the authors at this site are the ones at The Dark Arts forum (there is a link in here, at this sites home page - i see it at the far left) You should probably ask them, i think they have tutorials and all kinds of things to help you improve as an artist.

good luck!


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